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"Momma Don't..."
"Don't cry momma...
Believe me
I can understand
why you do...
But please dry those eyes
now I can watch over you...
Don't cry for me momma
you need to be strong to
carry on...
I know my sister needs
you even more now that I'm gone...
Don't cry, instead embrace
the time we had...
Sure there were tough moments,
but I'm hopin' the good outweighed
the bad...
Momma, try to sleep
n' cast away that oppressed dark...
I've asked God to clothe you
n' sister in a deeper faith
so your 'lights' will again spark...
I ask once more,
momma don't cry...
Though a physical me
has moved on, my spirit
will never die...
n' I'm watchin' over you all
in the place I now reside..."
*written for all (parents) who
face/faced the pain of losin' the
child, before they die themselves*
Believe me
I can understand
why you do...
But please dry those eyes
now I can watch over you...
Don't cry for me momma
you need to be strong to
carry on...
I know my sister needs
you even more now that I'm gone...
Don't cry, instead embrace
the time we had...
Sure there were tough moments,
but I'm hopin' the good outweighed
the bad...
Momma, try to sleep
n' cast away that oppressed dark...
I've asked God to clothe you
n' sister in a deeper faith
so your 'lights' will again spark...
I ask once more,
momma don't cry...
Though a physical me
has moved on, my spirit
will never die...
n' I'm watchin' over you all
in the place I now reside..."
*written for all (parents) who
face/faced the pain of losin' the
child, before they die themselves*
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23rd Feb 2016 8:59pm
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24th Feb 2016 1:02am
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24th Feb 2016 00:54am
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24th Feb 2016 9:49am
Thank you my sweetheart... I wrote it
after hearing a co-worker's son was shot n killed, but I wasn't sure if
she could handle any talk bout what happened or if I'd see her anytime soon, besides I know this happens ALL TOO often! So figured maybe it could offer comfort for anyone goin
thru this kinda tragedy. Appreciate u always my desirous one :)
after hearing a co-worker's son was shot n killed, but I wasn't sure if
she could handle any talk bout what happened or if I'd see her anytime soon, besides I know this happens ALL TOO often! So figured maybe it could offer comfort for anyone goin
thru this kinda tragedy. Appreciate u always my desirous one :)
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24th Feb 2016 1:27am
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24th Feb 2016 9:50am
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24th Feb 2016 9:51am
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2016 8:33am
thanks for writing & sharing this piece.
beautiful.
peace, Miki
beautiful.
peace, Miki
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24th Feb 2016 9:53am
My sweet Miki... I'm always very happy to hear from you, n of course
I love knowing u approve of my ink
considering that mighty pen you wield
:)... Thanks a bunch lady! :)
I love knowing u approve of my ink
considering that mighty pen you wield
:)... Thanks a bunch lady! :)
Re. "Momma Don't..."
24th Feb 2016 4:05pm
this is a very compassionate
and beautiful piece of writing bro...
a soul touching poem
indeed
and beautiful piece of writing bro...
a soul touching poem
indeed
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25th Feb 2016 3:36am
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25th Feb 2016 3:37am
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2016 5:50am
Life and love.. priceless.
Strongly felt.
Strongly felt.
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25th Feb 2016 9:17am
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27th Feb 2016 2:39am
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27th Feb 2016 9:47am
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Feb 2016 2:18am
28th Feb 2016 2:13am
I like this poem, the way it could be perceived as open ended. In other words I am left slightly guessing as to whether or not you have simply moved away to another town or sadly, a more permanent place in the sky. Either way, similar emotions can surface.
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29th Feb 2016 9:11am
It is written primarily for a co-worker
whose son was killed, but because this (losing our children) seems to happen so often I also hoped to offer
whatever comfort to others as well.
Thank you for the time n thoughts
on my ink, appreciate it truly. :)
whose son was killed, but because this (losing our children) seems to happen so often I also hoped to offer
whatever comfort to others as well.
Thank you for the time n thoughts
on my ink, appreciate it truly. :)
Re. "Momma Don't..."
29th Feb 2016 9:43am
This poem, luv, is almost too much for me to comment upon. You are so extraordinary, Poetikmind. Your deep caring for others is ever-evident and here no less so. :-*
Your prodigious talent affords you the ability to craft poetry on any topic whatsoever and create it to perfection as need warrants. What a tremendous gift you have, luv! :-* What a measureless ability and skill...
You pair this incredible talent with such a loving and caring sensibility and you create a poet extraordinaire... :-*
Tis what and who you are, luv.
Your prodigious talent affords you the ability to craft poetry on any topic whatsoever and create it to perfection as need warrants. What a tremendous gift you have, luv! :-* What a measureless ability and skill...
You pair this incredible talent with such a loving and caring sensibility and you create a poet extraordinaire... :-*
Tis what and who you are, luv.
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1st Mar 2016 2:08pm
Oh my dear sweetness... I treasure your reviews, n definitely your poetic voice! You are all what you proclaim me to be in my opinion, n I'm truly grateful for all you are... :)
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29th Feb 2016 11:52pm
This is so strong... Shiver...
A couple of days ago, I watched the movie "Brooklyn" that has a moment like this and now I read this wonderful, powerful piece.
God, is very strong. I don't know what else to comment on this.
Great writing and point of view...
Kiss and hugs,
Art
A couple of days ago, I watched the movie "Brooklyn" that has a moment like this and now I read this wonderful, powerful piece.
God, is very strong. I don't know what else to comment on this.
Great writing and point of view...
Kiss and hugs,
Art
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1st Mar 2016 2:10pm
Thank you kindly dude, BUT
keep the kiss...lol I'll settle for a BRO. hug n hi-five! lol
keep the kiss...lol I'll settle for a BRO. hug n hi-five! lol
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5th Apr 2016 12:21pm
oh my god Poe, my tears are falling in my coffee right now as i read this.
There's no one on this earth who couldn't feel this poem and be touched. Dammit, your pen knows how to reach deep down and touch that exact place where it keeps us all human and at same level. I don't think there's any bond more stronger than a parent to child and you showed it here, bravo!
There's no one on this earth who couldn't feel this poem and be touched. Dammit, your pen knows how to reach deep down and touch that exact place where it keeps us all human and at same level. I don't think there's any bond more stronger than a parent to child and you showed it here, bravo!
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5th Apr 2016 1:40pm
Aaaawww.... I send kisses to ur sweet tears my friend, truly appreciate ur heartfelt thoughts on this. :)