Cheers Fucker

Brenda, very powerful.. the way you weave words, with great command.. i admire the passion in your work.. with love..


Dave

thank you kindly Dave :)

with love Brenda

thank you beautiful one for seeing and embracing all sides of me I love you..

love Brenda

very forceful exposing the soft spots of your soul, keep writing poems like this and you may have to change your name or pic.... love the fierce ending also

thank you Dean for showing love on this write..

you're right I may have to change my avatar or start writing fiercely again..

love Crim

really good, Crim

yes, I've toasted the bastards
many a time...

thank you kindly Paul :)

with love Crim

This is a really tough write and I imagine cathartic.

"so very cruel
though I knew your MO
notoriously known"

Too many enjoy being cruel, or arrogant, and the mystique it might give them as being "notoriously known."  At least you're aware of their MO and can deal with them on your own terms.

"bipolar flipping the script
meds don't fucking work
so fuck it see the bitch in me"

I know how this goes, being bipolar myself.  Have to let that inner bitch out once in awhile for a moment's peace.

I'd go out tonight and raise some hell.  Moving on and having fun might be the best revenge.  Cheers to you too Crim!  Really enjoyed this fierce piece.  

thank you Sir Crow on your insightful comments and showing you love on being bipolar as well..

with love Crim

thank you Gabriel for relating and leaving your thoughts :)

with love Crim

oh..this poem is heartbreaking brenda.  I can relate to verse 2 - how I and most of us feel when writting poetry-you named this feeling -ty.  this guy sounds like a real tool a meanie from birth...throw a drink in his face for me.

thank you Shauna for relating made me giggle at your closing comment :)

with love Brenda

Could be taken in a couple ways...
Not that it diminishes this power, this depth... Awesome spillage lady.

thank you Poe your thoughts are always cherished :)

with love Crim

I can relate with being lonely for I have been and still deal with my rage and hatred of those who hate me and still want me dead great job on this ma'am

thank you Kavik for relating and showing love for this write :)

with love Crim

There has been so much emotion in your last several writes. I have really felt it flowing in the ink. Toast the bastard and move on; I am sure he never deserved you to begin with; you talented lady. Keith

thank you Keith for wise advise sadly I'm an addicted masochist..

with love Brenda

"drowning in yesterday
thoughts of you suffocate
in brackish water"
&
"I'm in a venomous mood
pissing on the page
marking the pain, owning it "
~appreciate hells out of your contrast in moods between the drowning to the pissin..
as my money wud be on you in a pissing contest of any kind w/such fierce beauty.

This whole piece brings the reader into your pov/ mindspace & I say..*bottoms up, darlins ;)
love you Brenda & the power you capture in inklets. plus- title is a wicked cunty smirk..
everly mwahs
~d

thank you lovely d~ I cherish your thoughts made me giggle about the title :)

with love Brenda

"Im in a venomous mood
pissing on the page
marking the pain, owning it

bipolar flipping the script
meds don't fucking work
so fuck it see the bitch in me"

Dig all the many moods of Brenda. Piss it n tell it doll. Great stuff every fuckin time.  A badge wearin member of bpb. "Bi polar bitch." stand back and be very afraid when branded.
💋Jennifer

thank you lovely Jennifer for such beautiful comments..

sending love your way on being bipolar as well does bring the bitch in us at times ;)

with love Brenda

Black leather Like

thank you kindly Poet with love Brenda..

just venting my insanity..

I feel the surging madness as it thrives off your emotive thoughts. Being left alone with the chaos of our minds can be bedeviling. Pulling back the shadows to hug you tight! Adoring you, blue angel

thank you lovely Angel for the love hugs you back..

with love Crim

"cheers fucker"
How about a bit of assistance, lovely lass?
Good riddance, mother-fucker!

I salute your choice, love your voice and cheer your ability to persevere.

you know,
C.

thank you Vegas though he is a friend I was just having a bad manic day..

feeling the love and returning it..

love Brenda

Such powerful venom! Very relateable. I feel it too.

thank you lovely Harlie for relating :)

with love Crim