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Rain in Rhythmic Rhyme
How delicious words can be as they roll across your tongue
and glide amidst your presiding lips
Vibrating back and forth betwixt your biting teeth
and humming with tremolo in your sultry throat
Filling the air with the scent of your sensual words
Tickling my ears with the rhythm of each syllable
as I get high on the imagery in your painted poetry
My mind aburst with colors from witnessing your verse
Sometimes the only truths that make perfect sense to me
Rain within the rhythmic lines of rhyme that you compose
and glide amidst your presiding lips
Vibrating back and forth betwixt your biting teeth
and humming with tremolo in your sultry throat
Filling the air with the scent of your sensual words
Tickling my ears with the rhythm of each syllable
as I get high on the imagery in your painted poetry
My mind aburst with colors from witnessing your verse
Sometimes the only truths that make perfect sense to me
Rain within the rhythmic lines of rhyme that you compose
Published 31st Jan 2016
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31st Jan 2016 10:17pm
JJ, this poem is everythang’ and I’m so honored! It has genuine admiration, respect and appreciation for a poet’s craft. It highlights the strength of words received, while accentuating and showcasing your very own ability and skillset to spill ink from the tiniest inspiration. Your flow in this ink is so soothing to the eyes and calming to my heart, and I thank you sweety! Your ‘comment’ has definitely inspired me and whenever my mind wonders off to its favorite place of lyrical-solitude, I will be spilling the sensual version of it. Poetic love~ xo
1st Feb 2016 11:08am
I was just thinking that new poets on the site might not realize how many truly great poems you had posted here before you deleted them all last year. They might be thinking I am exaggerating my praise and applause if they never got to read your work before. I am glad I had that opportunity and look forward to reading your poems into an infinite future here and in the afterlife!
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