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You Are Mine
crucify me upside down
on Lucifer's spiked cock
taking Him down my throat
impaling my intestines
with His forked member
drinking demonic semen
I spit the bloodied truth
from the pit below
my eyes cherry red
fed the secrets of the damned
they fuck my soul
entering roughly
blackness pours forth
I want to bathe you
in the acidic waters
of my lust for evil incarnate
it washes over me
like dark death
enters all of my orifices
fucking, torturing
making me writhe and moan
there is a man walking among us
scythe in hand
carving his dark art
on the tender folds of my pussy lips
making me cream out desire for him
chained to him from the nether world
I submit willingly
this is his dominion
dark overlord
he sees this demoness
in his periphery
invoking legion
to make me cum
on hands and knees
awaiting my punishment
for being so weak
manacled to the rack
he enters my bloodied cunt
pounding out his hunger
with carnal, primal need
his message is clear
bitch you will obey me
I see and know you
crucified on Lucifer's cross
you are mine
Published 11th Oct 2015
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11th Oct 2015 8:00am
14th Oct 2015 6:30pm
11th Oct 2015 8:22am
Wow you defiantly flip the switch on too 100% Crimsin on this one. This poem is both hot and disturbing in the same breath it sent chills up and down my body, I tip my hat to you Mistress Crimsin.
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
14th Oct 2015 6:31pm
11th Oct 2015 9:56am
I second DP's comment, I TOO am chilled to my bare bones here lol
But I'd be lying if I said I wasn't impressed, becuz I most def. Was! :)
But I'd be lying if I said I wasn't impressed, becuz I most def. Was! :)
14th Oct 2015 6:32pm
11th Oct 2015 2:08pm
"I spit the bloodied truth
from the pit below
my eyes cherry red
fed the secrets of the damned
they fuck my soul
entering roughly"
"there is a man walking among us
scythe in hand
carving his dark art
on the tender folds of my pussy lips
making me cream out desire for him
chained to him from the nether world "
These are some dark and lusty lines, Crim. A sexual hell of both pleasure and torture. Like death is the only way to orgasm or orgasm is the only acceptable death. A scared boner I did receive reading this one. I imagine a smile in the end, but not of satisfaction, but of resignation.
from the pit below
my eyes cherry red
fed the secrets of the damned
they fuck my soul
entering roughly"
"there is a man walking among us
scythe in hand
carving his dark art
on the tender folds of my pussy lips
making me cream out desire for him
chained to him from the nether world "
These are some dark and lusty lines, Crim. A sexual hell of both pleasure and torture. Like death is the only way to orgasm or orgasm is the only acceptable death. A scared boner I did receive reading this one. I imagine a smile in the end, but not of satisfaction, but of resignation.
14th Oct 2015 6:34pm
thank you DPW I couldn't hope for a better response on this write :)
love Crim
love Crim
11th Oct 2015 2:22pm
Cheerful Sunday Morning Ink
Crim, bagels and lox and a very bloody Mary
666 Like
Crim, bagels and lox and a very bloody Mary
666 Like
14th Oct 2015 6:35pm
thank you Poet I love your thoughts and visits you make me smile :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
11th Oct 2015 3:39pm
Sweet Brenda, I see Crimsin has
been unleashed. Very intense and
frightening. Just in time for the season.
Keith
been unleashed. Very intense and
frightening. Just in time for the season.
Keith
14th Oct 2015 6:37pm
thank you Keith yes I think we all need a little hell raiser from time to time ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
11th Oct 2015 5:04pm
14th Oct 2015 6:37pm
11th Oct 2015 10:44pm
Both wicked and intensely erotic Crim. The Dark Lord's slave and deeply satisfied. He does seem a little possessive though....
14th Oct 2015 6:38pm
12th Oct 2015 11:30am
evil, disturbing, hot, yet beautifully worded - leaves me breathless :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
14th Oct 2015 6:39pm
12th Oct 2015 8:17pm
"there is a man walking among us
scythe in hand
carving his dark art" ... Decadent ink. Ascending to admire such carvings. Intrigued, blue angel
scythe in hand
carving his dark art" ... Decadent ink. Ascending to admire such carvings. Intrigued, blue angel
14th Oct 2015 6:40pm
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14th Oct 2015 6:41pm
thank you beautiful one for showing me love on this dark ink :)
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
Anonymous
13th Oct 2015 2:08am
Brenda, this is old school dark.. Crimsin is bleeding through.. i love it though.. you embrace all sides of you.. lovely dark poetess.. great ink.. into the list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
14th Oct 2015 6:42pm
thank you Dave you made my night when you added this to your list.. also for the love you show me :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
13th Oct 2015 8:44am
14th Oct 2015 6:43pm
13th Oct 2015 7:23pm
this is definitely drenched with crimsin! bold imagery highlighting your dark devotion, your poems elicit strong reactions from both sides of the spectrum...
14th Oct 2015 6:44pm
