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Before You Enter Me
Draw a bath
make it hot
with bubbles
undress me
slowly,
release my
troubling
thoughts,
from behind
put my hair up
messy bun
style,
place gentle
kisses upon
my neck ,
touch my
aroused
breasts,
feel my
wetness
before i get
in the water,
before you
enter me
make it hot
with bubbles
undress me
slowly,
release my
troubling
thoughts,
from behind
put my hair up
messy bun
style,
place gentle
kisses upon
my neck ,
touch my
aroused
breasts,
feel my
wetness
before i get
in the water,
before you
enter me
Published 7th Feb 2016
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7th Feb 2016 7:11pm
7th Feb 2016 9:38pm
7th Feb 2016 7:45pm
What man would not want to carry that out - I like the foreplay you have described in this way (thought it would read like this when I first saw the title).
7th Feb 2016 9:40pm
7th Feb 2016 8:16pm
Love your gentle form of eroticism Tommie. I think offering instructions is a good idea, making what pleases you known, eliminate the fumbling and guess work. This is a real turn on and I'm hoping for a follow up. Excellent work!
7th Feb 2016 9:45pm
You're so right Crow! Nothing wrong with
saying what you want and how you want
it.
I'm happy you liked this, a follow up is a must.
Got my mind working on it. Thank you 😊
saying what you want and how you want
it.
I'm happy you liked this, a follow up is a must.
Got my mind working on it. Thank you 😊
Anonymous
7th Feb 2016 9:07pm
Tommie Lynn,
Love the arousal you lay bare with your sensual words. Enjoyed!
tornado
Love the arousal you lay bare with your sensual words. Enjoyed!
tornado
7th Feb 2016 9:46pm
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22nd Feb 2016 3:34pm
Sensual and intimate and inviting. Bubble baths never seemed so enticing. ;) You are on fire! And it is starting a bit of a fire in me as I read...well done!
23rd Feb 2016 3:43am
It's nice to know you can feel the heat Sammy! I truly appreciate you reading me.
Thank you so much 😊
Thank you so much 😊
