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Devils Eden housewife
Eve's daughter in apron and wide skirt Hides apple bottom
And her most delicious dish
Bow tied behind slim waist
Waits primly for her sweet meats
And man
Greets him
Drink in hand
An expert mixologist
Creates the perfect coctail
For her perfect cock
2 parts Grand Marnier
2 parts Ginger beer
Splash of lime juice
Garnish with:
Very secret ingredient
Sugar n salt rim stuck by oooey gooey vaginal slick
Classy Dark 'n stormy
And her mood
🐍 Little does Eve's child know, her lusty duties are being watched and glasses are being raised, celebrating her desires and place in the world. A nightly gathering of would be saints and angels fallen in with sin raise their glasses and cheer "Salute!". Her sex inspired recipe's collected and kept dear in their hearts and hard ons. An orgy like feast of delicacies are ravished, savoring each bite, flavour like no other foods on Earth or in the heaven's. Key ingredient, the succulent female juices coaxed by fruits and the fruits of man.
(inspired by efforts of Candycrier and the regular lusty patrons at Haiku Erotic, may they feast in ecstasy!!)
And her most delicious dish
Bow tied behind slim waist
Waits primly for her sweet meats
And man
Greets him
Drink in hand
An expert mixologist
Creates the perfect coctail
For her perfect cock
2 parts Grand Marnier
2 parts Ginger beer
Splash of lime juice
Garnish with:
Very secret ingredient
Sugar n salt rim stuck by oooey gooey vaginal slick
Classy Dark 'n stormy
And her mood
🐍 Little does Eve's child know, her lusty duties are being watched and glasses are being raised, celebrating her desires and place in the world. A nightly gathering of would be saints and angels fallen in with sin raise their glasses and cheer "Salute!". Her sex inspired recipe's collected and kept dear in their hearts and hard ons. An orgy like feast of delicacies are ravished, savoring each bite, flavour like no other foods on Earth or in the heaven's. Key ingredient, the succulent female juices coaxed by fruits and the fruits of man.
(inspired by efforts of Candycrier and the regular lusty patrons at Haiku Erotic, may they feast in ecstasy!!)
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 27th Sep 2015
| Edited 28th Sep 2015
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Re. Devils Eden housewife
Anonymous
27th Sep 2015 2:16am
Jennifer... this is beautiful.. elegant write... with love..
Dave
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Anonymous
27th Sep 2015 3:03am
I think I could be happy with a lass such as that, and not to forget that scrumptious drink. Oh hell yeah, there's be gonna be some good rocking tonight, y'all.
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27th Sep 2015 12:31pm
Mmmmmmm completely understand why they'd call it:
Garden of Good eatin' lol
Garden of Good eatin' lol
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Re: Re. Devils Eden housewife
Thats great Taryn, inspired by an exchange of comments with Candycrier and the regulars at Haiku Erotic Restaurant.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
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27th Sep 2015 7:12pm
I'm intrigued by this exclusive gathering of saints and angels. Does the orgy stop with dinner? "Little does Eve's child know..." I really like this touch of voyeurism.
"Creates the perfect coctail
For her perfect cock"
You have a knack for wordplay Jennifer. Keep it up, so to speak. Enjoyed this!
"Creates the perfect coctail
For her perfect cock"
You have a knack for wordplay Jennifer. Keep it up, so to speak. Enjoyed this!
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27th Sep 2015 7:22pm
Lol keep it up! A DU member Candycrier
Has a place, Haiku Erotic Resteraunt.
They mix food and erotic arts. He has wonderfully entertaing pieces up down here, showing in Haiku his menu. Wrote the piece for him in thanks for putting my comments on his wall of fame lol.
Check his stuff out.
💋💋💋💋Jennifer
Has a place, Haiku Erotic Resteraunt.
They mix food and erotic arts. He has wonderfully entertaing pieces up down here, showing in Haiku his menu. Wrote the piece for him in thanks for putting my comments on his wall of fame lol.
Check his stuff out.
💋💋💋💋Jennifer
Re. Devils Eden housewife
28th Sep 2015 1:00pm
hmm, so perhaps it wasn't the apple after all... brilliant display of storytelling and suggestive wordplay. who says angels can't be sinners?
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28th Sep 2015 1:27pm
Thank you sweetness. And agreed. Devil was an angel. Writing a succubus piece on lillith right now. This is about the patrons at Haiku erotic, they read my comments on Candycriers piece, saluted me, and are gonna put them on a sampler. Gave him the piece, goin on the wall with celebrity photos and autographs, soooo incredibly flattered. You should check out his last, very unique.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
Re. Devils Eden housewife
28th Sep 2015 11:57pm
Oh this is a cocktail to savor! This kind of liquor would get me drinking again. Oh to be in that audience. You have again conjured heaven with words. :)
John
John
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