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For...Not
I wasted my time on you.
I wasted my love on you.
I wasted my words on you.
So many compliments
wasted on you.
You are a dead end.
I wish I could rewind
....go back to begin.
I would know better
than fall for you...
Waste my time on
You.....
Love you....
stupid things
I do.
Today will be
different.....
It will be new.
I am going
to quit..
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You
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Re. For...Not
4th Nov 2015 3:50am
I know that feeling too well,
I really can feel your pain and relate to what you are going through.
But all I can say is time will heal you, there is never a guarantee of when you will heal, but I will say that you will get over who ever put you through this heart ache.
Keep your head up :)
I really can feel your pain and relate to what you are going through.
But all I can say is time will heal you, there is never a guarantee of when you will heal, but I will say that you will get over who ever put you through this heart ache.
Keep your head up :)
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Re: Re. For...Not
4th Nov 2015 11:36am
Hello Ms.Jackson,
I want you to know that your
support and understanding
are greatly valued. Thank you
for the read and the love shown.
Keith
I want you to know that your
support and understanding
are greatly valued. Thank you
for the read and the love shown.
Keith
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Re: Re. For...Not
4th Nov 2015 11:53am
Dearest Taryn, similar parallels unquestionable. I have been fortunate
to somehow have been given the opportunity to have met you along the way. You have been a great help on this jouney; giving reminders and nudges along the way. I can only hope
that you know that you have my love and support in your endeavor as well.
Love to you
Sweet one,
Keith
to somehow have been given the opportunity to have met you along the way. You have been a great help on this jouney; giving reminders and nudges along the way. I can only hope
that you know that you have my love and support in your endeavor as well.
Love to you
Sweet one,
Keith
Re. For...Not
4th Nov 2015 2:26pm
This is a good stance. Like rising from the ashes. They say hindsight is 20/20 vision and sometimes we need that clarity. But they also say don't drive looking through the rear view mirror. Strong wrote K2M
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Re: Re. For...Not
7th Nov 2015 3:52am
Really appreciate your always thoughtful comment Mr. DPW.
Always look forward your take
on a write.
Keith
Always look forward your take
on a write.
Keith
Re. For...Not
4th Nov 2015 3:56pm
Keith I feel for you and your heart and wasted time..
I love that you are taking a stand and embracing a future of love returned ten fold..
love Brenda
I love that you are taking a stand and embracing a future of love returned ten fold..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. For...Not
7th Nov 2015 3:58am
Brenda, thanks for your understanding words. As always thank you for the read and the support you give.
Keith
Keith
Re. For...Not
5th Nov 2015 2:30am
Heart ache in this piece is very real. I wish you well, Keith. You deserve it. <3
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Re: Re. For...Not
7th Nov 2015 4:01am
Thank you sweet Lady, for the kind words and well wishes. Truly appreciate your loving support.
Keith
Keith
Re. For...Not
5th Nov 2015 4:22pm
hihi Keith!
you very much nail the addiction factor.. hindsight always an arse kicker..
completely relate dear man..
"You are a dead end.
I wish I could rewind
....go back to begin."
~reminds me of the wicked U-turns we are forced to make in love and war of/for it.
adore your pen m'friend & missed you lotts. poignant pour..
sendin witchy shine & wishes to brighten your day!
luvin respects,
~d
you very much nail the addiction factor.. hindsight always an arse kicker..
completely relate dear man..
"You are a dead end.
I wish I could rewind
....go back to begin."
~reminds me of the wicked U-turns we are forced to make in love and war of/for it.
adore your pen m'friend & missed you lotts. poignant pour..
sendin witchy shine & wishes to brighten your day!
luvin respects,
~d
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Re: Re. For...Not
7th Nov 2015 4:12am
Dearest Tanya, you brightening my day goes without saying. Always brings smiles to hear from you.
Funny how when in love we just don't always see clearly. True how love blinds> afterwards left wondering; how could that have happened.
Look forward to the next time.
Love and well wishes to you.
Love
Keith
Funny how when in love we just don't always see clearly. True how love blinds> afterwards left wondering; how could that have happened.
Look forward to the next time.
Love and well wishes to you.
Love
Keith
Re. For...Not
5th Nov 2015 7:34pm
Re. For...Not
7th Nov 2015 4:15am
Dean thanks for the comment.
Sometimes wish that heart thing
would just dissappear. Just joking would not want to live without the
possibility of love.
Keith
Sometimes wish that heart thing
would just dissappear. Just joking would not want to live without the
possibility of love.
Keith
Re. For...Not
7th Nov 2015 9:48pm
I felt your feelings through your words...great expression of frustration...and realization of your situation. I Enjoyed reading !!
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Re. For...Not
11th Nov 2015 3:57am
Oh yeahg...we've all been here before and you capture the anger and dismay perfectly.
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