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Redundant: "Hole-Internecine"
...As it gathers
In the dwellings
of beast...
A soul, preambles-
sunken within depth's
arc...
In an instantaneous
act of subjective irony...
It mutilates, the very light
that permeated substance...
Published 2nd Mar 2016
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2016 11:24am
You'll reclined in a place
dispelled of light mate.
Think to have felt my hairs
rise again.
Oh you are good with versatile
skin. I see for and through.
Wow.
dispelled of light mate.
Think to have felt my hairs
rise again.
Oh you are good with versatile
skin. I see for and through.
Wow.
4th Mar 2016 10:53am
Thank you so much! I'm honored
you added my ink to your RL n for your growing support :)
you added my ink to your RL n for your growing support :)
3rd Mar 2016 11:37am
ya know, you're always so easy going, i [almost] forget how damn profound you can be
loved this poe
xo
loved this poe
xo
4th Mar 2016 10:55am
Aaawww... Me? Easy going!? Wow, never knew that lol... I'm happy you SEE in me what I don't my sweetness, n truly appreciate your undyin support! :)
4th Mar 2016 1:55pm
it's amazing how few words add depth and imagery... this piece is out of sight bro... and dark indeed *fist bump* :)
4th Mar 2016 11:37pm
Yea I agree, I'm always lookin to say even more with less all the time...
Of course sometimes it's necessary
to rant on n on lol... Thanks a ton bro. Truly grateful for your time n thoughts :)
Of course sometimes it's necessary
to rant on n on lol... Thanks a ton bro. Truly grateful for your time n thoughts :)
4th Mar 2016 3:04pm
Nice beautiful execution of feeling...I love how it developed and how the lines created emphasis to what you were saying. Nice as always
4th Mar 2016 11:38pm
