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The voice of suicide
Blade touches her wrist,she wants to meet her end
"Slash deep into your skin if you want to die" I say
For I am the voice in her head
I'm the one making her wish she were dead
"I am in need of a bride in this eternal hell I want to feel you I want to compel"
With bloody hands she smears it across her face
And happily says "fuck the human race"
Watching her bleed Watching her die
I laugh and shout "the time is nigh!"
Take my hand my love,watch how the fire spreads
And we'll forever dance with the dead
"Slash deep into your skin if you want to die" I say
For I am the voice in her head
I'm the one making her wish she were dead
"I am in need of a bride in this eternal hell I want to feel you I want to compel"
With bloody hands she smears it across her face
And happily says "fuck the human race"
Watching her bleed Watching her die
I laugh and shout "the time is nigh!"
Take my hand my love,watch how the fire spreads
And we'll forever dance with the dead
Published 17th Sep 2015
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17th Sep 2015 10:31pm
I feel like the voice of suicide should have been comforting to her, rather than provoking, like a genuinely warm hug to end the pain.
21st Sep 2015 9:18pm
11th Oct 2015 1:30am
~** <3 **~ With all due respect.... I personally feel it's not suicide you seek my friend. But a F'' escape to cure or heal the mental pain your feeling. Your misunderstood, there's nothing wrong with you. I tried cutting as a child, not to kill myself... but.... I summoned a pleasure I didn't understand at the time!!!!! And that was curing the mental pain I was going through. I wanted the pain to go away without killing myself. Cutting has been a cure for me not a suicide attempt. But.... it could lead to accidental suicide to us and to the Foreiner's report suicide!!! Not fair right???? I feel your pain, and remember... Your Not Alone... even though it may seem that way. ~** <3 **~ Lushviliance Veins..........I respect your quote.... but...... I am a cutter for comfort as a child. I am not a suicidal person even though it may seem that way. I hate guns, ropes, poisioning, drugs, burning, biting, strangling ect...... I am a natural cutter for comfort only. Hopefully it will never go too far for anybody's personal comfort zone of healing the present emotional pain that's far worst than self mulitating. Lushviliance Veins Poet
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23rd Nov 2015 10:00pm
Hey man
This poem has nothing to do with me on a personal level
I just wrote what came to mind,so no need to worry :)
This poem has nothing to do with me on a personal level
I just wrote what came to mind,so no need to worry :)
