deepundergroundpoetry.com
FML
Fuck my life
And fuck yours too!
The goddamn strife
I don't know what else to do
I tried my best
So nobody would hurt
It rises in my chest
A bile made of words
I want to scream!
CAN ANYONE HEAR ME?!
This must be a dream
It's so fucking scary
I hate myself
Can stand who I've become
I'll do it myself
Give me the gun
I'm not afraid to die right now
I'm not afraid to burn in hell
It what I deserve for what I've caused
I'll pull the trigger with no further thoughts
And fuck yours too!
The goddamn strife
I don't know what else to do
I tried my best
So nobody would hurt
It rises in my chest
A bile made of words
I want to scream!
CAN ANYONE HEAR ME?!
This must be a dream
It's so fucking scary
I hate myself
Can stand who I've become
I'll do it myself
Give me the gun
I'm not afraid to die right now
I'm not afraid to burn in hell
It what I deserve for what I've caused
I'll pull the trigger with no further thoughts
Published 26th Jun 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 11
reading list entries 2
comments 32
reads 1468
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
26th Jun 2011 5:59am
Deep and full of emotion. I can feel the anger and understand the dying need for help. Great job.
26th Jun 2011 6:00am
26th Jun 2011 6:01am
26th Jun 2011 6:03am
I've heard that before. Other peoples decisions aren't my accountability
26th Jun 2011 6:07am
26th Jun 2011 6:11am
Thanks. Makes me feel really fucking good. I'm not going to kill myself, thats not the kinda person I am.. I'll be here til God takes me, and what a bittersweet day that'll be
26th Jun 2011 6:12am
26th Jun 2011 6:23am
26th Jun 2011 6:25am
26th Jun 2011 6:27am
26th Jun 2011 6:29am
26th Jun 2011 6:30am
26th Jun 2011 6:32am
If alot of people cared if I died, it wouldn't be such a small thing for me. I'm pretty sure I'd be eternally happy knowing they cared so much.
26th Jun 2011 6:35am
26th Jun 2011 6:37am
26th Jun 2011 6:38am
26th Jun 2011 6:45am
I've done and said all I can. But I refuse to believe I played any part if you choose to make that decision.
26th Jun 2011 6:46am
26th Jun 2011 7:29am
Smh. Sometimes I have to stop caring to prevent myself from getting heard.
26th Jun 2011 7:42am
26th Jun 2011 12:41pm
thats the hardest and biggest achievement to accomplish after being with an ex. but you gotta do it. i like the poem. it expresses the confusion and pain you go through after being in a complicated relationship with someone. message me madison.
27th Jun 2011 4:51am
i have felt like this alot. i deal with constant depression and i go to extremes. i appreciate this a lot.
Anonymous
29th Jun 2011 8:37pm
this is really good. depression sucks, nice to know im not the only one who has ever thought like this.
2nd Jul 2011 3:11am
you're like one of my favorite DU people, so.. DON'T BE SAD!!<3
guys arent worth tears, i can promise you that.
honestly i believe people have one person they will care about forever. mine is a.w.g.
idc what anyone says about him, if he is mine or not. im his, so i get it, but dont be upset!!
oh, & your poem rocked my socks, but i was disappointed when the last stanza didnt rhyme.
guys arent worth tears, i can promise you that.
honestly i believe people have one person they will care about forever. mine is a.w.g.
idc what anyone says about him, if he is mine or not. im his, so i get it, but dont be upset!!
oh, & your poem rocked my socks, but i was disappointed when the last stanza didnt rhyme.
2nd Jul 2011 3:15am
2nd Jul 2011 3:18am
soooooo im gonna take a wild stab in the dark and say you two broke up..? O.o
2nd Jul 2011 3:43am
2nd Jul 2011 5:49am
Funny! I have to admit, the title caught my eye... it was like "Come see a train wreck in slow motion!", so I came.
The poem was actually better than I thought it would be. Flowed quite nicely until the final stanza which got all clogged up and kind of brought the poem to a stuttering end. A pity.
The poem was actually better than I thought it would be. Flowed quite nicely until the final stanza which got all clogged up and kind of brought the poem to a stuttering end. A pity.
29th Dec 2011 3:28am
9th Jan 2012 5:57am
3rd Nov 2012 7:51pm
