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'Soul-Solitaire'
He
buried her syllables
in his spinal cord...
and fell crumpled
from the
want to taste her life...
all to feel
the sweetness
of ache against
his lips
knowing that
when seasons
changed
from searing scarlet
to alabaster...
He'd still feel
the spiraling numbness
striking like crystal darts
strumming against his cheek
and when nothing could fill the emptiness, that yesterdays had bore
He would
swallow passion
and whisper faint lullabies
targeted at scattered stars
that he prayed, would quiet
his fears.
He appreciated her spirituality-
the faith she clung to
when the world
became an abysmal failure.
Once, he asked,
what the meaning of life was
she hesitated
then replied, immortality...
The very best of writers
have said very little
while the worst
have said too much....
and he read her poetry...
no love compared to her words.
no drink was as satisfying
as the substance of thought...
no sex as strong
as the love and hate of oneself...
because, the world is full
of poets, but very few poems.
and like flowers
that never bloom
they are invariably forgotten...
buried her syllables
in his spinal cord...
and fell crumpled
from the
want to taste her life...
all to feel
the sweetness
of ache against
his lips
knowing that
when seasons
changed
from searing scarlet
to alabaster...
He'd still feel
the spiraling numbness
striking like crystal darts
strumming against his cheek
and when nothing could fill the emptiness, that yesterdays had bore
He would
swallow passion
and whisper faint lullabies
targeted at scattered stars
that he prayed, would quiet
his fears.
He appreciated her spirituality-
the faith she clung to
when the world
became an abysmal failure.
Once, he asked,
what the meaning of life was
she hesitated
then replied, immortality...
The very best of writers
have said very little
while the worst
have said too much....
and he read her poetry...
no love compared to her words.
no drink was as satisfying
as the substance of thought...
no sex as strong
as the love and hate of oneself...
because, the world is full
of poets, but very few poems.
and like flowers
that never bloom
they are invariably forgotten...
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Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 2:19am
PK.Rich.you jewel..this is special.
Many poets..few poems.
Yeah..
Love
Jennifer
Many poets..few poems.
Yeah..
Love
Jennifer
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 2:42am
Thank you... Not a knock on anyone
just how this piece 'came' to me :)... Appreciate the support always :)
just how this piece 'came' to me :)... Appreciate the support always :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 3:07am
Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 10:50am
Thank you, the sentiment is likewise
my dear, u possess a lethal pen! :)
Truly appreciate your support of my ink... :)
my dear, u possess a lethal pen! :)
Truly appreciate your support of my ink... :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2015 6:26am
Now that's poetry when she leaves that kind of impression on you.
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 10:52am
Aaaawwww look at you, givin me big ole smiles! lol n hey THAT leaves an impression! Appreciate you sweetness :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 1:51pm
Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 2:18pm
Thank you back, you're so wonderful...
Greatly appreciate ur support K
n I'm honored :)
Greatly appreciate ur support K
n I'm honored :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 4:48pm
Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 7:03pm
My sweet friend gosh you're so sweet
I'm sure if it spoke to you then there must be elements that mirror you :) į thank u always! :)
I'm sure if it spoke to you then there must be elements that mirror you :) į thank u always! :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 6:29pm
Hand to chest, breath suspended, and a smile of awe on my face... that's what you left me with. Love this piece!
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 7:05pm
Beautiful E... This is easily one of the very best comments I've ever gotten!
So wow, I'm holding my chest now lol
Thank you so much dear lady :)
So wow, I'm holding my chest now lol
Thank you so much dear lady :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 7:59pm
Bestill my heart, dearest, this has a swooning whimsy!
then oh-so-serious vibe of remembrance/not being forgotten by *reading the poetry..
deep soul stuffs evoked misters.
"and fell crumpled
from the
want to taste her life."
~*dammit, so sweetly sharp on imagery! ..had gasping fit *here ...& jus' held my breathe from then on.. ;)
"and he read her poetry..."
~the line reads to me as the very crux of the piece. the importance placed to read n keep em alive.
then a breath to say- poignant.. I absolutely Loves this pour and word cascade!
huggins
~d
then oh-so-serious vibe of remembrance/not being forgotten by *reading the poetry..
deep soul stuffs evoked misters.
"and fell crumpled
from the
want to taste her life."
