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"What more could you ask for!?"
So yea...
Oohhh, Jingles fell,
jingles fell...
N I really hope
I don't get sued!!
But truth to tell
n' I know it well
MY good tiding's
overdue
all around the U...
So I just fell
into a inkin' spell
to spill a line
or few...
Oh what fun
it is to write a silly
now for the Underground
N spread it all around
A message of a very
Merry Christmas
N' Happy New Year
Cheers to all of you!!
Oh jingles fell
jingles fell... La la la la la... Lol
Oohhh, Jingles fell,
jingles fell...
N I really hope
I don't get sued!!
But truth to tell
n' I know it well
MY good tiding's
overdue
all around the U...
So I just fell
into a inkin' spell
to spill a line
or few...
Oh what fun
it is to write a silly
now for the Underground
N spread it all around
A message of a very
Merry Christmas
N' Happy New Year
Cheers to all of you!!
Oh jingles fell
jingles fell... La la la la la... Lol
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Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 9:30am
Very impressive! The over commercialization of the holiday would probably block any effort on my part to follow your lead. I do appreciate you staying on a positive trip here.
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Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 9:47am
Yea, I agree n still sometimes one just has to buck the system n say to hell
wit dem naysayers lol... Thanks bro.
Happy holidays to you :)
wit dem naysayers lol... Thanks bro.
Happy holidays to you :)
Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 3:33pm
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21st Dec 2015 8:02pm
Thanks dude, appreciate your stopping by n leaving a thought
I will return the favor soon :)
I will return the favor soon :)
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 10:22am
Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 8:04pm
Wow, maybe I should've 'adlibbed that lol... Thank u my sweetness, Merry Xmas to you :)
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
Anonymous
21st Dec 2015 4:26pm
lol...and happy holidays to you PIKM.
Cheers! You always make it fun :)))
Cheers! You always make it fun :)))
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Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 8:05pm
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 4:54pm
Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 8:10pm
Thank you sweetie, I'm happy you enjoyed my lil silly :)... Appreciate u much :)
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 8:53pm
You Know P, we've got to stay
true to ourselves and try to somehow
remain young in heart.
Your rendition is Welcomed here.
I'd say, do the 12 days of Christmas
but we're already almost there. Haha
Happy Holidays... Pan
true to ourselves and try to somehow
remain young in heart.
Your rendition is Welcomed here.
I'd say, do the 12 days of Christmas
but we're already almost there. Haha
Happy Holidays... Pan
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Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
21st Dec 2015 10:23pm
Believe it of not bro. THAT is what I've always been about, staying "young at heart" you'd be surprised at how being silly n making others crack up
gives me such a joy :) thanks bro. Ur
a truly outstanding guy n I'm proud to have your support n friendship :)
gives me such a joy :) thanks bro. Ur
a truly outstanding guy n I'm proud to have your support n friendship :)
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
22nd Dec 2015 11:48am
Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
22nd Dec 2015 1:57pm
Thank you sweetie! I'm happy you liked it, n Merry Merry right back atcha! :)
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
23rd Dec 2015 1:55pm
YaHOO! hehe loved this Po you Ol softy!!
Merry Christmas !!!!!!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxox
Merry Christmas !!!!!!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxox
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Re: Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
23rd Dec 2015 3:50pm
Aaaawwww yea well I'm only soft til
someone gets me 'hard' then I'm a beast lol... Thank you my dear :)
someone gets me 'hard' then I'm a beast lol... Thank you my dear :)
Re. "What more could you ask for!?"
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Dec 2015 6:17am
25th Dec 2015 6:14am
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year Poet!! You do make me laugh........this is brilliant like all your rest.......enjoyed it very much xo :)
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25th Dec 2015 1:31pm