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A Face of Her Own
She asks for additional time
Just a few more minutes to "put on my face"
A concept that suggests a skin transplant
Not the application of make up
But out comes the mascara, blush and lipstick
"Don't use a trowel," her friend advises
"Keep it subtle, just enough to bring out your radiance"
"Okay maestro," she replies
"Now shut up and give me a moment's peace."
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She later descends as queen of all she surveys
Her face indeed glowing, a work of art
But hardly a careless trace of "touch up" this time
"I'm a woman of nuance," she asserts
"But if I need enhancement, so be it
My technique is unsurpassed, my brush light
I will have secrets, dear friend,
But that's between me and the mirror."
Just a few more minutes to "put on my face"
A concept that suggests a skin transplant
Not the application of make up
But out comes the mascara, blush and lipstick
"Don't use a trowel," her friend advises
"Keep it subtle, just enough to bring out your radiance"
"Okay maestro," she replies
"Now shut up and give me a moment's peace."
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She later descends as queen of all she surveys
Her face indeed glowing, a work of art
But hardly a careless trace of "touch up" this time
"I'm a woman of nuance," she asserts
"But if I need enhancement, so be it
My technique is unsurpassed, my brush light
I will have secrets, dear friend,
But that's between me and the mirror."
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Re. A Face of Her Own
1st Oct 2015 4:53pm
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1st Oct 2015 4:59pm
Yes, but it's so much fun to watch the process, if permitted. I prefer subtlety and a few highlights. It still depends on the occasion. Less is usually more, but sometimes more can be a kick. Thanks Crim!
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Ohpm a woman of nuance," she asserts"
Crow loved this. Going much deeper than makeup and beauty secrets.
Suggests the secret of femininity itself,
And the secrets of this lovely woman soul.
I will have secrets, dear friend,
But that's between me and the mirror."
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This last line was a masters stroke of brilliance. If one of your goals is to turn us ladies on down here, you succeed brilliantly with this.
Crow loved this. Going much deeper than makeup and beauty secrets.
Suggests the secret of femininity itself,
And the secrets of this lovely woman soul.
I will have secrets, dear friend,
But that's between me and the mirror."
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This last line was a masters stroke of brilliance. If one of your goals is to turn us ladies on down here, you succeed brilliantly with this.
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2nd Oct 2015 7:36pm
Re. A Face of Her Own
1st Oct 2015 9:04pm
You note those 'nuances' of feminine face painting in soft lovely form here, dears Crow..
The 'secrets' you mention. and degree of, can reveal so much personally. great captures throughout..
and.."put on my face" --have not heard this expression in forever, brings a grin, ty!
"My technique is unsurpassed, my brush light"
~perfectly writ & sound in advice. -lmsao @ 'trowel' mentioned. seen those jobs, *eek n cringe
I believe application to be a mirror into the woman herself, making near intimacy in moments- if shared,
[ex: self confidence being accentuated by light-handed make-up vs heavy.] but also know many that do shush all
from the room, secrets in tact.. lol. girls jus getta have fun either way. ;)
enjoyed your pov here.. very precious observes misters!
tahs & hugs
~T
The 'secrets' you mention. and degree of, can reveal so much personally. great captures throughout..
and.."put on my face" --have not heard this expression in forever, brings a grin, ty!
"My technique is unsurpassed, my brush light"
~perfectly writ & sound in advice. -lmsao @ 'trowel' mentioned. seen those jobs, *eek n cringe
I believe application to be a mirror into the woman herself, making near intimacy in moments- if shared,
[ex: self confidence being accentuated by light-handed make-up vs heavy.] but also know many that do shush all
from the room, secrets in tact.. lol. girls jus getta have fun either way. ;)
enjoyed your pov here.. very precious observes misters!
tahs & hugs
~T
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2nd Oct 2015 7:38pm
"Put on my face" is kind of archaic now that I think about it. I've been out of circulation for too long, it seems. For me it's a matter of "saving face" these days.
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Re. A Face of Her Own
1st Oct 2015 11:01pm
Glowing is the adoration here Crow!!!
You wear the heart but add a touch of a young man's earnest leanings - that magic girls sweep us up with from early age- Truly a Painted piece!!!
You wear the heart but add a touch of a young man's earnest leanings - that magic girls sweep us up with from early age- Truly a Painted piece!!!
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2nd Oct 2015 7:41pm
Also a young man's impatience. I've learned to take it a little easier over the years, which have been many. Thanks Soul!
Re. A Face of Her Own
1st Oct 2015 11:38pm
"My technique is unsurpassed, my brush light" love that line ,makes me think of a confident woman..one bold enough to play the cards life deals her but smart enough not to show her hand!!!
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2nd Oct 2015 7:43pm
Exactly! That's the kind of confidence that's never ostentatious. It enhances beauty far more than mascara. It's the inner radiance that really counts. Thanks poeticDesire!
Re. A Face of Her Own
2nd Oct 2015 2:47am
I have never, ever, had the talent or patience for make up. Mascara, yes. Lip gloss, yes. Anything else is foreign to me. Recently had a fancy thing that required a real get up...I had to ask a 16 year old to do my make up! I have to say there is some serious skill involved! Fun write here Mr.C :)
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Re: Re. A Face of Her Own
2nd Oct 2015 7:45pm
I've always been amazed by the pains taken for make-up. I always prefer very little, or none at all. If you notice the make up it's too much. Thanks Lookie!
Re. A Face of Her Own
2nd Oct 2015 3:43am
Some things are left better as a mystery, dear Crow. I loved this! <3
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2nd Oct 2015 7:50pm
Thanks John. I love that Byron quote. He had quite a taste for women, quite the rake in his day if memory serves.
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2nd Oct 2015 7:53pm
You don't have anything to worry about judging by that pic I saw of you a couple of days ago. I'm sure your mirror approves. I love you too, beautiful Taryn.
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Re. A Face of Her Own
3rd Oct 2015 9:56pm
Ah this is beautiful...and can be read on many different levels. I prefer the simplest in this case. Thoroughly enjoyable piece.
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6th Oct 2015 10:08pm
It's meant to be taken pretty simply. I was going for feminine mystique, which can be unfathomable and defies easy explanation. Just watching their rituals is fascinating.
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6th Oct 2015 10:10pm
Love that song, particularly that line "something ducked in shame beneath your pillow." One of Springsteen's best. Thanks JAZZMANOR!
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6th Oct 2015 4:22pm
I don't know why, but this is great stuff, Crow! The woman who knows herself and her craft well enough to do as she does with enough confidence to not feel the need to indulge in her secrets. She knows its good and does not need the approval of others. Confidence is sexy, and whoever this woman is, in my head she is stunning. I think what I liked most about this is you drew out something magnificent in a seemingly innocuous moment of anyone's life, but in this situation, some sort of celebrity. But still, it is behind the scenes and just the very nature of putting make up on and making it fascinating is the sign of a great storyteller!! Bravo!
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6th Oct 2015 10:16pm
Thanks DPW! There's something magic about watching a woman applying make up. Overall I must have spent hours observing this, usually with sidelong glances so as not to make the "artist" self-conscious, smear the job and possibly turn on me with a vengeance. Thanks for the praise and the thoughtful, detailed comment!
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11th Oct 2015 4:11am
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13th Oct 2015 1:13pm
great write crow. I really enjoyed the flow of the poem as well as the use of "one-liners" that woman use. Creative and fine piece of writing.
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