a night night story...

killer

thanks -

I was partly thinking of tim Burton's oyster boy
and Belloc's cautionary tales,  but then I thought
oh bollocks, I'll just write this instead...

that ending is a real cliff hanger. Does the car make the man? The more I read this, the better it gets, actually.

well no comment could
be better than that...

Have to ponder this and read it from different angles. Or bends ...

Oh my poems aren't like driving -
there's no need to concentrate..:)

(Ooops...wrong turn...somewhere...!?! )
Guess he will be sleepin with the fishys tonite....and ever after

.....and the moral of the story : wealth does not always equal happiness!

Bit of smiles...with the "sadness" in this one

you've got the moral precisely..:)

thanks, Enchantress...

this one drove me carazy - round the bend - liked it MUCH :-)

oh good! thanks...