Love

that's a lasting love, & very rare.
it's a wonderful observance...

Elderly couples make me want to live righteous.

'Love in its purest
and oldest form...'

Miss Lady. . .I got to hand it to you and this stanza. . .damn *brilliant*!. . .It's lines like these I wish I could pen;). . .xo, Devlin.

Absolutely wonderful!

Lovely Lady, you have captured the essence of what we all yearn for.
To find a love that lasts always>
has it's battle scars and remains true. That is what I wanted when I said " I do".  Deeply touching write.
Loved this piece.

Keith

Beautiful vision of love standing
thrust the test of time... Kudos my sweetheart :)

Mysterious, this was a brilliant heartfelt write.. i totally enjoyed.. with love..



Dave

Watching this couple actually brought tears to my eyes....Such beauty in them...Made think of the things in life that you just cannot touch...you need to feel them..<3 Thank you all

lovely lady such tender observations love this ink..

love Crim

It reminded me of an old Debeer commercial, the one with the older couple in the park and a younger couple walk past them.
There's nothing like growing old together.
Thank you Lady M for reminding us the true beauty of lasting love.

**note: 4S first line 'the'

You describe the scene so well Mysteriouslady.  Not too many notice these nuances and catch them in their lines.  You've succeeded brilliantly!

Beauty, purity of love snapped in words beautifully. Poetry at work...again!!

Magical and tender

Classic

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I totally agree and thanks honey. <3