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Pole Dancer
starting with a striptease
dancing for you doing the cyclone
my body writhing and twisting for you
down to nothing but a thong
my tits bouncing as I dance
waving my ass in your face
slowly removing my panties
so you can see my slick wet pussy
swollen with desire
now I begin to work the pole for you
rubbing my clit on the hard metal
sliding up and down
imagining it's your thick cock
the thought of it
makes me moan
seducing you until
you request a lap dance
finally close to the object of my desire
the man with a commanding presence
making me creamy as if I was dancing for one
finally we're in private
you begin sucking my tits
as I rub them in your face
making my pussy scream
you stick a thick finger
in my tight hole
I can take it no more
saying this is on the house
your hard cock in my face
I take you in my mouth
deep into my throat
pumping in and out of my mouth
I take your full force because I'm a pro
deep throat my specialty
you tell me "I want to make you moan"
as you rub my cunt I start to cream
bending me over you
enter my tight little ass
moaning in pain and pleasure
I take you all in
pounding me in the ass hard
gripping my hair as you pound
first working the rim in and out
then fucking me deep
I scream in ecstasy
as we're both about to explode
you cum in my ass and I cream
now my ass is sore and numb
I know I was fucked
by a man who knew
what he was doing
Published 24th Sep 2015
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24th Sep 2015 1:13am
Extremely sexy too sexy to touch without getting burned I love it great job on this :-) ;-)
24th Sep 2015 4:40pm
24th Sep 2015 1:18am
Brenda, that is some hot delicious
ink you are putting on your page.
I would like to know what club that
performance is going on at. Thanks for some stunning hot visuals. Creamy sweet.
Keith
ink you are putting on your page.
I would like to know what club that
performance is going on at. Thanks for some stunning hot visuals. Creamy sweet.
Keith
24th Sep 2015 4:41pm
back in my working girl days Keith I only do private performances now ;)
thank you for the sexy comments :)
with love Brenda
thank you for the sexy comments :)
with love Brenda
24th Sep 2015 1:21am
Oh jeezus Bren. Water, gulp.
"I know I was fucked
by a man who knew
what he was doing"
Yeah, aint it grand when that happens. This was rough and raw compared to the romance language you use in some pieces, which i love, but i dig the raw here. Serves its purpose v well.
Hot sticky sweet piece.
💋Jennifer
"I know I was fucked
by a man who knew
what he was doing"
Yeah, aint it grand when that happens. This was rough and raw compared to the romance language you use in some pieces, which i love, but i dig the raw here. Serves its purpose v well.
Hot sticky sweet piece.
💋Jennifer
24th Sep 2015 4:46pm
thank you lovely Jennifer for such a great response making me smile wide :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
24th Sep 2015 1:27am
i'm putting my own soundtrack to this & it's haaaaaawt! ltm
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lordi lord, i shoulda been in bed ages ago & now i'm probably four orgasms [at least] away from sleep & holding you culpable ;)
"I take you all in
pounding me in the ass hard
gripping my hair as you pound
first working the rim in and out
then fucking me deep"
^^^^^^^
does he travel [?] may need to rent the fellow for a while
.... gawds this was fantastic beautiful brenda!!! i agree with miss jen, the rawness was necessary
loveeeeeed
xoxox
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lordi lord, i shoulda been in bed ages ago & now i'm probably four orgasms [at least] away from sleep & holding you culpable ;)
"I take you all in
pounding me in the ass hard
gripping my hair as you pound
first working the rim in and out
then fucking me deep"
^^^^^^^
does he travel [?] may need to rent the fellow for a while
.... gawds this was fantastic beautiful brenda!!! i agree with miss jen, the rawness was necessary
loveeeeeed
xoxox
24th Sep 2015 4:51pm
beautiful Katja love that this pleased you says giggling thank you for such a fantastic response I couldn't hope for better :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
24th Sep 2015 1:46am
that's a prime fantasy for all of us hardcases who hang out in strip joints. watching you spin, Crim...
24th Sep 2015 4:52pm
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24th Sep 2015 2:42am
i had to dunk my phone in a cup of ice water after reading this. it nearly caught flame.
24th Sep 2015 4:54pm
thank you Lord Hades so pleased to get such a response from your darkened mind :)
with love Crimsin
with love Crimsin
Oh fuck yes, Crim! My girl! I have a short story similar to this! Loved it!
