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First
And i rise up in touch..
His pull bring my hip high..
First tip Aaah! Inside..slow push..in..
I back up and ride..
His dark thick feel my ass glide..
His slide make my moan big..
Tummy down his fingers catch nipple...pinch..
My wet take his inch by faster inch..
And faster my ass pound to shake...
Our behind to belly dance love make..
My tits in motion hypnotic beat..
Yes it aches but it aches so God damned sweet..
Oh our moan melt shout out names..
Cry out this hedons pleasure..cry out pain..
Cum in darlin..cum in oh please..
Your finger rub oh fuck! Thas it!
Deeeep please King so..oh!
There i go..there i go..theeere i goood!
Now please you! mih pussy goooosh..
Ahhh! Yes baby fill me uuuup!
Arch over bite neck and hold..
Cock beat in me my cunt in glow..
Now see you run out mih sweet hole..
Finger dip to lips my Kings special kiss..
Now big arms suround puff to drift..
Hold me through rendezvous lovers dream..
Lost under covers happy with my King.
His pull bring my hip high..
First tip Aaah! Inside..slow push..in..
I back up and ride..
His dark thick feel my ass glide..
His slide make my moan big..
Tummy down his fingers catch nipple...pinch..
My wet take his inch by faster inch..
And faster my ass pound to shake...
Our behind to belly dance love make..
My tits in motion hypnotic beat..
Yes it aches but it aches so God damned sweet..
Oh our moan melt shout out names..
Cry out this hedons pleasure..cry out pain..
Cum in darlin..cum in oh please..
Your finger rub oh fuck! Thas it!
Deeeep please King so..oh!
There i go..there i go..theeere i goood!
Now please you! mih pussy goooosh..
Ahhh! Yes baby fill me uuuup!
Arch over bite neck and hold..
Cock beat in me my cunt in glow..
Now see you run out mih sweet hole..
Finger dip to lips my Kings special kiss..
Now big arms suround puff to drift..
Hold me through rendezvous lovers dream..
Lost under covers happy with my King.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 19th Oct 2015
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Re. First
19th Oct 2015 5:53pm
lovely Jennifer such a beautifully done erotic..
steaming up the pages with lines like these..
"Cock beat in me my cunt in glow..
Now see you run out mih sweet hole..
Finger dip to lips my Kings special kiss..
Now big arms suround puff to drift..
Hold me through lovers dream..
Lost under covers with my King."
so very sexy and hot damn yummy inking..
love Brenda
steaming up the pages with lines like these..
"Cock beat in me my cunt in glow..
Now see you run out mih sweet hole..
Finger dip to lips my Kings special kiss..
Now big arms suround puff to drift..
Hold me through lovers dream..
Lost under covers with my King."
so very sexy and hot damn yummy inking..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. First
19th Oct 2015 5:58pm
Re. First
19th Oct 2015 6:12pm
".......take me to your water, so sublime
melting away into a hyper-erotic bliss
time
after
time
after time....... "
This is simply bliss luv........one of your best ever.
Feels so damned good ; )
melting away into a hyper-erotic bliss
time
after
time
after time....... "
This is simply bliss luv........one of your best ever.
Feels so damned good ; )
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Re: Re. First
19th Oct 2015 6:18pm
Yesss..thank you..just inspired deeep thas all. Just read lucidity..oh M..nice. sooo nice...luvs it..💋 kitty scratched..n restin on belly in peace.
For now......
Love
Jennifer
For now......
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
19th Oct 2015 6:22pm
Re: Re. First
19th Oct 2015 6:29pm
Re. First
19th Oct 2015 6:29pm
I think you should throw in a little more sex, make it more extreme, more graphic. Just kidding. I've become jaded lately. I love your erotic detailing Jennifer! Just can't get enough....
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Re: Re. First
19th Oct 2015 6:38pm
Lol Crow..i was like go get T a videoooh oh oh!
Thanks sweet..💋 appreciated..
Love
Jennifer
Thanks sweet..💋 appreciated..
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
19th Oct 2015 7:34pm
Hahaha. This poem feels as though it was written while in motion :P Great work Jen.
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Re: Re. First
19th Oct 2015 7:46pm
Re. First
19th Oct 2015 9:57pm
Holds you in it's spell until the final release. So hotly done that I think I have something to dream about tonight.
John
John
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Re: Re. First
20th Oct 2015 2:22am
Thats awesome John....sweet dream away! Love ya doll..on mih mind..
Love
Jennifer
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
Anonymous
19th Oct 2015 11:22pm
Jennifer, very luscious.. you are the queen of erotica, doll.. you just make it seem effortless.. loved this one..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. First
20th Oct 2015 00:32am
The queen? Wowza! You need to enter mih songlyric comp!! Was made for you sweet baby my shiny boy!
