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Simultaneous
I want to enter into
your darkness,
Fill you with such
hardness.
Your soft warmth
surrounding me..
Your flesh...
clinging....
embracing..
me.....gently.
Tantalizing feel..
of soft pressed
to steel...
More like a
dream ..,
than real.
To hear low
moans...
rise up in
their tones.
To fill the night
air...
With the passion
we share.
To feel your depths;
to make you cream..
To make love...
to the extreme.
To leave no want
or desire..
Untouched by
love's fire.
To burn ever
Higher.....
Fed by the heat of
flesh to flesh;
as our bodies
.....intermesh.
Becoming one...
in mind and goal;
sharing body
and soul.
Reaping love's
Pleasure,
Beyond all
Measure,
In shared
Orgasmic
Treasure.
You
and
Me
•
Simultaneously
your darkness,
Fill you with such
hardness.
Your soft warmth
surrounding me..
Your flesh...
clinging....
embracing..
me.....gently.
Tantalizing feel..
of soft pressed
to steel...
More like a
dream ..,
than real.
To hear low
moans...
rise up in
their tones.
To fill the night
air...
With the passion
we share.
To feel your depths;
to make you cream..
To make love...
to the extreme.
To leave no want
or desire..
Untouched by
love's fire.
To burn ever
Higher.....
Fed by the heat of
flesh to flesh;
as our bodies
.....intermesh.
Becoming one...
in mind and goal;
sharing body
and soul.
Reaping love's
Pleasure,
Beyond all
Measure,
In shared
Orgasmic
Treasure.
You
and
Me
•
Simultaneously
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 4:27am
Dean thank you for taking the time to give me a read. So glad that you
also commented.
Thanks
Keith
also commented.
Thanks
Keith
Re. Simultaneous
5th Nov 2015 9:19pm
Favourite lines:
as our bodies
.....intermesh.
Becoming one...
in mind and goal;
sharing body
and soul.
as our bodies
.....intermesh.
Becoming one...
in mind and goal;
sharing body
and soul.
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 4:31am
Thank you for stopping by and
taking the time to comment Solomon.
I am glad that you liked those lines
because there is something to be said about sharing ourselves completely and unselfishly with another.
Thank you again,
Keith
taking the time to comment Solomon.
I am glad that you liked those lines
because there is something to be said about sharing ourselves completely and unselfishly with another.
Thank you again,
Keith
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 4:35am
Dearest Taryn, you have me smiling and blushing with that comment.
Soo glad you liked. Look forward to seeing you again
Love
Keith
Soo glad you liked. Look forward to seeing you again
Love
Keith
Re. Simultaneous
6th Nov 2015 00:49am
"Simultaneous <~~ *title loves! you had me intrigued here & jus' kept on goin..
"I want to enter into
your darkness, "
&
"Tantalizing feel..
of soft pressed
to steel...
More like a
dream ..,
than real.
To hear low
moans...
rise up in
their tones. "
~um.. Keith?! ..yes..I'm with my sissy Taryn here.. ~~> & raise hers w/an added *gasp.. ;)
two joined in passion & fulfillment.. just shine in imagery from your heated lines of smooth flow..
much luvin respect sweet misters,
~d
"I want to enter into
your darkness, "
&
"Tantalizing feel..
of soft pressed
to steel...
More like a
dream ..,
than real.
To hear low
moans...
rise up in
their tones. "
~um.. Keith?! ..yes..I'm with my sissy Taryn here.. ~~> & raise hers w/an added *gasp.. ;)
two joined in passion & fulfillment.. just shine in imagery from your heated lines of smooth flow..
much luvin respect sweet misters,
~d
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
First, hello and so happy to hear from you. Thoughts and well wishes always sent your way. Titles are always the problem for me; not this time. So glad you agree with your sissy on this and upped the already gracious comments given. Always thankful for the love and support that you give.
Love sent
Keith
Love sent
Keith
Re. Simultaneous
6th Nov 2015 2:25pm
Fantastic flow and rhyming. Wish I was as good at that.
Sexy piece. Very much enjoyed.
Sexy piece. Very much enjoyed.
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 1:23pm
Looloolookie
So happy to hear from you.
I am humbled by your comment, love.
I have read much of your work
and there is nothing lacking, sweetheart.
Loves to
You
Keith
So happy to hear from you.
I am humbled by your comment, love.
I have read much of your work
and there is nothing lacking, sweetheart.
Loves to
You
Keith
Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 1:15am
This is a touching piece of erotica K2m. An intimate approach where only two exist. Lovely art.
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 1:26pm
DPW, so glad that you approve of this write. Always look forward to your comments. Really respect your opinions, Sir Play.
K2M
K2M
Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 2:02am
Extremely passionate and it was felt especially as you become one.
Enjoyed
Enjoyed
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Re: Re. Simultaneous
7th Nov 2015 1:29pm
Lena, I am so glad that you made it to
my page. Thanks so much for the comment. I have really enjoyed reading you ink, wish I would have
read you sooner.
Thank you
Keith
my page. Thanks so much for the comment. I have really enjoyed reading you ink, wish I would have
read you sooner.
Thank you
Keith
Re. Simultaneous
11th Nov 2015 3:53am
Re. Simultaneous
10th Jan 2016 8:02pm
Re: Re. Simultaneous
Naajir,
Thank you for the taking the time to read. I really appreciate you leaving a comment also.
Keith
Thank you for the taking the time to read. I really appreciate you leaving a comment also.
Keith