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Three times Three
Awakened by essence aching,
silken altar ablaze..
midnight rain lures my skin softly,
reaching outer treescape.
Kneeling wide 'neath waning moonlight,
arching in prey..[pray]..Sate..
Smooth marble-veined.. jet phallic stone,
hewn slightly over'shaped..
..signifies passion by darkness,
..small death never escaped.
Hot cranberry laces lip bite..
stone meets wet pagan grace,
fingers wrapped ..palming cool calmness..
..womb taking bulk in sway.
Sacred wand teases tight aura,
tender twirls stretch deep'crave..
thighs in sacrifice squeeze circles,
pouring liquid soul aches..
Long slides melt inside One and Two..
..last swirl filling mouth-space..
a pause.. as smokey greens harness the moon..
..wishes granted in arch and swoon..
..purified stone on essence bathed..
.. three times three.. my homage paid..
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Re. Three times Three
29th Sep 2015 11:39pm
arching in prey..[pray]..Sate.
T nuts how much we are thinkin alike some days. Our poems are very different, but both using prayer and a would be alter for passion purposes.
Honey this is simply exquisite.
I got a necklace the other day that reminded me of you, said it is a pagean symbol. A naked woman laying back, i wear it for you kitten.
Love u much
Jennifer
T nuts how much we are thinkin alike some days. Our poems are very different, but both using prayer and a would be alter for passion purposes.
Honey this is simply exquisite.
I got a necklace the other day that reminded me of you, said it is a pagean symbol. A naked woman laying back, i wear it for you kitten.
Love u much
Jennifer
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Re: Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 12:55pm
awes..such a touching gesture that you grant me.. kitten pounces you in thankins creampuff!
'naked woman laying'.. you say?.. I'd bank on pagan then.. dark giggles abound ;)
and omf, yes.. you do blow my mind sweetly w/our channeling.. knew exactly which one, when
I read yours tonite. minds link & don't le'go.. evers..
*treasure you..my Jen darling.. fer always taking time on me..
luvins muchly,
~T
'naked woman laying'.. you say?.. I'd bank on pagan then.. dark giggles abound ;)
and omf, yes.. you do blow my mind sweetly w/our channeling.. knew exactly which one, when
I read yours tonite. minds link & don't le'go.. evers..
*treasure you..my Jen darling.. fer always taking time on me..
luvins muchly,
~T
Re. Three times Three
29th Sep 2015 11:40pm
lovely d~ no one does erotica like you weaved with magic I'm spellbound..
with lines like these..
"Hot cranberry laces lip bite..
stone meets wet pagan grace,
fingers wrapped ..palming cool calmness..
..womb taking bulk in sway.
Sacred wand teases tight aura,
tender twirls stretch deep'crave..
thighs in sacrifice squeeze circles,
pouring liquid soul aches.."
in awe of you beautiful lady :)
with love Brenda
with lines like these..
"Hot cranberry laces lip bite..
stone meets wet pagan grace,
fingers wrapped ..palming cool calmness..
..womb taking bulk in sway.
Sacred wand teases tight aura,
tender twirls stretch deep'crave..
thighs in sacrifice squeeze circles,
pouring liquid soul aches.."
in awe of you beautiful lady :)
with love Brenda
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Re: Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 1:17pm
Adoration is mine, ladyloves.. I am woven in sweet thrill by your words..
thinking the eclipse plus moon play has had All riled and spellbound. was lovely!
cherish you in humble bow, darlin' Brenda..
~d
thinking the eclipse plus moon play has had All riled and spellbound. was lovely!
cherish you in humble bow, darlin' Brenda..
~d
Re. Three times Three
29th Sep 2015 11:41pm
oh this is a wonderful write..well done again my friend."stone meets wet pagan grace"-so clever an precise with your words;)
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Re: Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 4:56pm
very grateful fer your presence and stellar comment, mistersJS!
I'm guilty of much word playing/slaying [always on my pg/lol ]& must extend thankins'
kindly fer your time and support!
be well m'friend ;)
~d
I'm guilty of much word playing/slaying [always on my pg/lol ]& must extend thankins'
kindly fer your time and support!
be well m'friend ;)
~d
Re. Three times Three
Anonymous
29th Sep 2015 11:47pm
"purified stone on essence bathed..
