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Hells' Bitch
naked, shivering cold hands
wrapped tightly about me
sucking my warmth
numbness darkens my days
you were the fire that I sheltered in
now it's blackout with you
you've shut me out
why you matter to me
I'm not sure of
the sun is shouting at me obscenities
casting a glare on all my flaws
I've fallen into a pit of despair
why must you toy with me so?
what is my transgression Sir?
is fucking with me so much fun?
I've been collaring my aggression
my demons biting me
for holding my tongue
you will never know another like me
taste flesh so seductive
though I won't be used for just eye candy
then disposed of just another set of tits and ass
for you to notch on your belt
of women you've cast aside
I have intelligence and taste
fire that can warm or burn
it's your choice
deciding I've outgrown games
play with yourself
literally stroke your cock
wave it in another's face
see if they take the bait
I'm no fucking fish I'm not biting
I'm a shark swimming in your psyche
aloof you put up a tough front
I see through it
third eye wide open
the powers that be speak to me
you need to hunt for weaker prey
I can't play a whipped ass, pussy cunt
for your pleasure
if you were a true Dominant
I would gladly submit to you
though I stand proud
until I'm collared and leashed
I will run naked
sending out my tendrils
someone will put me in my place
My Master for now darkness
safety in it's chains
warmth in it's creamy goodness
feeding my pussy
licking my soul
feasting in hell
the Devil owns me
smacks me down
the way I like it
I'm a hard headed submissive
not easily broken
a wild mount
may I be eternally ridden in hell
Published 14th Apr 2016
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14th Apr 2016 6:23pm
You're as wild as they come, Crim. You seek a worthy Master and he's out there somewhere. Might take awhile to find your match. Hell's Bitch deserves the best!
16th Apr 2016 00:33am
14th Apr 2016 6:53pm
That's some disrespectful ass shit!!! you really need to be put in your place.
but crowfly is right, you need a true master. obviously that boy toy you had was out of his league
but crowfly is right, you need a true master. obviously that boy toy you had was out of his league
16th Apr 2016 00:34am
14th Apr 2016 7:12pm
Goddamn Crim, you are like a
woman who hasn't had it given
to you good in way to long and
now, you are letting it all out.
Back and badder-ass than fucking
ever... BRAVO
Respect... Dantalion
woman who hasn't had it given
to you good in way to long and
now, you are letting it all out.
Back and badder-ass than fucking
ever... BRAVO
Respect... Dantalion
16th Apr 2016 00:34am
Anonymous
14th Apr 2016 9:41pm
Therrrrrre's my girl!!!!!! My Beautiful Brenda....this dug into my core and the images that flew...
"deciding I've outgrown games
play with yourself
literally stroke your cock
wave it in another's face
see if they take the bait
I'm no fucking fish I'm not biting"
*
"smacks me down
the way I like it
I'm a hard headed submissive
not easily broken
a wild mount"
~ this kitty purrrrrrs over lines like this - is it possible for me to love you any more? In the list!
With love always - Taryn xoxo
"deciding I've outgrown games
play with yourself
literally stroke your cock
wave it in another's face
see if they take the bait
I'm no fucking fish I'm not biting"
*
"smacks me down
the way I like it
I'm a hard headed submissive
not easily broken
a wild mount"
~ this kitty purrrrrrs over lines like this - is it possible for me to love you any more? In the list!
With love always - Taryn xoxo
16th Apr 2016 00:35am
15th Apr 2016 00:50am
16th Apr 2016 00:36am
my Darkest Lord Hades a wicked delight having you grace my ink with your thoughts thank you..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
15th Apr 2016 1:10am
Raw, is the poem, and Epic is the comeback. . .Welcome home, Miss Crim. . .~xo, Devlin.
16th Apr 2016 00:37am
15th Apr 2016 2:46am
I must say, I was thrilled to see you back and active once again, Crim! The stroke in your pen has a way of creating movement, on a canvas that magnifies the imagery to those who bare witness to your lovely words ....
16th Apr 2016 00:37am
15th Apr 2016 4:08am
Goddamn!!! Yea, Always knew you weren't an easy piece of ass Crim but you're clearly a hot as HELL piece of ass! lol
16th Apr 2016 00:38am
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15th Apr 2016 9:09pm
a sexual hurricane of a poem, certainly one to set pulses racing - mine included :-)
16th Apr 2016 00:41am
Anonymous
16th Apr 2016 2:04am
Brenda, goddamn!! it's like you never left.. this ink burns Crimsin.. and warms my soul.. only you could pour gasoline on my heart, and make me want more.. take a bow my dear.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
16th Apr 2016 5:14am
aw Dave thank you for enduring the burn and loving me still..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
