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Scent of Truth
He could sense my love on fire
even before he inhales the smoke
intimacy ablaze trying to suppress intensity
never to inflame, but to keep it burning….
keep him yearning
while observing the sweltering bit of sparkle
adopting his carbonated space.
Lust grabs hold
the need unfold
and all that is needed is
a French kiss to steal my breath,
the only time I’m content with no air.
I can feel his stare,
he can smell my need
succumbing to every single dirty deed
choking on his girth
trying to suck out his seeds, of life....
He gives me life,
every, single, time
our bodies commune in its organic forms
and hush moans slip through parted lips
seducing an atmosphere unrehearsed for our cries.
I cry….
sweet n salty tears decorate my inner thighs
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs,
He’s owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn
tasting each other’s wet fingertips with
the scent of truth still cloaked securely,
knitted to acme on wrinkled satin sheets
soaked with third and fourth comings….
Rain~
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 18th Sep 2015
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 6:53am
"intimacy ablaze trying to suppress intensity
never to inflame, but to keep it burning….
keep him yearning
while observing the sweltering bit of sparkle
adopting his carbonated space. "
I think we all feel this during the moment it's happening. Very visual and quite arousing. I sure did miss your writes.
~Bale
never to inflame, but to keep it burning….
keep him yearning
while observing the sweltering bit of sparkle
adopting his carbonated space. "
I think we all feel this during the moment it's happening. Very visual and quite arousing. I sure did miss your writes.
~Bale
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:06pm
I'd hope we'd all experience this intensity and not just in the moment of love makin' or fuckin'; but to have yearning simmering in you, every second of the day for that special person, well........ :)
Thank you Bale for the pen love...
Thank you Bale for the pen love...
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:21pm
I love your excitement Taryn! :) Thank you for rocking with my verbiage vibe! It's always humbling when other poets can feel and be moved by my ink, especially erotica.
I chuckled @---> "licked lips and let out a lil squeak here ma'lady",... the truest reaction from a woman who loves the finer things in life nestled in her mouth. ;)
I chuckled @---> "licked lips and let out a lil squeak here ma'lady",... the truest reaction from a woman who loves the finer things in life nestled in her mouth. ;)
Re. Scent of Truth
Woman, you are a pyro-poetriac!
Your every word sets my soul ablaze and drowns me in the river of lava flowing from your pen. Let me swim in your words and melt into a molten sea of desire... jj
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:41pm
....you know those types of comments gets next to me, in the most welcoming way, right? Especially from you JJ! :)
Your support has always encouraged me to continue to critique and refine my skills. Thanks darlin'!
Your support has always encouraged me to continue to critique and refine my skills. Thanks darlin'!
Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:29pm
....and I'm so happy you do, Max! :) Thanks for stopping through to give me a read....
Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 9:51am
Oh Rain, You're at it again! Getting my heart rate up and running. I loved this poem particularly:
"sweet n salty tears decorate my inner thighs
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs,
He’s owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn"
Pure perfection my girl!
"sweet n salty tears decorate my inner thighs
mesmerized by the way he dance between my limbs,
He’s owning his rhythm while my body heaves in hymn"
Pure perfection my girl!
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:39pm
lol....I think my goal is well on it's way then Tony, because getting your heart rate up and running, was the first step. :) Glad you had a fav. part! I'm always thrilled to see you and your ink support.
Appreciate ya babe....
Appreciate ya babe....
Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 9:58am
OMFG!!!! Wowzers, n here I thought you were likely
gonna go awhile before incinerating our senses with
your unbridled passions!!! Thank goodness I was wrong!!!
lol whew I def. Need a ciggy or 4! lol n holy momma, that ASS is Da BOOM bomb DIGGITY!!!! lol
gonna go awhile before incinerating our senses with
your unbridled passions!!! Thank goodness I was wrong!!!
lol whew I def. Need a ciggy or 4! lol n holy momma, that ASS is Da BOOM bomb DIGGITY!!!! lol
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:47pm
yeah well, my body and mind was on fire a tad bit, so hey; why not pen it down for you good folks here at DUP... :)
You're the best Rich! I love your pen love for me. Thanks fella...