.. three times three.. my homage paid.."
You have a damn fine way of writing erotic, dark, and I love the smoothness of your writes, giving us enough your subject we can figure it out for ourselves. Now that is some fine writing. Even at the finale, you ended your poem on a silky, understated note, but the two lines told everything.
.. three times three.. my homage paid.."
You have a damn fine way of writing erotic, dark, and I love the smoothness of your writes, giving us enough your subject we can figure it out for ourselves. Now that is some fine writing. Even at the finale, you ended your poem on a silky, understated note, but the two lines told everything.
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 00:16am
I'm humbled in all seriousness, Jerry-dears.. lunar eclipse forced this one.;)
appreciate your stunning pov ..'silky & understated' -exactly my intent and put so lovely!
..you're always spot-on fer catching my main lines. thankins misters..
much luvn respect,
~d
appreciate your stunning pov ..'silky & understated' -exactly my intent and put so lovely!
..you're always spot-on fer catching my main lines. thankins misters..
much luvn respect,
~d
Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 00:16am
Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 00:25am
You are deeply thanked & appreciated sweetie.. always divine to hear from you!
shiny eve wishes ;)
~d
shiny eve wishes ;)
~d
Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 00:45am
Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 1:35am
awwes & sweet hello's, dearest.. both pen & I are humbled by your every visit.. tyty!
cherish your support --and "impressive"~> ..puts me to smiles.. ;)
dark duz curtsy to ur dazzled eve,
~d
cherish your support --and "impressive"~> ..puts me to smiles.. ;)
dark duz curtsy to ur dazzled eve,
~d
Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 1:12am
Dark my beautiful sister, Hope your doing well, I've missed you luv")
So, this poem is magical and not just because you're Pagan but because the way in which you write is vivid with extra nuances,
like,"Hot Cranberry laces lip bit. and a pause.. as smokey greens harness the moon.. POW!
when i read these lines the whole picture came into view .. I am funny that way
You have a gift Woman!
loved this in the list!
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
So, this poem is magical and not just because you're Pagan but because the way in which you write is vivid with extra nuances,
like,"Hot Cranberry laces lip bit. and a pause.. as smokey greens harness the moon.. POW!
when i read these lines the whole picture came into view .. I am funny that way
You have a gift Woman!
loved this in the list!
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 2:17am
Missed you too Jackie-luvs..! warm sister-snuggles big-Big to you..
can't stop the dark giggle when I know you're back, my original Love!
--or when *I'm back even, missed a few days myself lately.. lol
"I am funny that way "..<~~ to that... I say *we are that way-- *5 senses equals the pow! ;)
so happy when you spend time on my page darlins.. cherish you til my sweet hell comes..
tyty ..mwahs..loves u endless!
~d
can't stop the dark giggle when I know you're back, my original Love!
--or when *I'm back even, missed a few days myself lately.. lol
"I am funny that way "..<~~ to that... I say *we are that way-- *5 senses equals the pow! ;)
so happy when you spend time on my page darlins.. cherish you til my sweet hell comes..
tyty ..mwahs..loves u endless!
~d
Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 3:32am
This has so many beautiful and evocative lines. You balance magical imagery and eroticism brilliantly. The jet phallic stone seems a bit sinister, but this is erotic dark fantasy by a true sorceress. Loved this Tanya!
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 3:15am
dear Sir Crow.. I curtsy low to your thoughts of sorceress.. humbling me, you are!
there many layers of spiritual passions/peace in this one, as blood moon reigned at time,
and so glad the dark 'sinister' drizzle that stone makes shines too.
light/dark balance being key.. it's astounding that you noted it.. clever you! ..grinning ty's...
ever grateful fer your words & presence sweetie!
~T
there many layers of spiritual passions/peace in this one, as blood moon reigned at time,
and so glad the dark 'sinister' drizzle that stone makes shines too.
light/dark balance being key.. it's astounding that you noted it.. clever you! ..grinning ty's...
ever grateful fer your words & presence sweetie!
