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Woman On Top
Both feline and felonious, she takes her time
Fingers coaxing a firm response
Stroking forth a rod
Her tongue teases the tip
And her lips slide to leave their lipstick trace
Then roll off as he further stiffens
Loathe to allow a quick conclusion
She then straddles him and rides
Maintaining her poise as he bucks
Every upward thrust a thrill
Her cunt capturing every inch
Embracing the sudden hot torrent
A tribute to the woman on top
His consort, lover and Queen.
Scene from "Cemetery Man"
Fingers coaxing a firm response
Stroking forth a rod
Her tongue teases the tip
And her lips slide to leave their lipstick trace
Then roll off as he further stiffens
Loathe to allow a quick conclusion
She then straddles him and rides
Maintaining her poise as he bucks
Every upward thrust a thrill
Her cunt capturing every inch
Embracing the sudden hot torrent
A tribute to the woman on top
His consort, lover and Queen.
Scene from "Cemetery Man"
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Re. Woman On Top
19th Mar 2016 8:11pm
First off... I LOVE The Cemetary Man. Such an amazing film. And Anna Fulci there. OMG!!! I fell in love in that moment.
Ok. Now that I got my excitment out. Your poem certainly celebrates the very position of the gloried goddess in all her beauty from below. Well done Crow.
Ok. Now that I got my excitment out. Your poem certainly celebrates the very position of the gloried goddess in all her beauty from below. Well done Crow.
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19th Mar 2016 8:21pm
"Cemetery Man" is a great film, particularly Anna's big scene, enough to raise the dead. But there are several women that would look regal on top, seems to me. Thanks DPW!
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19th Mar 2016 8:12pm
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Re. Woman On Top
19th Mar 2016 9:48pm
I love you so very much. Sexy....breathless...makes me want to do bad bad things to you Thomas...
Very naughty things.
Very naughty things.
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Re. Woman On Top
19th Mar 2016 10:03pm
Echo Drunkenplaywords. The scene as you described could take place anywhere a horizontal position is possible. Liked poem regardless, and the pic suggests one naughty angel! This makes a change from stories about the reverse, of women whose backs 'died in 1863'!
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20th Mar 2016 00:48am
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Re. Woman On Top
Anonymous
20th Mar 2016 1:48am
Wowzers Crow!!! I have to watch this movie for sure.......you've described the scene very sexy hot......pic is delightful.......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Woman On Top
23rd Mar 2016 6:51pm
So many seconds of sensation and dimensions therof that blur when we make love properly. The details matter, the fine points are what last. This is especially well conveyed in the lines
And her lips slide to leave their lipstick trace
Then roll off as he further stiffens
Loathe to allow a quick conclusion
She then straddles him and rides
Maintaining her poise as he bucks
Every upward thrust a thrill
Every moment of attention attends to the thrill.
"First love doesn't count. Only last love counts."
And her lips slide to leave their lipstick trace
Then roll off as he further stiffens
Loathe to allow a quick conclusion
She then straddles him and rides
Maintaining her poise as he bucks
Every upward thrust a thrill
Every moment of attention attends to the thrill.
"First love doesn't count. Only last love counts."
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