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i must conquer these
cataclysmic explosions
of emotional turbulence
when my eyes rest
upon your face
beauty in disguise
my heart can't help
but beat once more
yet i fear this
closeness, i've been hurt
i know the pangs of
losing that which
we hold dear
but my mind does
not listen to reason
wanting to hold you
close
so i dive heart first
into the unknown
hoping to make it
last i have but one
request for this tired
soul
be gentle and fierce
cataclysmic explosions
of emotional turbulence
when my eyes rest
upon your face
beauty in disguise
my heart can't help
but beat once more
yet i fear this
closeness, i've been hurt
i know the pangs of
losing that which
we hold dear
but my mind does
not listen to reason
wanting to hold you
close
so i dive heart first
into the unknown
hoping to make it
last i have but one
request for this tired
soul
be gentle and fierce
Published 22nd Apr 2016
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22nd Apr 2016 11:02pm
Very beautiful poem Schizo, you have a knack for writing love poems.
Each line was simple, but still enough to make such a masterpiece.
Great job :)
Each line was simple, but still enough to make such a masterpiece.
Great job :)
22nd Apr 2016 11:07pm
the knack comes from merely losing so many that it gives me the motivation to write what i wish to be true
anywho thank you, you praise a simple poem of mine above its worth
anywho thank you, you praise a simple poem of mine above its worth
22nd Apr 2016 11:12pm
I think that's great motivation to help you write for these kinds of pieces.
But I think this one does deserve it because to me it is worth it.
But I think this one does deserve it because to me it is worth it.
22nd Apr 2016 11:18pm
it is now not so much when it was happening lol
thank you, you appreciate my pieces more than others and i am grateful for that
thank you, you appreciate my pieces more than others and i am grateful for that
22nd Apr 2016 11:21pm
22nd Apr 2016 11:28pm
i like your poems and style it has a certain "look at me" type quality that traps my attention
22nd Apr 2016 11:33pm
22nd Apr 2016 11:37pm
not in that sense lol a better way to put is have you seen a rose-or anything for that matter-that looks intriguing and beautiful that you cant help but look at it
22nd Apr 2016 11:42pm
I know I was just kidding lol :)
Ah ok I get it now, in that case I'm very flattered then lol
Ah ok I get it now, in that case I'm very flattered then lol
22nd Apr 2016 11:47pm
bad with getting jokes sometimes
yea its has that allure for sure, you are an amazing poet btw
yea its has that allure for sure, you are an amazing poet btw
22nd Apr 2016 11:53pm
It's ok :)
Sometimes I feel my humor is a little too quick to the point where I don't even get it lol.
Thanks, but then again so are ;)
Sometimes I feel my humor is a little too quick to the point where I don't even get it lol.
Thanks, but then again so are ;)
22nd Apr 2016 11:58pm
I've never been good at humor although as a kid i always wanted to have a comedic side alas the books called to me lol
thanks :) its still really rare that i have people tell me that
thanks :) its still really rare that i have people tell me that
23rd Apr 2016 00:03am
Lol you kind of still have one either way just it comes out randomly I guess.
As a kid to now I've been both a book worm and someone that was into comedy.
Your welcome :)
As a kid to now I've been both a book worm and someone that was into comedy.
Your welcome :)
23rd Apr 2016 00:16am
yea either way i guess it came out alright cause if i think about it had i never gotten to books and writing i would probably not be here and talking to you which would be a shame :)
23rd Apr 2016 00:26am
Oh that would be a definite shame ;)
Same for me I guess,
If I never took interest in poetry, writing, and reading then maybe I would never be here talking to you.
Same for me I guess,
If I never took interest in poetry, writing, and reading then maybe I would never be here talking to you.
23rd Apr 2016 00:34am
I'm glad then that we both became book worms and got into this world of magic and prose, defining our lives with the stroke of a pen :)
23rd Apr 2016 00:42am