~T
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 3:41am
omf-CS's..!! ur resonance & words have me now picturing *double sway, sissyOFK..!
see whatcha did !! [ty's purred] .. that's just hot comment & I loves you dearly fer it..
now that we have dark giggles.. I must give you my ever-squishy thankins on
spying the passion/tranquility amongst other laced innards of the blend..
smiling brightly into the *unison of sissysighs bc you just Know & I never hafta say.
sighing *those endless!
smokey brown & green make dazzled magicks ..quite sure of it.. ;)
always lovins to your lil Faerie behind, sweet sissyTaryn.. infinitely*
~d
see whatcha did !! [ty's purred] .. that's just hot comment & I loves you dearly fer it..
now that we have dark giggles.. I must give you my ever-squishy thankins on
spying the passion/tranquility amongst other laced innards of the blend..
smiling brightly into the *unison of sissysighs bc you just Know & I never hafta say.
sighing *those endless!
smokey brown & green make dazzled magicks ..quite sure of it.. ;)
always lovins to your lil Faerie behind, sweet sissyTaryn.. infinitely*
~d
Re. Three times Three
Anonymous
30th Sep 2015 7:24pm
Miss Sigh. . .my apologies for being a day late, and a poem short. . .this is stunning, stunning ink. . .Your wordplay accompanied by fractured images makes this worth more than a second read. . .erotically impressed, I am. . .xo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 4:31am
You grace me, LadyDevlin.. & run circles around me 'n my poor keyboard of brokeness..[tru]
love your 'fractured images' comment, it slides into place here & seeps in..tyty
I'm further in awe, to impress erotically, upon One such as your talent & must heap my dark
sighing thanx on you.. rules yknw.. ;) lol
appreciate your presence greatly dear poetess,
~d
love your 'fractured images' comment, it slides into place here & seeps in..tyty
I'm further in awe, to impress erotically, upon One such as your talent & must heap my dark
sighing thanx on you.. rules yknw.. ;) lol
appreciate your presence greatly dear poetess,
~d
Re. Three times Three
30th Sep 2015 10:37pm
Beautiful the visions created. You always give enough and let the mind of the reader fill in the spaces.
well, noted that I love your ink; precious one.
hugs and byes
Keith
well, noted that I love your ink; precious one.
hugs and byes
Keith
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 7:33am
Hello's misters Keith of sweet pen.. always warm smiles to have you here.. ;)
My peace & mystery both thankin you, as this one felt a bit different to write. freeing
maybe.. I'm lovin all takes & consensus on details. It's very fancy to know your visions
were of beauty. [ty, truly]
my smothered muse is slowly eeking back, moonlight willing. very much appreciate
you & your support!! dry spells sukkk and spiritual bathin seemed a must.. eg/lol
shiny evening hours, m'dears.. n' hugs bk..
~d
My peace & mystery both thankin you, as this one felt a bit different to write. freeing
maybe.. I'm lovin all takes & consensus on details. It's very fancy to know your visions
were of beauty. [ty, truly]
my smothered muse is slowly eeking back, moonlight willing. very much appreciate
you & your support!! dry spells sukkk and spiritual bathin seemed a must.. eg/lol
shiny evening hours, m'dears.. n' hugs bk..
~d
Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 5:57am
You a true queen my kindred!
my words has left me bound..
cannot muster a ponder for
this beauty.. Silently, I read this.
Haunting dashes all over me
-Howlings
my words has left me bound..
cannot muster a ponder for
this beauty.. Silently, I read this.
Haunting dashes all over me
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Three times Three
1st Oct 2015 7:46am
My darling kindred.. touches of our fingertips meet in the sky..
my essence in ever kneel to our binding,
you bring sweet poetry sighing by comment ladyluvs!
your dashes skip gentle and I maul you properly..be assured..ty.
misses your touch and purrfect as always.. mwahs*
~d
my essence in ever kneel to our binding,
you bring sweet poetry sighing by comment ladyluvs!
your dashes skip gentle and I maul you properly..be assured..ty.
