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Ours
Most of us come here every day
to escape life
to make life more interesting
to feel
Whatever the reason
this is OUR church
this is OUR sanctuary
When shoulders are cold
and doors get shut
this is OUR warmth
this is OUR open door
to escape life
to make life more interesting
to feel
Whatever the reason
this is OUR church
this is OUR sanctuary
When shoulders are cold
and doors get shut
this is OUR warmth
this is OUR open door
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Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 2:14pm
ABSOLUTELY!! Don't understand why I have never thought
of posting our poems as an alternative to organized religion.
But it sure does work for me. You conceived of a good idea
and put the words together to make it so very real.
Thank you, Tommie Lynn!
of posting our poems as an alternative to organized religion.
But it sure does work for me. You conceived of a good idea
and put the words together to make it so very real.
Thank you, Tommie Lynn!
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Re: Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 3:25pm
Having a rough day, the need for this write was strong. Thank you very much standingmyground. 😊
Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 3:14pm
A very nice pen tommielynn.
You have described the essence
and the sacredness that we here
on DUP have.
"When shoulders are cold
and doors get shut
this is OUR warmth
this is OUR open door" - liked this
Dantalion
You have described the essence
and the sacredness that we here
on DUP have.
"When shoulders are cold
and doors get shut
this is OUR warmth
this is OUR open door" - liked this
Dantalion
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Re: Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 3:29pm
Life is kicking my ass big time. Nobody should have to beg to be treated with kindness! Thank you hungrypan 😊
Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 5:57pm
Amen Tommie! I am fortunate to take a pew now and again to savor your poetry. Brava Soul Sister!
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Re: Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 6:18pm
Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 9:20pm
sanctuary: it's a good word & a good assessment.
we can feel the warmth between us, Tommie...
we can feel the warmth between us, Tommie...
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Re: Re. Ours
11th Jan 2016 10:59pm
Re. Ours
I'm in the confessional writing dirty poems
Got my thing out too
Powerful ink
Righteous Tommie
Got my thing out too
Powerful ink
Righteous Tommie
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Re: Re. Ours
12th Jan 2016 2:28am
Sweet baby Jesus, do your thing Poet! Hehe I always look forward to your comments! Thank you 😆
Re. Ours
12th Jan 2016 2:13pm
Whatever the reason
this is OUR church
this is OUR sanctuary
for who knows my madness, but the mad
for who knows me, but my tribe
this is OUR church
this is OUR sanctuary
for who knows my madness, but the mad
for who knows me, but my tribe
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Re: Re. Ours
12th Jan 2016 2:49pm
Re. Ours
12th Jan 2016 3:48pm
reminded me of a song... "Amen" by Halestorm
DUP is definitely an escape for me. Even if I just come on here to lurk.
loved this!<3
DUP is definitely an escape for me. Even if I just come on here to lurk.
loved this!<3
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Re: Re. Ours
12th Jan 2016 6:07pm
Thank you Kitty, I believe most of us come here to breathe....I know I do. 😊