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Trust Her..
muted life
unable to feel
it seems wrong
to be this way
i need nurturing
understanding
if i prosper
it’s with your grace
i’m talking straight
power of love
moving mountains
with all that i am
it’s passion
burning eternal
keeps it together
writing this today
no need for god
won’t compromise
anything inside
to taste freedom
no restrictions
grab my hand
human nature
trust her..
unable to feel
it seems wrong
to be this way
i need nurturing
understanding
if i prosper
it’s with your grace
i’m talking straight
power of love
moving mountains
with all that i am
it’s passion
burning eternal
keeps it together
writing this today
no need for god
won’t compromise
anything inside
to taste freedom
no restrictions
grab my hand
human nature
trust her..
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Re. Trust Her..
19th Sep 2015 3:54am
Re: Re. Trust Her..
19th Sep 2015 4:01am
Thanks, Brenda.. i'm moved by your kind words.. glad you dig it.. i appreciate the support.. with love..
Dave
Dave
Re. Trust Her..
19th Sep 2015 4:44am
Sometimes it ok to let go and allow trust to take over. Great write, my friend. <3
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Re: Re. Trust Her..
19th Sep 2015 4:56am
Thanks, Mysterious.. glad you liked it.. you know how to make a poet feel important.. love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
Re. Trust Her..
Wow, it's a bit confusing to be honest, are you saying it's time for you to let go and fly,? that you are unhappy with your current life?
Or are you saying trust in her and it will be alright ? But then what is it your tired of,what are you missing inside, feeling loneliness?
Zazzles ...
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Re: Re. Trust Her..
19th Sep 2015 5:01am
Ms. Z.. wonderful question.. maybe all of the above.. but i would say it's about trust.. digging deep, and accepting others at face value.. that we can love, as long as we believe in human nature.. that we all love one another.. hopefully.. thanks for making me think about the meaning.. and your kind words.. love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2015 6:08am
Trust is important, but at some point we have to evaluate if its met and supported.
I think we all come at crossroads at various points in life and end up examining.
I appreciate this truthful write Dave. I"m glad you kept it real.
I think we all come at crossroads at various points in life and end up examining.
I appreciate this truthful write Dave. I"m glad you kept it real.
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Re: Re. Trust Her..
19th Sep 2015 6:17am
Thanks, Rina.. always appreciate your honesty.. i'm trying new things.. and glad you respect me enough to keep it real.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
Re. Trust Her..
20th Sep 2015 4:23pm
"no restrictions
grab my hand
human nature
trust her.."
Great last lines DDave. A beautiful piece penned with intent sweet as honey. But the honesty and unknown leaving it just right on the pallet.. Have to say its refreshing to find doll. A lot of synics down here. Myself sometimes included.
🚬💋Jen
grab my hand
human nature
trust her.."
Great last lines DDave. A beautiful piece penned with intent sweet as honey. But the honesty and unknown leaving it just right on the pallet.. Have to say its refreshing to find doll. A lot of synics down here. Myself sometimes included.
🚬💋Jen
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Re: Re. Trust Her..
20th Sep 2015 4:32pm
Thanks, Jennifer.. so glad you liked this piece.. i appreciate your kind words, and insight.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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