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Wish Infinity
Murder me on Thursday
Let the cold stare of Saturn
Tear the darkness from the scratches
Of her sadness from my breaths
And let me breathe
One last time
against the night
before the abyss
whispers
her silence
She will never hear
the staggered cries of
jagged wishing
always missing
what was never there.
Let the cold stare of Saturn
Tear the darkness from the scratches
Of her sadness from my breaths
And let me breathe
One last time
against the night
before the abyss
whispers
her silence
She will never hear
the staggered cries of
jagged wishing
always missing
what was never there.
Published 11th Mar 2016
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11th Mar 2016 11:31am
12th Mar 2016 11:10am
This is so good. I love the way it is crafted- the internal alliteration, the sounds of 'Saturn/ sadness/scratches'' and 'abyss/whispers/silence'. It compliments the subject matter so well. And it pulled at my heartstrings too! Very well done.
14th Mar 2016 3:53am
Damn Sam...I look forward to buying your published works. I'm not kidding...this is really fantastic.
