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Natural Delights
Climbing up volcanic mountains to explore nature's scenery
Then sleigh ride down between the slopes into the forest in the valley
Once more rising towards their snow white covered peaks
Then diving down to flooded rivers and overflowing creeks
After drying off, rubbing sticks and stones together
To create waves of friction making sparks for a roaring hot camp fire
Toasting marshmallows and roasting hotdogs between twin hot crossed buns
You enjoyed the most, your favorite chocolate covered ones
In the end I popped your corn and buttered up your bun
And shook your un-popped kernels until they were all well done
The red hot embers burned throughout the starry night
Rekindling forgotten hearts with the glow of morning light
Then sleigh ride down between the slopes into the forest in the valley
Once more rising towards their snow white covered peaks
Then diving down to flooded rivers and overflowing creeks
After drying off, rubbing sticks and stones together
To create waves of friction making sparks for a roaring hot camp fire
Toasting marshmallows and roasting hotdogs between twin hot crossed buns
You enjoyed the most, your favorite chocolate covered ones
In the end I popped your corn and buttered up your bun
And shook your un-popped kernels until they were all well done
The red hot embers burned throughout the starry night
Rekindling forgotten hearts with the glow of morning light
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Re: Re. Natural Delights
29th Jan 2016 10:11pm
Thank you for reading, commenting and the add. I will be checking out your work soon.
I'm thinking of making this a bit longer, as it feels like it ends rather quickly, but it was just a spur of the moment inspiration that hit me after reading a comment on another of my poems. I do try to be tasteful in my erotic writings. Thanks again.
JJ
I'm thinking of making this a bit longer, as it feels like it ends rather quickly, but it was just a spur of the moment inspiration that hit me after reading a comment on another of my poems. I do try to be tasteful in my erotic writings. Thanks again.
JJ
Re. Natural Delights
29th Jan 2016 10:58pm
you spun a story - took me on a trail and I want more!!! curtsy bow to you!
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30th Jan 2016 7:57pm
Thank you feenix! Perhaps I will write a part 2, then spin them 2gether into one tall tale... jj
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2016 1:37am
Ooooo JJ.....very creative with this......you're a great host.....enjoyed this yummy feast......xo :)

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30th Jan 2016 8:00pm
Re. Natural Delights
30th Jan 2016 6:35am
Rekindling forgotten hearts is one I can relate to, Poetryman...and the rest of the poem exude warm love :) enjoyed reading you as always
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30th Jan 2016 8:03pm
Thank you Grace! Glad you related and enjoyed! Always happy to see your smiling face in my forest...
JJ
JJ
Re. Natural Delights
30th Jan 2016 6:24pm
….and ‘Natural Delight’ was the perfect title. I’m loving nature's sceneries and how they became sensually-metaphoric in context. Just so damn creative, JJ! Takes cleverness and a unique mind to design this ink and make me a believer in your erotic thoughts. Mighty grand poem in my eyes...
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Re: Re. Natural Delights
30th Jan 2016 8:09pm
Ahh sweet Rain, your words always raise my spirits. Perhaps we should go hiking to the mountain top sometime... thak you for your very complimentary comment!!! JJ
Re. Natural Delights
31st Jan 2016 5:07am
twas a nice fucking journey
for those who understood it
laying in between
snowy white sheets
did it bleed
finally virgin she
for those who understood it
laying in between
snowy white sheets
did it bleed
finally virgin she
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31st Jan 2016 5:25am