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The Road Back Home
you call to me from the depths
seeing you in my dreamscapes
enraptured by you
though I've let you down
I weep crimson tears
for the time lost
your spirit entwined with mine
licking at my soul
so close yet so far away
calling on me, calling on me
fallen and unreachable am I
needing your arms about me
knowing this is an impossibility
I fall away into the abyss
where I am cradled in loneliness
suckled at the throne of despair
my King I've missed you
my Goddess I've longed for you
lost in my mind
I couldn't reach you
my ringer off the hook
I vanished in my own madness
where I sought shelter
from the reality of never touching you
here is home
where we caress without hands
weeping and laughing as one
I love you, need you
I kneel before you
kissing your sore spots
bedecked in pain
I've traveled the land of forgotten
yet I felt your arms about me
while lost there
gracing me with a light
to find my way back
I'm home.
Published 20th Feb 2016
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20th Feb 2016 4:19am
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20th Feb 2016 5:12pm
beautiful one I love you so much I got lost for awhile though you were always close to my heart and soul..
thank you for showing me love still..
love Brenda
thank you for showing me love still..
love Brenda
Anonymous
20th Feb 2016 4:20am
Brenda, simply beautiful.. brought tears to my eyes.. just so excited to hear your words.. i've missed your voice.. glad you've came back home.. you were truly missed.. with love..
Dave
Dave
20th Feb 2016 5:13pm
Dave my brother you've touched my heart with your warm embrace I love you and thank you..
love Brenda
love Brenda
20th Feb 2016 5:01am
Crim, oh man. You have no idea of the light you have shined upon me. I am not ashamed to admit that I have missed you and I am overjoyed that you are back. Welcome home.
Hades.
Hades.
20th Feb 2016 5:14pm
Darkest Lord Hades so happy to be among you once again..
thank you for the love..
love Crim
thank you for the love..
love Crim
20th Feb 2016 5:35am
Breanda!!!
So happy you're home!
I missed you terribly. This poem is tender sister, really glad you're safe! We all love u and care abour you babe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
💕💕💕💕💕💕
😊😊😊😊😊😊
Love
Jackie xoxox
So happy you're home!
I missed you terribly. This poem is tender sister, really glad you're safe! We all love u and care abour you babe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
💕💕💕💕💕💕
😊😊😊😊😊😊
Love
Jackie xoxox
20th Feb 2016 5:15pm
20th Feb 2016 8:37am
She's Baaaaaaaccckk!! An wow right out the gate with a powerful
tear jerking piece!? Awesome to know u returned my dear :)
tear jerking piece!? Awesome to know u returned my dear :)
20th Feb 2016 5:16pm
20th Feb 2016 9:41am
it's a long dark road, Crim,
& dangerous.
we are joyful that you saw the candle
that we keep, burning in the window...
& dangerous.
we are joyful that you saw the candle
that we keep, burning in the window...
20th Feb 2016 5:17pm
thank you John you all were always near to my heart though I was a bit lost for awhile..
love Crim
love Crim
20th Feb 2016 11:10am
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20th Feb 2016 11:51am
20th Feb 2016 5:18pm
Oh gosh, beautiful words, and I don't know what happened to you, but I have no words, feeling so inadequate without the words to gift you as you have gifted us. May I also send you grateful wishes at your homecoming.
Jade
💐🌸🌷🌹🌻🌺🌼
Jade
💐🌸🌷🌹🌻🌺🌼
20th Feb 2016 5:19pm
20th Feb 2016 12:49pm
The ending gave me goosebumps
Glad you're back, we need you here, especially with quality writing like this ....
xx
Glad you're back, we need you here, especially with quality writing like this ....
xx
20th Feb 2016 5:20pm
my dearest Poet I've missed your dry humor and straight up talk..
thank you for welcoming me home..
love Brenda
thank you for welcoming me home..
love Brenda
20th Feb 2016 9:11pm
Crimsin, Oh Man, it is great to see
You back and to feel Your writes once
again infusing DUP's atmosphere.
I know that I went off on a tangent for
a while with some different subject
matter and a different genre but I thought
about You and wondered where You'd
gone to.
Very glad to see You back now.
Dantalion
You back and to feel Your writes once
again infusing DUP's atmosphere.
I know that I went off on a tangent for
a while with some different subject
matter and a different genre but I thought
about You and wondered where You'd
gone to.
Very glad to see You back now.
Dantalion
23rd Feb 2016 10:14am
dearest Dantalion so glad to be back and whole again..
thank you for being here for me my friend..
I'm enjoying reading your latest writes..
love Brenda
thank you for being here for me my friend..
I'm enjoying reading your latest writes..
love Brenda
21st Feb 2016 1:46am
I have to admit, this made me cry as well and Daves poem.Simply beautiful. I am happy you are here as well sweet poetry Princess. <3
23rd Feb 2016 10:15am
21st Feb 2016 3:22am
Seeing your ink tonight has overjoyed me!! I knew you could feel the energy here calling into the depths for you! Welcome home, Dearest Crim, I missed you terrible too. My heart and ears are always open to you. That is some beautiful rendering of ink for your return, sweetie! Love, blue angel xoxox
23rd Feb 2016 10:16am
21st Feb 2016 5:06am
what a powerfully emotional journey home piece, beautifully written and expressed - I have so missed you and your beautiful poetry - I hope you are back home here to stay :-)
23rd Feb 2016 10:16am
Anonymous
21st Feb 2016 7:00am
Great to see you here, Crim
Every line in this piece is well placed and filled perfectly. Sad and beautiful, this envoked so many emotions.
Nothing like being home
Peace and love x0x
Every line in this piece is well placed and filled perfectly. Sad and beautiful, this envoked so many emotions.
Nothing like being home
Peace and love x0x
23rd Feb 2016 10:17am
22nd Feb 2016 5:14pm
missed you crim de la crim, so glad you returned and your strength surfaced, missed your soul bearing and powerful emotional writings...
23rd Feb 2016 10:18am
...well many here at the DU jungle can breathe a sigh of relief now that you're *home*, you left many on life-support in your absence. :)
So happy to have you back, beautiful one!
xo
So happy to have you back, beautiful one!
xo
23rd Feb 2016 10:19am
23rd Feb 2016 10:32am
Powerful write Brenda, its good to see you back.. Its a hard road, the life one walks..
Thankyou
Thankyou
23rd Feb 2016 6:31pm
thank you Michael for the welcome home..
yes life can be tricky at times..
with love Brenda
yes life can be tricky at times..
with love Brenda
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2016 7:19pm
Substance to be and is.
A jubilee for those that
loves you.
A jubilee for those that
loves you.
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