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Desperate Measure (Part Two)
She pays the retainer immediately
Calling me her "discount private eye"
But with an assurance of "one sweet bonus"
Upon successful completion "one night of Nirvana,
Dinner, dance then romance until dawn"
I accept this at face value
Hers being as fucking gorgeous
As dangerously seductive as an L.A. Kali
Her "romance" requiring a semen sacrifice
"My clients call me Stacy," she says
"The affluent ones who take it rough
Willing to pay for a superb tongue lashing"
I pick my jaw back up off the desk
This committed pro smiling right across from me
And say "Fine. Let's get to the facts."
Calling me her "discount private eye"
But with an assurance of "one sweet bonus"
Upon successful completion "one night of Nirvana,
Dinner, dance then romance until dawn"
I accept this at face value
Hers being as fucking gorgeous
As dangerously seductive as an L.A. Kali
Her "romance" requiring a semen sacrifice
"My clients call me Stacy," she says
"The affluent ones who take it rough
Willing to pay for a superb tongue lashing"
I pick my jaw back up off the desk
This committed pro smiling right across from me
And say "Fine. Let's get to the facts."
Published 16th Oct 2015
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2015 7:45pm
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16th Oct 2015 7:48pm
16th Oct 2015 8:27pm
Oh Crow..happy its goin this way..word play inpired here as well..
That song..Becks Devils Haircut" could be a sound track to this already treasured bounce from pro to pro..
Discount private "one" eye..doubtful..but tons of fun here!
Clitty hard on jerk worthy images of the "work ova" this might lead to..
Loveit!!
Jennifer
That song..Becks Devils Haircut" could be a sound track to this already treasured bounce from pro to pro..
Discount private "one" eye..doubtful..but tons of fun here!
Clitty hard on jerk worthy images of the "work ova" this might lead to..
Loveit!!
Jennifer
16th Oct 2015 8:44pm
I'll check out that song. I've heard a lot about Beck but never actually heard his music. I'll look for it on Youtube. I'm really glad you enjoyed this Jennifer. And thanks for the listing! It's an honor....
17th Oct 2015 00:38am
Sir Crow love the sexy images that come to mind with this dangerously seductive duo..
love Crim
love Crim
18th Oct 2015 10:58pm
A little danger adds some spice, no? Still better seduction than destruction. I'll try to tread lightly, Thanks Crim!
17th Oct 2015 2:08am
Welll....things are certainly beginning to heat up between these two! Seems Miss Stacy knows exactly what she wants.....and wastes no time in getting down to business!!!
" Her 'romance' requiring a semen sacrifice..." (Lol!.....love this line! Just about says it all ! )
I am truly enjoying the interaction between your characters, and the direction you are taking in your plot development! Impatient for Part Three!
( Ummm...simply out of curiosity......if your PI is not based on an alter ego, (of yours), will you ever reveal his name? ) ;)
" Her 'romance' requiring a semen sacrifice..." (Lol!.....love this line! Just about says it all ! )
I am truly enjoying the interaction between your characters, and the direction you are taking in your plot development! Impatient for Part Three!
( Ummm...simply out of curiosity......if your PI is not based on an alter ego, (of yours), will you ever reveal his name? ) ;)
18th Oct 2015 11:02pm
I'm still plotting Part 3, hoping they'll get in all kinds of trouble but giving each other plenty of back up and (ahem) benefits. I'm thinking of this PI as being an alter ego but might chicken out if anyone opens fire. We shall see.... Thanks Enchantress!
17th Oct 2015 3:41am
18th Oct 2015 11:04pm
I keep it in small chapters due to my short attention span. If I go for anything lengthy or epic I offer it in bite-sized pieces and hope for the best. Thanks John!
Anonymous
17th Oct 2015 6:52am
Ooh...and again, I am left in anticipation...to be continued...xo, Devlin.
18th Oct 2015 11:06pm
So glad you're intrigued Devlin! Stick around. Might come up with a few surprises......
17th Oct 2015 1:50pm
18th Oct 2015 11:09pm
Anonymous
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17th Oct 2015 3:41pm
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18th Oct 2015 11:11pm
Part 3 is forthcoming Taryn. Sooner or later. One of these days. Stay tuned! Love you!
22nd Oct 2015 7:01pm
Oowee....Naughty! I love these sexy short stories...
leaving our minds wanting more.
Incredible writer, you are......
leaving our minds wanting more.
Incredible writer, you are......
23rd Oct 2015 10:27pm
oh the heated commentary! spicy part two gives a deeper definition to her and I'm
thinking she is tr-- wait-- [zippin it] don't wanna influence your plot.. ;) so will spill it laters.. *lmsao
" "one sweet bonus" ..just works perfectly..
"Her "romance" requiring a semen sacrifice"
~love this.. --vs the virgin sacrifice, o'course. no life taken this way I'm thinking.. ha.
can even picture the facial expressions here
very sultry exchange dear Crow.. noticed part 3 out [yay] & have to do this in order n all..
catchin my arse up & missed your witty pen T2!
much luvin awwes
~T
thinking she is tr-- wait-- [zippin it] don't wanna influence your plot.. ;) so will spill it laters.. *lmsao
" "one sweet bonus" ..just works perfectly..
"Her "romance" requiring a semen sacrifice"
~love this.. --vs the virgin sacrifice, o'course. no life taken this way I'm thinking.. ha.
can even picture the facial expressions here
very sultry exchange dear Crow.. noticed part 3 out [yay] & have to do this in order n all..
catchin my arse up & missed your witty pen T2!
much luvin awwes
~T
22nd Nov 2015 8:46am
The pacing is really good. Allows you to build each detail with as much magnitude of import as required. Taking your time to do a story right I find really fills out the feel of it.
