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Messenger of Satisfaction~
She had the potential to liquify
if she could find the one to
monitor her heat source
She'd kiss him with her dewy
pink lips until he inhaled every
inch of her
Find her so your arms won't be
empty anymore let her fill your
quivering hands with sweetness
While you harvest her thighs she'll
sing a moaning song wrapping
her velvet limbs around you
She's an intoxicating messenger of
satisfaction together they'll
blossom as one
if she could find the one to
monitor her heat source
She'd kiss him with her dewy
pink lips until he inhaled every
inch of her
Find her so your arms won't be
empty anymore let her fill your
quivering hands with sweetness
While you harvest her thighs she'll
sing a moaning song wrapping
her velvet limbs around you
She's an intoxicating messenger of
satisfaction together they'll
blossom as one
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Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 3:43pm
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12th Jan 2016 6:28pm
Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 5:26pm
Tommie, I agree with Kitty. The tenderness in this passage, "Find her so your arms won't be empty anymore" is beautiful. A sensual triumph my friend! Bravisima!
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Re: Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 6:29pm
Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
Anonymous
12th Jan 2016 7:32pm
This is by far one of the best lines I have read in a long time
While you harvest her thighs she'll
sing a moaning song wrapping
her velvet limbs around you
You visually brought me there!
Very nice
While you harvest her thighs she'll
sing a moaning song wrapping
her velvet limbs around you
You visually brought me there!
Very nice
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12th Jan 2016 7:57pm
Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 7:40pm
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12th Jan 2016 8:00pm
Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 7:56pm
Brilliant Tommie - Class A erotic poetry right there. The sensuality oozes from your words, with the perfect balance between intimated sex, whilst keeping it saucily subtle! This absolutely rings my poetry bell.
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12th Jan 2016 8:02pm
Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 8:18pm
Hot. Favourite verses - latter three. Kept guessing whether he or she would be satisfaction's messenger.
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Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 9:54pm
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12th Jan 2016 10:17pm
Re. Messenger of Satisfaction~
12th Jan 2016 10:15pm
What a very cool way to write about
about love and downright affection.
I melted with each and every line.
about love and downright affection.
I melted with each and every line.
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12th Jan 2016 10:19pm