~*dammit, so sweetly sharp on imagery! ..had gasping fit *here ...& jus' held my breathe from then on.. ;)
"and he read her poetry..."
~the line reads to me as the very crux of the piece. the importance placed to read n keep em alive.
then a breath to say- poignant.. I absolutely Loves this pour and word cascade!
huggins
~d
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 8:11pm
My sweet Dark one!! Aaawww you made me sigh with ur sweet words! Thank u so much for all ur wonderful n supportive praise, deeply grateful for u always :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 8:23pm
So many facets of life, so many facets of love. Love is a delicate subject, Poe, but you master it poetically.
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
23rd Oct 2015 8:26pm
Having u visit after such a long time is truly an honor... Thank you my sweet friend, greatly appreciate it :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
24th Oct 2015 2:04am
Standing Ovation Poe!
What an incredible piece!
The last 4 stanzas stole my heart
I'm sure it stole hers too. She made beautiful mark on you cariņo ; )
I need this on my list.
What an incredible piece!
The last 4 stanzas stole my heart
I'm sure it stole hers too. She made beautiful mark on you cariņo ; )
I need this on my list.
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
24th Oct 2015 8:26am
Aaawww ... You steal mine with your sweetness! lol thank you dear one, I'm humbled n feel honored for list add n your continued support :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
24th Oct 2015 6:02am
Love what feelings I get when reading your work. <3 This was spectacular.
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
24th Oct 2015 8:27am
Thank you! You have me beaming right now my friend! appreciate your thoughts n support truly. :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
24th Oct 2015 8:14pm
Oh wow I don't know where to begin to comment on this :) love the mesmerizing imagery..and the flawless delivery...Soul Stirring Ink Poetik..
Fav lines:
"He would
swallow passion
and whisper faint lullabies
targeted at scattered stars
that he prayed, would quiet
his fears. " that was breathtaking!!
And this:
"He appreciated her spirituality" a lovely sentiment that adds such intensity to this.. Loved it
Fav lines:
"He would
swallow passion
and whisper faint lullabies
targeted at scattered stars
that he prayed, would quiet
his fears. " that was breathtaking!!
And this:
"He appreciated her spirituality" a lovely sentiment that adds such intensity to this.. Loved it
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
24th Oct 2015 11:43pm
Aaaawwww... Ur making a very big case for getting huge hug! lol thankies my sweetheart, appreciate you always :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
25th Oct 2015 1:11am
you've sky rocketed to that special place where you can do no wrong nor write anything that is going to be anything less than spectacular ..take a seat my king and command more words pretty pls curtsy bow [low] and hold................your servant, in admiration and observation. sigh
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
25th Oct 2015 1:17am
My sweet sweet precious one, you have me overcome with emotion right
now... I'm humbled n deeply honored... N if I could, I'd give you the biggest hug known to man lol... U angel u... :)
now... I'm humbled n deeply honored... N if I could, I'd give you the biggest hug known to man lol... U angel u... :)
Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
25th Oct 2015 2:11am
no it is simply giving credit where it is due, as your words, flow and poetic style stamp these pages, I am envious, enchanted & mostly inspired as currently words only swirl like angry insects teasing and tormenting me instead. Hug - high five - do a little dance [cause we can] and grin like a cheshire cat for full effect! you deserve it..woohooo
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Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
30th Oct 2015 10:36am
you just took poetry to a new level, poe...
... dear god, this is gorgeous, this is everything that's right about love poems
bowing to the prowess of your pen
xo
... dear god, this is gorgeous, this is everything that's right about love poems
bowing to the prowess of your pen
xo
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
30th Oct 2015 10:55am
"you just took poetry to a new level, poe... " says the woman who does it on a regular basis! Wow... I'm deeply flattered n honor Mi Amor! :) I thank you graciously for this n the RL add... :)
Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
Anonymous
28th Feb 2016 12:49pm
Seriously a feel good read.
For life is harsh and we
sometimes bleed. This
enlightened my mind and
heart. Can breathe a little
easier.
For life is harsh and we
sometimes bleed. This
enlightened my mind and
heart. Can breathe a little
easier.
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Re: Re. 'Soul-Solitaire'
29th Feb 2016 9:01am
Thank you, n I'm happy you breathe easier too! :) sincerely appreciate your support. :)