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There's my baby, lost that's all
Once I'm begging you save her little soul"
And you did Mr. Bowie..
Many a my tired soul day...
When i'd tune in to you and ass shake,
Turning the drudgery of cleaning the kitchen..
Or order up, fryin some Neanderthal man's eggs..
Into a party of two..
Funky rhythm me..funky rhythm you..
Salvation there for sure.
So yes.
Tragic news to wake too darlin..
You will be missed by many..
A goodbye kiss if i had the chance..
And of course Mr. Bowie..one last ass shakin dance....
"Wop Wop Wop!"
Once I'm begging you save her little soul"
And you did Mr. Bowie..
Many a my tired soul day...
When i'd tune in to you and ass shake,
Turning the drudgery of cleaning the kitchen..
Or order up, fryin some Neanderthal man's eggs..
Into a party of two..
Funky rhythm me..funky rhythm you..
Salvation there for sure.
So yes.
Tragic news to wake too darlin..
You will be missed by many..
A goodbye kiss if i had the chance..
And of course Mr. Bowie..one last ass shakin dance....
"Wop Wop Wop!"
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 11th Jan 2016
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12th Jan 2016 00:24am
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12th Jan 2016 12:36pm
I just read it doll...so good. 😞👍 im very sorry for the obvious loss this is for you...
Love
J
Love
J
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12th Jan 2016 2:06am
Befitting tribute Jennifer style. He is undoubtedly amused he could make you move.
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12th Jan 2016 12:44pm
I loved Bowie's straight back 80's sway...
Play Golden Years on the reg to cook too...clean too. Fame...just love the funk ping lec licks.
Thank you darlin...
J
Play Golden Years on the reg to cook too...clean too. Fame...just love the funk ping lec licks.
Thank you darlin...
J
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12th Jan 2016 4:44am
It also hurt me to find he's gone. He was definitely larger than life. A beautiful tribute, filled with life, love & laughter. Well done, much respect,➰
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12th Jan 2016 12:45pm
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12th Jan 2016 5:31am
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12th Jan 2016 12:48pm
I dig that..God facilitate you forever..
Thanku..lovely.
And very perceptive about the name. But it has a dual..happier meaning as well..Calamity Jane is a heroine of mine...but it is a nod to my alcoholism. But recovery is a happy thing as well.
Much love US..
J
Thanku..lovely.
And very perceptive about the name. But it has a dual..happier meaning as well..Calamity Jane is a heroine of mine...but it is a nod to my alcoholism. But recovery is a happy thing as well.
Much love US..
J
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12th Jan 2016 5:33am
Gin calamitted me too on 1999 . But I recommend no sad usernames.
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12th Jan 2016 6:00am
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12th Jan 2016 12:49pm
😛 i loved yours Rose..was a great piece on its own..especially inhonor of one of my all time favs.
Love
J
Love
J
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13th Jan 2016 3:13am
It seems unreal to me that he's gone. Your poem is an ass shaking some kind of wonderful tribute to him. You put the joy in remembering him. I love you for transforming sadness into happy memories. You got the rhythm going. David would like that.
Love ya honey buns,
John
Love ya honey buns,
John
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19th Jan 2016 5:09am
ch-ch-ch-changes in the music now, for sure.
you got the funky down solid in this...
you got the funky down solid in this...
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Hey darlin...thank you sweetie...much appreciated.
John..i would love if you read my first pieces in a series im working on..
Instructions for slave, part 2 if you just read one...it is a lil long, the first one is not. I really respect you as a poet and am looking for as much feed back as i can get. Any suggestions welcome..trying to decide where to go with it. No hurry and no worries if you dont have the time. Thank you darlin.
Love
J
John..i would love if you read my first pieces in a series im working on..
Instructions for slave, part 2 if you just read one...it is a lil long, the first one is not. I really respect you as a poet and am looking for as much feed back as i can get. Any suggestions welcome..trying to decide where to go with it. No hurry and no worries if you dont have the time. Thank you darlin.
Love
J