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Pleasure Indifference~
Life makes inconsistent burnt offerings
choices incessantly seem biased
decisions always appear lopsided
amidst burlesque faces.
Acoustic accountability-
not so obviously penned
my language becomes my sin
then the silence that’s golden…
gets thrown in
narcotic winds,
in a numinous flicker
of pleasure indifference.
He characterize the heritage
of my abiding resistance.
Soft sighs of comfort
caught me,
embedded passages
within segments of affection
castrated
left stagnated
until he evokes them,
seducing me to reflect on them
but when I journey
through crossroads titled friendship
and all it contributes to
is revitalized wooing,
his identity converts into the chasm
that lust, respect, admiration and love
ruptures within me.
Rain~
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 8th Mar 2016
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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Re. Pleasure Indifference~
8th Mar 2016 5:48pm
"The cross roads entitled friendship" is an intriguing path indeed
Love your descriptions
"Burlesque faces.."
"Narcotic winds"
Love your descriptions
"Burlesque faces.."
"Narcotic winds"
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Re: Re. Pleasure Indifference~
hey there whales, good seeing ya! In this case, sometimes we need to be reminded when in a relationship, the friendship should be stroked daily. Thank you! :)
Re. Pleasure Indifference~
8th Mar 2016 6:03pm
metaphorically rich
deep with meaning
conflicting sentiments
clashing..
mind rehashing
...
powerhouse you are
with that pen Rain
just outstanding poetry
time and again...
..
deep with meaning
conflicting sentiments
clashing..
mind rehashing
...
powerhouse you are
with that pen Rain
just outstanding poetry
time and again...
..
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Re: Re. Pleasure Indifference~
What a kind and appreciative thang’ to say, Naajir! :) Your words energize my pen constantly, thank you hon!
*arguments tend to pull several different emotions at the same time.*
*arguments tend to pull several different emotions at the same time.*
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2016 6:08pm
Sexy Rain.....this is breathless my Lady.......such eloquence and grace as your ink drips across your page.......beaitiful words......enjoyed this so very much.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Pleasure Indifference~
10th Mar 2016 2:25am
Lovely comment from a lovely soul! :) Thank you so very much for the sweet and kind words, pprincess… xo
I shared the inspiration of this poem with you, so need to repeat! Love that you're a silent listener....
I shared the inspiration of this poem with you, so need to repeat! Love that you're a silent listener....
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2016 4:09pm
Thank you for the listening heart as well my sacred friend......appreciate you standing beside me thru trials of life......never with judgement......only with luv and kindness......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Pleasure Indifference~
8th Mar 2016 7:00pm
Offering of friendship that leads to revitalized wooing? I guess it is difficult for a guy to be"just friends" with a woman he's attracted to
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10th Mar 2016 2:27am
Anything is possible 3P, though I think it can be very straining on the one who wants more. “Revitalizing wooing” for me in this ink meant, never stop dating, and courting the one you love, even if married and years have passed. Thank you!
Re. Pleasure Indifference~
8th Mar 2016 8:15pm
I really didn't think you could
blow me away anymore (LYING!! lol)
BUT truly, THIS blew me Da Fuuuccckkkk...AWAY! lol
To coin UR phrase, Pen Love!! :)
blow me away anymore (LYING!! lol)
BUT truly, THIS blew me Da Fuuuccckkkk...AWAY! lol
To coin UR phrase, Pen Love!! :)
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Re: Re. Pleasure Indifference~
10th Mar 2016 2:29am
You just 'blew me away' with your awesome comment, Rich! ;) Thank you luv and appreciate you keeping her… ;)
Pen Love~ xo
Pen Love~ xo
Re. Pleasure Indifference~
8th Mar 2016 11:11pm
does this mean you love to hate him or hate to love him.....you Ms. Rain....are like smooth jazz on a hot summer evening...when you know something is about to happen
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10th Mar 2016 2:31am
lol...T, it means, in this particular moment I hated I loved him so damn much lol. Just playing, seriously, a spat with the hubby was the inspiration for this ink, though I do love how he softens me up, winning the round. Thank you for the lyrical love, T! I appreciate you listing her. :)
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10th Mar 2016 3:02am
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8th Mar 2016 11:45pm
A masterpiece of metaphor dazzling delights of verdant verbs you've surprised me again Rain when I thought I'd no longer be surprised by your talent. Silly me!
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Re: Re. Pleasure Indifference~
10th Mar 2016 2:35am
…and I’m always baffled at how much you stroke my little ole ego, making this woman giddy like a schoolgirl. Thank you my funnyman! Your constant support is felt deeply. :)
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Re: Re. Pleasure Indifference~
10th Mar 2016 2:36am
Hubby pissed me off, so yup, “conflicted” is an appropriate verb….lol….. But he does know how to seduce me into reflecting on the strength of our friendship, before we were lovers, mates and why I said ‘I do’ several years ago in the first place…Thanks Lady T, for lending me your beautiful brown eyes. Ink Respect~
Re. Pleasure Indifference~
9th Mar 2016 7:29am
fading affection, similar to the painting that you feature here.
it's the vaudeville, the burlesque of love...
it's the vaudeville, the burlesque of love...
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10th Mar 2016 2:38am
hello John, I guess they do fade/disappear in the heat of the moment until emotions subside, but when it’s real, it reappears around the corner, seeing if the coast is clear to come back out… lollol… Thanks luv….
Re. Pleasure Indifference~
10th Mar 2016 5:47pm
this is so beautiful to me Rain, to bounce back from bending and not breaking, nice...
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