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Love Hate, No Hate
Who's laughing now
Who died alive somehow
And kept creeping sin
But I wont let him in
The way you let him in
The way he hurt me through you
All the things you let him do
You thought you wounded me
Was only a new wound to you
I wont rape you the way you raped me
Why don't I hate you?
Only because I only hate me
Filling voids filling me
Stealing sweat sealing me
Demise, despise
To injure and entice
I don't hate you
I only hate myself
They've called it tragic
They can call it hell
Wrapped in empty
Sadness plenty
Skin is fading
Into tragedy
I wont hate you
Wont rape you
Into you into me
The way he hurt me
Through you, only you
I'm just fine, just fine
Or maybe only this peace of mind
Live forgive
Regret fret tranquility
Of a darkroom's instability
I feel you following
Feel death creep hell in tow
That subtle grave eating
Plastic preventing this breathing
Only tragic to an un-apathetic ear
So use mine, so use mine, so
Use mine, use mine its fine
I don't need it, wont hear it
Wont feel it, wont fear it.
Who died alive somehow
And kept creeping sin
But I wont let him in
The way you let him in
The way he hurt me through you
All the things you let him do
You thought you wounded me
Was only a new wound to you
I wont rape you the way you raped me
Why don't I hate you?
Only because I only hate me
Filling voids filling me
Stealing sweat sealing me
Demise, despise
To injure and entice
I don't hate you
I only hate myself
They've called it tragic
They can call it hell
Wrapped in empty
Sadness plenty
Skin is fading
Into tragedy
I wont hate you
Wont rape you
Into you into me
The way he hurt me
Through you, only you
I'm just fine, just fine
Or maybe only this peace of mind
Live forgive
Regret fret tranquility
Of a darkroom's instability
I feel you following
Feel death creep hell in tow
That subtle grave eating
Plastic preventing this breathing
Only tragic to an un-apathetic ear
So use mine, so use mine, so
Use mine, use mine its fine
I don't need it, wont hear it
Wont feel it, wont fear it.
Published 11th Oct 2015
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Anonymous
12th Oct 2015 6:06am
I don't think i read a poem quite like this before and i read a lot.
There's such a frantic feel to it that i love how it expresses bottled up anger and emotions. I don't think it would've conveyed as intensely had you not done it in short direct lines.
Great...great one anon.
I think i just learned something from you..so thank you!
There's such a frantic feel to it that i love how it expresses bottled up anger and emotions. I don't think it would've conveyed as intensely had you not done it in short direct lines.
Great...great one anon.
I think i just learned something from you..so thank you!
15th Oct 2015 00:55am
Hey thanks! I just felt a bit all over the place so I just wrote, I started to edit it but I read it a couple of times and thought it read okay raw.
Thank you for the kind words and for taking the time to read, I appreciate it a lot:)
Thank you for the kind words and for taking the time to read, I appreciate it a lot:)
