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Choices, Choices
Ah, the gut-wrenching hollowness
of disillusionment.
Better fill it with drugs or sex or food or a bullet.
Or excuses.
of disillusionment.
Better fill it with drugs or sex or food or a bullet.
Or excuses.
Published 29th Jan 2016
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29th Jan 2016 8:52am
29th Jan 2016 3:24pm
Honey..i love this thought..and it is ripe in its brevity...just chock full of power my darlin....
Or excuses...great end....
V nice ink!
Step sis one...lol...cant wait to get started soon...
Love
Jennifer
Or excuses...great end....
V nice ink!
Step sis one...lol...cant wait to get started soon...
Love
Jennifer
30th Jan 2016 12:58pm
eXcuses are okay....i mean like 'what the fuck'
your brevity is nicely pointed
your brevity is nicely pointed
3rd Feb 2016 6:09am
I really appreciate this. You have a good, powerful piece here -- one that I think would have lost meaning had it been less succinct. The ability to make short, impacting pieces is a skill I envy.
Our writing can help us through the hardest times, as can community. Keep creating, and you'll survive the ebbs of life.
A.I.
Our writing can help us through the hardest times, as can community. Keep creating, and you'll survive the ebbs of life.
A.I.
