For Sir

I hope the rift is just a hairline crack and will heal.  This is a sweet submission, Brenda, and I imagine your "Sir" will listen.  How could he not?  This is fine, thoughtful writing.  Personally, I would hate to see Crimsin die.  She's a hell raiser but lots of fun.  Excellent work Brenda and Crimsin!

thank you Sir Crow Crimsin won't die her face will emerge hopefully not lashing out at the ones I care for..

with love Crim

nice heartfelt  poem of contrition...

thank you kindly Dean..

with love Crim

Lines weaving amends. Echoes finding their end. Sweet Sin, your voice penetrates the darkness, lovingly. Savors the ink, blue angel

thank you lovely Angel I love your thoughts and visits :)

with love Crim

Really nice Brenda. I think you would make a strong and lovely offering to anyone.
Beautiful write.
💋Jennifer

thank you graciously lovely Jennifer :)

with love Brenda

Lovely 😁
Kind of sounds sad, but in other ways sounds excepting.

thank you DC you made me smile with your thoughts :)

with love Crim

thank you beautiful one for loving the whole me and for such lovely and wise thoughts..

I love you Brenda :)

You being this openly submissive
sounds like a person with a big love filled heart, can't imagine darkness
resides there. :)

the darkness emerges from time to time..

thank you Poe for seeing beauty in my heart with love Crim

"be Brenda to you always  
let Crimsin die a lonely death  
the whore with a hardened vessel"<--- damn! that was badass self-description.

Crim, I absolutely adore how raw you are. Xo
 

thank you Rain for a rocking comment :)

with love Crim

Great job on this poem Brenda I love it keep up the great work you're awesome

thank you Kavik for making me smile you're pretty awesome yourself :)

with love Brenda

I am a fan for life. With deepest respect and love. <3

thank you most graciously you touched my heart lovely lady :)

with love Crim

xoxoxxox

xoxoxo

Miss Crim, Miss Crim. . .I've had that "sir" in my life. . .so I understand the feeling. . .genuine and heartfelt ink, I want to weep with you. . .xoxo, Devlin.

thank you Lady Devlin for a loving comment and relating..

don't worry the hard part of me will emerge when needed :)

with love Crim

oh the things I've said I'd wished I hadn't -

quite a few of my poems, for instance..:)

but this is a beautiful poem, Crim...

thank you kindly Paul for understanding and for a lovely comment :)

with love Crim

Ms Brenda, this was an honest from the heart write. This could never come from a place of darkness.
I believe your heart is full of love. I hope sir can see the beautiful, wonderful person before him.

Keith

thank you Keith for such loving sentiments :)

with love Crim

two lovers in one woman, w/different approaches, but both need love. nice work, Crim & Brenda...

thank you John for understanding both sides of my nature need loving :)

with love Crim

Regret is a horrible thing, but at least you have the option of atonement, enjoy it :)

yes I've atoned thank you for getting that :)

with love Crim

This is the second poem I've read from you and you have done it again. I can't relate to a lot of what females write and i don't know why, but I know every time  I read your words my soul is banging through this body to reach you and give you a hug we can both use.
Fucking thank you for writing and your words are an inspiration to me.

your words reached through the screen.. through the ether waves and touched my deep in my soul I feel you hugging me tightly embracing you right back.. thank you Johnny with deep respect and appreciation you truly made my week..  
   
love Brenda

This "Sir" is a fool for letting a treasure such as you slip from his grasp. This is a heartfelt scribe.

thank you Lord Hades for saying so :)

with love Crimsin

Very well written Crim, I understand both of their needs.... ;)

Gdgurl

thank you graciously lovely lady :)

with love Crim

Brenda, this is pure brilliance.. how your commanding presence bleeds through your words.. just beautifully done.. with love...



Dave

thank you Dave you touched my heart with your comment :)

with love Brenda

great work !

thank you kindly :)

with love Crim