Love
Jennifer
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
20th Oct 2015 1:09am
ohtay.. concluding my Creampuff hath been bizz--'E' and --ohO's.. lol/omf! ..you naughty lil minx.. ;)
the build up is felt, the passion-- pure sizzle!
"My tits in motion hypnotic beat..
Yes it aches but it aches so God damned sweet.."
~best aches are always that border of.. pleasure/pain.. yummy capture..
"Arch over bite neck and hold.. *hawtness!
Cock beat in me my cunt in glow..
Now see you run out mih sweet hole.. *!!
Finger dip to lips my Kings special kiss..
Now big arms surround puff to drift.."
~omfg!! *fanning.. you capture wicked intimate here & pull it off boldly sweet too! purrin all over this..
all my luvins Jen.. shall be reading you unto the eve.. missed much n backtrackin ;)
mwahs all directions,
~T
the build up is felt, the passion-- pure sizzle!
"My tits in motion hypnotic beat..
Yes it aches but it aches so God damned sweet.."
~best aches are always that border of.. pleasure/pain.. yummy capture..
"Arch over bite neck and hold.. *hawtness!
Cock beat in me my cunt in glow..
Now see you run out mih sweet hole.. *!!
Finger dip to lips my Kings special kiss..
Now big arms surround puff to drift.."
~omfg!! *fanning.. you capture wicked intimate here & pull it off boldly sweet too! purrin all over this..
all my luvins Jen.. shall be reading you unto the eve.. missed much n backtrackin ;)
mwahs all directions,
~T
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Re: Re. First
Luvs u gal..you gotta read some..read golen hp
And a conversation. With mih true love
Though the song he found mih in. If you haven't
Yes. Busy!
Hope its slowed down treasure.
My treasured
Dark T i love u
And a conversation. With mih true love
Though the song he found mih in. If you haven't
Yes. Busy!
Hope its slowed down treasure.
My treasured
Dark T i love u
Anonymous
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20th Oct 2015 5:49pm
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Re: Re. First
20th Oct 2015 7:30pm
Thank you much Taryn..indeed that dip makes a sweet flavorable kiss...and glowing cunts illuminate the wholle scene so not one moment is missed! Lol
Appreciate the read..ypurs was stunning..
Love
Jennifer
Appreciate the read..ypurs was stunning..
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
Anonymous
20th Oct 2015 8:56pm
"Tummy down his fingers catch nipple...pinch..
My wet take his inch by faster inch..
And faster my ass pound to shake..."
Love pounding it inch by inch as those hardened
nipples scream for me to rub, tickle and pinch.
You had everything going in this one, Jen!
My wet take his inch by faster inch..
And faster my ass pound to shake..."
Love pounding it inch by inch as those hardened
nipples scream for me to rub, tickle and pinch.
You had everything going in this one, Jen!
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Re: Re. First
21st Oct 2015 00:11am
Thank you jerry! Very much. Not feelin great..gettin to mih reads soon darlin
Lovely to have you back on mih page!
Love
Jennifer
Lovely to have you back on mih page!
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
21st Oct 2015 1:20am
Kitty you done made me a very happy man tonight! You got the pulse of sex hot and heavy here. This is the next best thing to being there. Hot as a tamale. Oh how you envision life at is maddest best! This is sugar for me tonight. ;-)
Love and hunger,
John
Love and hunger,
John
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Re: Re. First
21st Oct 2015 1:24pm
Awe pet, happy it was candy to you
.next best things have to do sometimes huh?
Love you baby boy..my specialness
Jennifer
.next best things have to do sometimes huh?
Love you baby boy..my specialness
Jennifer
Re: Re. First
Lol good? I guess..
Just teasin..happy it was a visceral piece.
Love
Jennifer
Just teasin..happy it was a visceral piece.
Love
Jennifer
Re. First
24th Oct 2015 2:58pm
Oh jeez where the hell did I leave me Viagra? For some reason this erotic piece made me laugh for the carefree joy of a knock-down drag-out fuck. Well there, you are you happy now t this old Limey has disgraced himself? ;-)
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Re: Re. First
24th Oct 2015 4:22pm
In heaven you angel of giggles and sweetness..you are constantly makin mih day cherry!
Love n tonsa indecent kisses!
Jennifer
Love n tonsa indecent kisses!
Jennifer
Re. First
19th Nov 2015 9:42am
Re: Re. First
19th Nov 2015 12:55pm
Well you know shakespeares famous quote.."If the dream house is a rockething D D don't cum a n n nockething...
Lol
Love
Jennifer
Lol
Love
Jennifer