You're the best Rich! I love your pen love for me. Thanks fella...
Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 4:14pm
A very visually and orally stimulating piece of pomeography you have written here. You had my imagination working overtime.
I bow to your ( intimacy ablaze trying to suppress intensity
never to inflame, but to keep it burning….
keep him yearning ) my favorite part
I bow to your ( intimacy ablaze trying to suppress intensity
never to inflame, but to keep it burning….
keep him yearning ) my favorite part
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 10:53pm
"visually and orally stimulating"<-- - I'll take that sir, I'll take it graciously! :)
Your comment is exactly how I wanted this ink to be experienced! Thank you for the wonderful comment, looking forward to the ink- link....
Your comment is exactly how I wanted this ink to be experienced! Thank you for the wonderful comment, looking forward to the ink- link....
Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 6:12pm
beautiful Rain you've seduced my heart with this tender, sexy erotic..
so many favorite lines lovely Taryn quoted the ones that most moved me..
stunning in it's intimacy..
with love Crim
so many favorite lines lovely Taryn quoted the ones that most moved me..
stunning in it's intimacy..
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 11:07pm
....Crim, I'm pleased to be able to seduce that tender heart of yours. :)
So happy to have you reading me once more, my beautiful dark sexy poetess.
Thank you sweetheart! Xo
So happy to have you reading me once more, my beautiful dark sexy poetess.
Thank you sweetheart! Xo
Re. Scent of Truth
18th Sep 2015 11:11pm
Such a seductive and passionate write.
I miss your poems, they sometimes inspire me to write more erotic poetry.
Keep up the good work.
I miss your poems, they sometimes inspire me to write more erotic poetry.
Keep up the good work.
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
21st Sep 2015 9:26pm
...... hi, MsRocky, thank you for the lovely reply! I'm humbled to know my ink at times, can be inspiring! :)
I appreciate the ink support and RL......Xo
I appreciate the ink support and RL......Xo
Re. Scent of Truth
20th Sep 2015 10:37pm
ahhh ..the act of intimacy magnified through such a skilled quill...the MsRain is a very beautiful and sensual piece of writing..luvin the connection conveyed here...
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
21st Sep 2015 9:28pm
Good to hear my ink can magnify intimacy! ;)
Thanks for the wonderful comment Naajir, coming from you it means a lot.
Thanks for the wonderful comment Naajir, coming from you it means a lot.
Re. Scent of Truth
21st Sep 2015 6:14am
Son-of-a-blistering-hot-bitch!
RR, I love every f'n line.
This leaves me with a scent, knowing the truth, lusting to "steal" your breath, feel you "choking" and smile as your "body heaves in hymn."
These words have provided a rigid handle to firmly grip as I read and appreciate the magic of flesh becoming bone. .. You did that.
xo
C.
RR, I love every f'n line.
This leaves me with a scent, knowing the truth, lusting to "steal" your breath, feel you "choking" and smile as your "body heaves in hymn."
These words have provided a rigid handle to firmly grip as I read and appreciate the magic of flesh becoming bone. .. You did that.
xo
C.
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
21st Sep 2015 9:32pm
"These words have provided a rigid handle to firmly grip"<--I have no idea why that line provided a mouth-watering-image, but it did. ;)
I love your comment Chad! Thanks fella!
I love your comment Chad! Thanks fella!
Re. Scent of Truth
22nd Sep 2015 2:41am
Well well well
So blessed to read words from Hypnotic silky lips. When you lick them we are prisoners, caged into longing desires from your very first breath. Seduced we are with the art you write.
So blessed to read words from Hypnotic silky lips. When you lick them we are prisoners, caged into longing desires from your very first breath. Seduced we are with the art you write.
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 4:23pm
....sensual and beautiful commentary you've left me, G! Love when you come around to inhale my ink!
I'm smiling inside. Thanks luv~
I'm smiling inside. Thanks luv~
Re. Scent of Truth
22nd Sep 2015 12:16pm
Re: Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 4:25pm
hey Chi, great seeing ya! I appreciate the pen love! Xo
Thanks for passing through sweety....
