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Between
Between the words, between the lines, between the hands time will fly, between the minutes as they die, between the lies the truth will shine, between the blinks of batting eyes, between the lost, unseen the blind scream to see though hypnotized, between the past and future hide, a shadow crying in my mind.
Published 17th Nov 2015
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17th Nov 2015 2:20pm
Wow short but still holds power...i felt a sense of being stuck in limbo within the mind...not able to settle on left or right...it almost seems like a cry for help. Not sure if thats what you intended but thats what i felt...nice emotion
17th Nov 2015 4:32pm
Strong rhyme scheme and artistic style. Overall great ink and welcome to DUP!
--Esther
--Esther
