Fantastical

Some poets have the talent for conveying intense passion in their lines but are at a loss when it comes to their lives and loves.  It might just be their work one might be falling for, not the men themselves.  Their dismissal of you be could cruelty or indifference but, either way, the effect is wounding.    
   
" now I'm awash in disillusionment    
no longer stuck in a fantastical world"    
   
Maybe you can become stuck there once again, Crim.  The real world's overrated.  

you're right Sir Crow thank you for the insightful comment..

hopefully I can find my way back to the world fantastical :)

love Crim

Miss Crim, Miss Crim. . .*shaking my head*. . .Damn, Woman!. . .What a fucking poem!?. . .I actually got chills. . .And yes, a tear has grazed my eye (shame on you). . .It is poems such as these that I wish/would love to pen. . .So I'm forced to envy your "pen" for now. . .Please, please take a huge bow, Lady. . .You are well deserved, so much more than poetry;). . .Love to You, always. . .your Ally in Darkness. . .xo, Devlin. . .

"you can't hold back a tidal wave    
the tsunami in my panties    
my man fucks me hard and with passion    
still I see other's faces when the lights go out'

. . .Fucking~Fan~tastical. . .!
  

Lady Devlin My Queen I envy all of your writes lovely lady thank you for showing me and this write so much love :)

love Brenda

My Goddess Taryn I love you so much thank you for loving me and this write you really touched my heart..

love Brenda

Brenda, this is so powerful.. and the imagery is breathtaking.. you've really outdone yourself on this one.. i can't highlight a verse, because all of them are brilliantly penned.. with beautiful Crimsin ink!! who ever inspired this write, is a very special poet indeed.. this goes in the list.. with love..



Dave

thank you Dave for putting a big smile on my face with your comment :)

love Brenda

Powerful, stunning write.  

thank you graciously Ina :)

love Brenda

A lot of heart and great wording ^^
Thanks for sharing :-)

thank you most kindly DC :)

love Crim

'poetry that fucks you and walks away.'  are you kidding!!

I generally avoid using profanity in my comments,
but that line is so extraordinary I needed to echo it, Crim.
the wonder of it: reading it, saying it, imagining it...

thank you John for such a fantastic comment :)

love Crim

I will not walk away

thank you Kavik kind soul :)

love Brenda

Lock and load write

Full metal jacket Like

Xx

thank you Poet for making me smile with your comment :)

love Brenda

Crim, this is beautiful, soft, sad, intense, sexy, and somewhat a personal plea of emotions.
This ink is everythang', and I loved it!

thank you lovely Rain for getting this write :)

love Crim

thank you Sir what a wonderful interpretation of this write helping me further understand myself and feelings..

with respect Crim

Great poem Crim, love the opening metaphors. You need to help me understand this, is this poem about love and lust for a "polite" man while you're in a relationship. Or is this the imagination of an artist who fantasizes differently about her man.. or none of the above (haha)

aarti you got it right it's about lusting after a polite man while in a relationship thank you for getting this write :)

love Crim

"now I'm awash in disillusionment    
no longer stuck in a fantastical world    
where there is a you and I    
just poetry that fucks you and walks away" .. - I prefer the harsh fucking poetry provides; the ultimate illusion.. an artist must fantasize poetically while the fantasy walks away. Just love your artistic mind when it's inking reality. Love and hugs, blue angel

thank you lovely Angel for such a beautiful comment :)

love Crim

*sigh*
brenda, you beautiful being, so much heart in this piece of longing...
... so eloquent [&] emotive, it steals my breath
loved
xo

thank you beautiful Katja for showing me so much love on this write :)

love Brenda

the perfect poem with the perfectly descriptive title :-)

Fantastical :-)

thank you most graciously David :)

love Crim

love this cup brimming with emotions about the reality of fantasy, i think we all fall to the 'fantastical' (beautiful title btw) during points in our life whether it be poetry or movies, songs etc... ideas are one of the most powerful tools we have, you are lyrically talented... not a bad thing to fall in love with...

thank you Dean for such a beautiful and thoughtful comment :)

love Crim