<3
<3
24th Sep 2015 4:55pm
thank you graciously lovely lady would love to read yours if you send me the link :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
24th Sep 2015 2:59am
24th Sep 2015 4:56pm
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24th Sep 2015 5:02pm
thank you Johnny for feeling this erotic made me smile wide :)
with love Crimsin
with love Crimsin
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24th Sep 2015 5:05pm
beautiful one you are perfectly able to deliver me too deliver me to great heights of creaminess ;)
thank you for making my night by showing me love on this write :)
love you lady Brenda
thank you for making my night by showing me love on this write :)
love you lady Brenda
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 6:24am
*Dirty*. . .there's actually a strip-club where I live called "Dirty's". . .let's hope the owner doesn't see this piece 'cause he might just try to recruit you. . .Raw erotic ink, Enjoyed, MIss Crim, as always. . .;)
24th Sep 2015 5:06pm
thank you Lady Devlin for making me smile with your comment :)
though this working girl only does private performances these days ;)
with love Crimsin
though this working girl only does private performances these days ;)
with love Crimsin
24th Sep 2015 9:02am
Omff.. Crim de la crème.. so hot!!
believing these poles shud cum standard in every.. um.. room ;)
"dancing for you doing the cyclone"
"the man with a commanding presence"
"I take your full force because I'm a pro"
~ these got me sweetly.. the visions are lovely like wet lace..
"know I was fucked
by a man who knew
what he was doing"
~dark hellz ...this was the best cream of your pen, darlin..
perfect wisdom in the knowing. kitten purrs & *face kisses* cuz I missed you!
~d
believing these poles shud cum standard in every.. um.. room ;)
"dancing for you doing the cyclone"
"the man with a commanding presence"
"I take your full force because I'm a pro"
~ these got me sweetly.. the visions are lovely like wet lace..
"know I was fucked
by a man who knew
what he was doing"
~dark hellz ...this was the best cream of your pen, darlin..
perfect wisdom in the knowing. kitten purrs & *face kisses* cuz I missed you!
~d
24th Sep 2015 5:09pm
lovely d~ missed you too beautiful lady :)
thank you for showing me so much love on this write made my night..
love Brenda/Crimsin :)
thank you for showing me so much love on this write made my night..
love Brenda/Crimsin :)
wow very hot and seductive ink crimsin... i enjoy the sexy visual show in ink :)
24th Sep 2015 6:30pm
24th Sep 2015 6:01pm
very entrancing, amazing visuals, (makes it rain, rather hurricane)... Crim de la Crim does it again
24th Sep 2015 6:31pm
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 7:08pm
Brenda, this is a luscious erotic piece.. very hot indeed.. with love...
Dave
Dave
25th Sep 2015 2:48am
24th Sep 2015 7:50pm
You make it so easy to visualize this seduction Crim. I've never had a lap dance (poor baby!) but your moves are good enough for me. I'm going to get a pole installed front and center right here in my pad. Loved this!
25th Sep 2015 2:54am
25th Sep 2015 00:19am
Dayyuummmnnn!! That pole didn't get as much ass as the guy did I see!! lol mmmmmm yummy fucking
good pussy n ass inking lol
good pussy n ass inking lol
25th Sep 2015 2:57am
thank you Poe so glad you enjoyed ;)
love you visits and sexy thoughts :)
with love Crim
love you visits and sexy thoughts :)
with love Crim
25th Sep 2015 00:19am
Dayyuummmnnn!! That pole didn't get as much ass as the guy did I see!! lol mmmmmm yummy fucking
good pussy n ass inking lol
good pussy n ass inking lol
25th Sep 2015 3:57am
Well damn!!!
This was slippery and hot! I need me a pole. :)
Sexy ink, my dark beauty!
This was slippery and hot! I need me a pole. :)
Sexy ink, my dark beauty!
25th Sep 2015 9:03pm
25th Sep 2015 1:06pm
25th Sep 2015 9:05pm
I couldn't hope for better than that thank you I'm glad you enjoyed :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
25th Sep 2015 3:47pm
your talent for the hot and steamy is just amazing - I need to take a cold shower and lower my blood pressure :-)
25th Sep 2015 9:06pm
