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Inevitable
So many times I've tried
To go only where I belong
They tell me over and again
This is wrong, This is wrong
They tie my hands
And Bind my feet
To prevent fate and I
From our meet
How This life,
Has taken its toll
I'm just a body
Containing no soul
How can the inevitable,
Be such a sin?
So I digress,
And begin again
To go only where I belong
They tell me over and again
This is wrong, This is wrong
They tie my hands
And Bind my feet
To prevent fate and I
From our meet
How This life,
Has taken its toll
I'm just a body
Containing no soul
How can the inevitable,
Be such a sin?
So I digress,
And begin again
Published 17th Mar 2016
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17th Mar 2016 11:54pm
18th Mar 2016 00:28am
Anonymous
18th Mar 2016 00:34am
Brilliant write.. nicely done..
Dave
Dave
18th Mar 2016 00:43am
18th Mar 2016 2:30am
18th Mar 2016 11:22am
18th Mar 2016 2:58am
How this one is so relatable
glowbaby.
I've been down this road many
times... am traveling it now.
Great disclosure... dantalion
glowbaby.
I've been down this road many
times... am traveling it now.
Great disclosure... dantalion
18th Mar 2016 11:24am
4th Dec 2016 4:41pm
Like you, I too can relate to the struggles of growing up in a world which does its best to shape everyone into convenient preformed holes.
As a critique, "To prevent fate and I" would flow smoother if it were "me" To prevent fate and me" because it prevents me from what ever. It would also be grammatically correct. Hope this helps. Hugs.
As a critique, "To prevent fate and I" would flow smoother if it were "me" To prevent fate and me" because it prevents me from what ever. It would also be grammatically correct. Hope this helps. Hugs.
