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Lorraine A Little Late
Lorraine volunteered to be his Muse
And there's no way the maestro could refuse
Anything to break the curse
And restore some luster to his verse
But Lorraine is running a bit late
Still turns out she's worth the wait
Starting with a soulful kiss
The prelude to her world of bliss
She then lowers slowly to her knees
Purring "Can I taste you, please?"
So since she's being so polite
He offers his gourmet delight
Lorraine thrills him as he writes once more
Hoping this rhyme's not another bore
The inspiration's late, but Heaven sent
A Muse destined for Extreme Content.
And there's no way the maestro could refuse
Anything to break the curse
And restore some luster to his verse
But Lorraine is running a bit late
Still turns out she's worth the wait
Starting with a soulful kiss
The prelude to her world of bliss
She then lowers slowly to her knees
Purring "Can I taste you, please?"
So since she's being so polite
He offers his gourmet delight
Lorraine thrills him as he writes once more
Hoping this rhyme's not another bore
The inspiration's late, but Heaven sent
A Muse destined for Extreme Content.
Published 19th Nov 2015
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19th Nov 2015 8:18pm
I once knew a girl like that ...but I couldn't get a ticket for the train...lol
19th Nov 2015 11:46pm
19th Nov 2015 8:26pm
I enjoyed this very much..lol it all sounds a bit familier... That muse position can be a fucking bitch...
But Lorraine sounds like one helluva dame...I dig the images of women you choose T. Very sexy without being the least bit vulgar.
A lot like you kid...teehee
Much love
Jennifer
But Lorraine sounds like one helluva dame...I dig the images of women you choose T. Very sexy without being the least bit vulgar.
A lot like you kid...teehee
Much love
Jennifer
Thanks so much Jen. No harm in a little vulgarity once in awhile as long as it makes a point or gets some laughs. It can be a matter of loosening up. That's something I probably need to work on.
19th Nov 2015 8:53pm
yes it seems your muse has visited me many times in my dreams your muse gets around my friend
19th Nov 2015 11:51pm
Thanks for the tip Wolf! And here she was telling me how "devoted" she is. Devoted to having as many poets as possible it seems!
19th Nov 2015 9:16pm
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19th Nov 2015 11:56pm
Are you telling me I have to share? Sounds reasonable. She has enough to go around for certain. Thanks Ivar!
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23rd Nov 2015 00:04am
My contents not all that extreme, really, but I'm working on it. Thanks Taryn!
20th Nov 2015 1:06am
Crow, your rhyming form was superb! I feel when some poets rhyme or even write erotica, it comes across cheesy-cheeky- forced and blatantly inauthentic. This ink told a story and captured Lorraine's character perfectly. Pen cheers~
23rd Nov 2015 00:16am
I agree with you about the rhyme. It can be forced and a distraction from the substance of the work. I try to indulge only with the playful stuff. With more serious themes it can become an irritating gimmick. Thank you Rain!
20th Nov 2015 2:00am
Crow, you are a gem. Loved this and of course, Im a sucker for rhymes. <3
23rd Nov 2015 00:07am
I can't seem to resist rhymes either. I do my best not to force it and push my luck. Thanks Mysteriouslady!
Anonymous
20th Nov 2015 3:23am
Thems some long legs on that gurl! Look how
they go up and make and ass of themselvess.
Nice scribble!
they go up and make and ass of themselvess.
Nice scribble!
23rd Nov 2015 00:09am
20th Nov 2015 1:38pm
there i was thinking i could have my quiche & eat it too... but you've taken a bite ltm
gotta echo s.g above [damn fine legs on that chickyboo]
dig this crowfly
xo
gotta echo s.g above [damn fine legs on that chickyboo]
dig this crowfly
xo
23rd Nov 2015 00:12am
Yep, those legs are killer. I kind of like that little pout on her face as well. Thanks Katja!
20th Nov 2015 9:57pm
Looks like Lorraine showed up in the nick of time and proved the early bird not the only one who gets the worm(pun intended lol)..big smiles as I read this..doesnt really matter when inspiration strikes..all that matters is it does...enjoyed this..Awesome as Always Crowfly!!
23rd Nov 2015 00:22am
Thank you PoeticDesire! Inspiration's always welcome. It does pick some odd times, like right before I'm about to hit the sack. Then I scribble down the idea before it evaporates then get back to it in the morning, see how it looks when I'm relatively wide awake. I just wish inspiration kept to a predictable schedule.
Anonymous
21st Nov 2015 6:20am
Sir Fly. .. I'M a little to late [for this comment]. . .but I absolutely enjoyed the whimsical & rhythmical flow of this piece right down to the 'extreme content' warning; an excellent twist;). . .Well done!. . .xo, Devlin.
23rd Nov 2015 00:24am
No problem being late Devlin, just glad you could make it. Thanks for the kind words!