Thanks for passing through sweety....
Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 4:23am
Re: Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 4:29pm
....who me?!
....or the ink?! lol... jokin' jokin' I truly appreciate the wonderful comment Ted! Thanks luv....
....or the ink?! lol... jokin' jokin' I truly appreciate the wonderful comment Ted! Thanks luv....
Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 4:48pm
ya know, no-one does classy erotica the way you do; i'd almost forgotten how sensual & intimate work in your favour...
"he can smell my need
succumbing to every single dirty deed
choking on his girth
trying to suck out his seeds, of life...."
^^^^^^
i mean ffs, you make a blowjoy sound like haute cuisine
... just steller, miss rain, i bow to the queen of erotic ink
xoxox
"he can smell my need
succumbing to every single dirty deed
choking on his girth
trying to suck out his seeds, of life...."
^^^^^^
i mean ffs, you make a blowjoy sound like haute cuisine
... just steller, miss rain, i bow to the queen of erotic ink
xoxox
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
24th Sep 2015 9:41pm
"i mean ffs, you make a blowjoy sound like haute cuisine"<---lmbo, I knew you were a woman who love the art of oral . :)
*blowjoy*<-- they are a joy indeed . ;)
Thank you dancedoll for the smile and support.. xo
*blowjoy*<-- they are a joy indeed . ;)
Thank you dancedoll for the smile and support.. xo
Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 5:35pm
Re: Re. Scent of Truth
24th Sep 2015 9:42pm
Re. Scent of Truth
23rd Sep 2015 11:37pm
This is an incendiary piece of erotica for sure. I dig the every now and then rhyme, fantastical viseral word lay.
Very happy to have checked you out.
🚬💋Jennifer
Very happy to have checked you out.
🚬💋Jennifer
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
24th Sep 2015 9:45pm
...your commentary really warmed my heart, Jen. :)
I'll be search to read more of you...
Thank you for the ink link.....
I'll be search to read more of you...
Thank you for the ink link.....
Re. Scent of Truth
25th Sep 2015 4:53am
Oh my worddd,,
This was incredibly sensual and may I add beautifully written. I was vibing to your flow and all that good stuff :):).. Im in awe right here " seducing an atmosphere unrehearsed for our cries " I blushed so hard lol
I lloovvvee it Rain
This was incredibly sensual and may I add beautifully written. I was vibing to your flow and all that good stuff :):).. Im in awe right here " seducing an atmosphere unrehearsed for our cries " I blushed so hard lol
I lloovvvee it Rain
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
26th Sep 2015 8:10pm
aww darlin', this comment was too sweet!
I'm so pleased it made you blush! Ink is at it's finest when it moves, and I'm happy it moved you just a tad bit... :)
Thank you for the poetic-love and RL....
I'm so pleased it made you blush! Ink is at it's finest when it moves, and I'm happy it moved you just a tad bit... :)
Thank you for the poetic-love and RL....
Re. Scent of Truth
Anonymous
27th Sep 2015 6:46pm
To read your words again leaves me with nothing but smiles, always a pleasure, which is why I've returned. Your images are never off and I find such a real voice beneath the passion. RainC, thank you.
SW
-Constructive wise: work on a couple of your line breaks, break the line at words that force us to capture our breath a bit more, don't end on weak words like "with" and "is" and I also find your use of ellipses a bit much and unneeded, keep two out of the four there.
SW
-Constructive wise: work on a couple of your line breaks, break the line at words that force us to capture our breath a bit more, don't end on weak words like "with" and "is" and I also find your use of ellipses a bit much and unneeded, keep two out of the four there.
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Re: Re. Scent of Truth
27th Sep 2015 9:23pm
:) ....so very happy you are back Spen. I've missed you, your ink and your poetic support and I look forward to our pen-connection.
Per your critique: good stuff! :) I'll work on that! Thanks hun....
Per your critique: good stuff! :) I'll work on that! Thanks hun....