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Taphephobia...'
He swelled with the inner demons
Oh how the darkness can get
ahold of...
stark realizations unearthed
locked inside his taphephobia...
Those formally inert, hurts past
present the future of death's cry
as the guise of black rainbows
scrape across the sky...
These maggots eat away the flesh
of a once servant of the unrequited
faced with the inevitable end, deeper
he keeps sinking, which fear dominates more? Ever incessant
the cresting pains bore...
begotten, forgotten those hazy
fantasies of clean lungs that breathe
a will to stand against this powerful
bastion of living dead, may as
well just surrender to thy earthen bed...
Published 29th Oct 2015
| Edited 9th Nov 2015
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29th Oct 2015 11:23am
29th Oct 2015 5:33pm
Considering how well you do dark, it's a huge compliment my dear, n I'm greatly appreciative always! :)
29th Oct 2015 12:48pm
29th Oct 2015 5:35pm
Aaawww... Well I'm happy you found it enjoyable my friend, appreciate your support :)
29th Oct 2015 10:55pm
I guess you're right, but thankfully I don't have nightmares, then again I don't sleep much either so that may be why!! lol
Appreciate ur support always :)
Appreciate ur support always :)
29th Oct 2015 9:36pm
29th Oct 2015 10:57pm
Aaawwww... U sweetie you! Thank you, as for keeping it up, it seems I can't stop writing if I tried...I've tried, it hasn't worked lol... Appreciate the support my friend :)
1st Nov 2015 11:47am
Gripping deep dark scribe...well done Poetik
Fav lines:
he keeps sinking, which fear dominates more? Ever incessant
the cresting pains bore... Heavy lines could really sense that sinking feeling
Fav lines:
he keeps sinking, which fear dominates more? Ever incessant
the cresting pains bore... Heavy lines could really sense that sinking feeling
1st Nov 2015 12:00pm
I'm flattered always by your sweet, sincere commentary n support my dear, thank you so much... :)
1st Nov 2015 6:54pm
Alright now fella! Lol… I see your sinister pen at work. :)
Loving the dark side of you. Keep shining hun…
1st Nov 2015 8:25pm
We'll, yea I love goin dark at times but usually I do it less like this n more like a killer lol... thanks a ton, appreciate it much :)
2nd Nov 2015 8:01am
ooooh my unholy heart's all a flutter, poe! this is exquisitely dark
loveeeeeeed!
xo
loveeeeeeed!
xo
2nd Nov 2015 9:19am
Aaaawwww now so too my heart. A flutter! :) gracias mi amor! Truly grateful for support always :)
8th Nov 2015 9:16pm
This came across Strong and
with a sense of Resolve Poetik.
I perceived an aire of letting-go;
releasing into what, "It is," or at
least what it seems to be.
"begotten, forgotten those hazy
fantasies of clean lungs that breathe
a will to stand against this powerful
bastion of living dead, may as
well just surrender to thy earthen bed"...
This last part as I read it prompted me
to imagine seeing You standing and
with much passion and sorrow belting-
out to the world.
Well-written... Watchman
with a sense of Resolve Poetik.
I perceived an aire of letting-go;
releasing into what, "It is," or at
least what it seems to be.
"begotten, forgotten those hazy
fantasies of clean lungs that breathe
a will to stand against this powerful
bastion of living dead, may as
well just surrender to thy earthen bed"...
This last part as I read it prompted me
to imagine seeing You standing and
with much passion and sorrow belting-
out to the world.
Well-written... Watchman
9th Nov 2015 00:34am
The depth of your thoughts is more of a compliment to me than you probably
realize, especially since you're pretty dead on. :) thank you so much bro. Truly appreciate your support :)
realize, especially since you're pretty dead on. :) thank you so much bro. Truly appreciate your support :)
9th Nov 2015 00:45am
The depth of your thoughts is more of a compliment to me than you probably
realize, especially since you're pretty dead on. :) thank you so much bro. Truly appreciate your support :)
realize, especially since you're pretty dead on. :) thank you so much bro. Truly appreciate your support :)
