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The Innkeepers (Senryu/Haiku)
They're there in their inn
Therein intending to tend
Their inn till their end
Therein intending to tend
Their inn till their end
Published 1st Dec 2015
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2015 11:01pm
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7th Dec 2015 4:06pm
8th Dec 2015 6:00am
Thanks, ahavati.
I tried to use as little sounds as possible. I've changed it some over time to make it all fit better, bit I still managed to keep it to six sounds.
There (all variations)
In (all variations)
Tend (includes "end")
ing (sigh)
to
Till (used to be " to", but "till" is a better fit)
I tried to use as little sounds as possible. I've changed it some over time to make it all fit better, bit I still managed to keep it to six sounds.
There (all variations)
In (all variations)
Tend (includes "end")
ing (sigh)
to
Till (used to be " to", but "till" is a better fit)
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