misses your touch and purrfect as always.. mwahs*
~d
Re. Three times Three
3rd Oct 2015 6:47am
every time I visit your ink gets hotter and hotter *smiles* i enjoyed the molten journey... happy weekend my dear friend *hugs* :D
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Re: Re. Three times Three
4th Oct 2015 11:16am
Lovely to have you here Mistah Magic..
humbled by 'molten journey'..so much perfect there..tyty!
very much appreciate your time m'friend ;)
hugs 'n' curtsies,
~d
humbled by 'molten journey'..so much perfect there..tyty!
very much appreciate your time m'friend ;)
hugs 'n' curtsies,
~d
Re. Three times Three
3rd Oct 2015 12:10pm
hear that? yup that's me panting ltm
lord & lady, but i love this, always so classy & yet visceral reactions illicited with such skill, sister mine...
"Smooth marble-veined.. jet phallic stone,
hewn slightly over'shaped..
..signifies passion by darkness,"
*cough cough* oh dusky hued veins
... bowing to your pen
love you lady
xoxox
lord & lady, but i love this, always so classy & yet visceral reactions illicited with such skill, sister mine...
"Smooth marble-veined.. jet phallic stone,
hewn slightly over'shaped..
..signifies passion by darkness,"
*cough cough* oh dusky hued veins
... bowing to your pen
love you lady
xoxox
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Re: Re. Three times Three
4th Oct 2015 11:30am
Awwes n fondled squeaks to your fancy pant, sister-luvz!! was thinking bout lyrics here &
bid fer 'stoned in love'.. hmmm..appropriate, yes? .. omff/lol.
spanks to your cough too.. we shall take vein by the cojones yet..& missed my partner in crime,
..creepy black van in tact, I hope .. ?? ...dark giggles every time I remember that, uknw!
loves you purrfect, kittyK,
~d
bid fer 'stoned in love'.. hmmm..appropriate, yes? .. omff/lol.
spanks to your cough too.. we shall take vein by the cojones yet..& missed my partner in crime,
..creepy black van in tact, I hope .. ?? ...dark giggles every time I remember that, uknw!
loves you purrfect, kittyK,
~d
Re. Three times Three
3rd Oct 2015 6:34pm
"Kneeling wide 'neath waning moonlight,
arching in prey..[pray]..Sate..
Smooth marble-veined.. jet phallic stone,
hewn slightly over'shaped.. "
What a wonderful image!!
"..womb taking bulk in sway.
Sacred wand teases tight aura,
tender twirls stretch deep'crave.. "
this was just hot. And you have such a luscious language for it. You really elevate the eroticism for the reader to bring their own to it.
"a pause.. as smokey greens harness the moon..
..wishes granted in arch and swoon..
..purified stone on essence bathed..
.. three times three.. my homage paid.. "
And this ending, you really came together with it. The rhyming, of course. And the ritual in total culminating in the magic number.
Excellent write. Both hot, but also fantastic imagery that is being conjured. Loved this!
arching in prey..[pray]..Sate..
Smooth marble-veined.. jet phallic stone,
hewn slightly over'shaped.. "
What a wonderful image!!
"..womb taking bulk in sway.
Sacred wand teases tight aura,
tender twirls stretch deep'crave.. "
this was just hot. And you have such a luscious language for it. You really elevate the eroticism for the reader to bring their own to it.
"a pause.. as smokey greens harness the moon..
..wishes granted in arch and swoon..
..purified stone on essence bathed..
.. three times three.. my homage paid.. "
And this ending, you really came together with it. The rhyming, of course. And the ritual in total culminating in the magic number.
Excellent write. Both hot, but also fantastic imagery that is being conjured. Loved this!
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Re. Three times Three
4th Oct 2015 11:40am
Ah, greetings major arcana.. my deck to the ground, did this one spill..
must raise the darkness to see the light filter beneath and had sweet times w/this.
the three is divine & I'm warmed fer your time taken..
prone to curtsies every read, darlins.. take care!
~d
must raise the darkness to see the light filter beneath and had sweet times w/this.
the three is divine & I'm warmed fer your time taken..
prone to curtsies every read, darlins.. take care!
~d
Re. Three times Three
14th Sep 2016 11:05pm