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King Of Pain
you're the Master
that leaves my lips beg
my sin ravaged
by your dark embrace
entranced I follow you
into the depths
flames lick my wickedness
taste wanton flavor
on my knees before you
awaiting your command
I am the queen of nothingness
hungry for the King of Pain
upon your altar of steel
feasting writhing in lust
riding you into hell
as leather stings flesh
my Demon of want
picking up my scent
as it floats on the wind
sends you into a frenzy
plunging into oblivion
I feel your fire
see the glint in your eyes
I am bedeviled
in your darkness I'm alive
bleeding out lust
as cat o' nine tails
kisses skin blooming crimson
you are the King of Pain
I the queen of nothingness
together we reach
heights not know by mortal man
(inspired by the beautiful darksighs and my Goddess of erotica Taryn awe inspiring writing styles)
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 22nd Nov 2015
| Edited 23rd Nov 2015
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
22nd Nov 2015 6:47pm
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 3:34pm
beautiful one loving the spankins I get from you ;)
thank you for showing me and this write love..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
thank you for showing me and this write love..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
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23rd Nov 2015 3:35pm
Re. King Of Pain
22nd Nov 2015 7:05pm
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23rd Nov 2015 3:36pm
thank you Darkest Lord Hades I cherish your thoughts and visits :)
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. King Of Pain
22nd Nov 2015 9:43pm
"you are the King of Pain
I the queen of nothingness"
Love that ^^
Great write
I the queen of nothingness"
Love that ^^
Great write
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 3:37pm
Re. King Of Pain
22nd Nov 2015 10:33pm
If anything I would have said you're the Queen of Pleasure, Crim. I'm sure darksighs will be honored by this. Delightfully demonic work...
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 00:11am
A Queen of Pleasure who causes bittersweet pain to mortals maybe, but undoubtedly writes with a fiery sensual power of the divine!
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 3:40pm
thank you Sir Crow for the lovely compliment :)
the more I thought about it was the beautiful darksighs and my Goddess of erotica Taryn who equally inspired..
love Crim
the more I thought about it was the beautiful darksighs and my Goddess of erotica Taryn who equally inspired..
love Crim
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23rd Nov 2015 3:41pm
Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 2:01am
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23rd Nov 2015 3:42pm
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23rd Nov 2015 3:30am
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23rd Nov 2015 3:42pm
Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 4:07am
Crim, you never disappointed with that incredibly hot pen. It's chilly outside tonight, but you just raised the temperature in here.
This is the second piece I read inspired by the wonderful Ms Taryn and I love it! She's an amazing writer. Not familiar with Darsighs, but I look forward to reading her as well.
This was wicked in the best way mamacita ; )
This is the second piece I read inspired by the wonderful Ms Taryn and I love it! She's an amazing writer. Not familiar with Darsighs, but I look forward to reading her as well.
This was wicked in the best way mamacita ; )
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 3:44pm
thank you most graciously Lena my beautiful Taryn is something to behold indeed with her writes as is the lovely Darksighs :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 3:46pm
thank you most graciously Sir for the hot, seductive write you left me leaving me breathless..
with respect Crimsin
with respect Crimsin
Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 5:21pm
Brenda, very luscious write.. as always you deliver.. brilliantly penned, with beautiful crimsin ink.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
25th Nov 2015 5:02am
Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 7:37pm
strange: They make such a beautiful couple - only you could make this kind of wickedness cool :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
25th Nov 2015 5:03am
Re. King Of Pain
23rd Nov 2015 8:38pm
..unholy squeaks & dark nibbles to your squirmy perfection here, sexy Crim de la crème!
I am in lovely sighs to be a thought in your makings of this beautiful submit ..and? in smirk that you bit
no fingers from the spankings.. ;) *dark giggles while winkin'
"my Demon of want
picking up my scent
as it floats on the wind
sends you into a frenzy"
~you nail this one sweetly, omf!.. love the predator arousal from catching scent.. *hothot
"in your darkness I'm alive <~~ *rubbing this one gently wif luvs
bleeding out lust
as cat o' nine tails
kisses skin blooming crimson"
~epic in mind and felt deeply.. my fav w/your namesake in shine ;)!
Powerful titles Q-nothingness to K-pain, yet *you will always be my 'Queen of Dark Angels', Brenda!
My heart and muse smiles bc missed your spills of deviltry.. *mwah
This newest masterpiece of dark passions just begs to be further mauled, -- my RL must hoard it ;) ty!
loves you much,
~d
I am in lovely sighs to be a thought in your makings of this beautiful submit ..and? in smirk that you bit
no fingers from the spankings.. ;) *dark giggles while winkin'
"my Demon of want
picking up my scent
as it floats on the wind
sends you into a frenzy"
~you nail this one sweetly, omf!.. love the predator arousal from catching scent.. *hothot
"in your darkness I'm alive <~~ *rubbing this one gently wif luvs
bleeding out lust
as cat o' nine tails
kisses skin blooming crimson"
~epic in mind and felt deeply.. my fav w/your namesake in shine ;)!
Powerful titles Q-nothingness to K-pain, yet *you will always be my 'Queen of Dark Angels', Brenda!
My heart and muse smiles bc missed your spills of deviltry.. *mwah
This newest masterpiece of dark passions just begs to be further mauled, -- my RL must hoard it ;) ty!
loves you much,
~d
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Re: Re. King Of Pain
25th Nov 2015 5:05am
lovely d~ your comments are pure poetry alone thank you beautiful lady for showing me so much love on this write..
love you lady..
xoxo Brenda
love you lady..
xoxo Brenda
Re. King Of Pain
1st Dec 2015 4:35pm
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1st Dec 2015 4:56pm
Re. King Of Pain
2nd Dec 2015 00:46am
you are the '''King--PIN .''' of Pain
I the Queenie '''BEE ''' of nothingness
together we reach>>>>>>>><<<<<<<
heights not knowN to mortal men
HOW DELIGHTED I AM
such heights can be reached by
man and woman
why guys run after another
i wonder
exoticssssss here
I the Queenie '''BEE ''' of nothingness
together we reach>>>>>>>><<<<<<<
heights not knowN to mortal men
HOW DELIGHTED I AM
such heights can be reached by
man and woman
why guys run after another
i wonder
exoticssssss here
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2nd Dec 2015 3:56pm