Lilt

Ms crimson a beautiful write.
Very confusing not knowing what the other thinks. Really not knowing
If it is good or bad. Flowed so smoothly with back and forth emotions. Thank for a beautiful write to end the day. Good nite
Ms Crimsin

Keith

thank you most graciously Keith for the kind comments..

with love Crim

thank you beautiful one for such an uplifting comment and embracing me with your love..

I love you :)

Brenda

Many brutes aren't gifted with the sight to see beyond more than is just before them. It's a dangerous dance when the amour isn't balanced properly. But i know full well the desire to have something that you know is poison to you. Such a wonderful piece, Crim. Delicate yet devious. I really like it.

thank you Sandman though he's only a brute in the way I like and his brand of poison is the kind I like :)

with love Crim

the snake in the garden makes poisonous poetry, Crim. irresistible danger...

thank you John yes the best kind of danger :)

with love Crim

"the more vulnerable I become    
you adored the whore    
can you not see me whole?"    

This is devastating and gorgeous Brenda. You write with the whole you powerful through doll. I cant imagine anyone not seeing and finding you a precious thing.
These words certainly are. I love them.  💋

👊👊👊
Jennifer

thank you beautiful Jennifer for such a loving comment :)

with love Brenda

When you get tender you're very hard NOT to melt over... Sadly beautiful spillage my sweet Crim!

thank you Poe for such sweet sentiments :)

with love Crim

"a snake in the garden of my thoughts  
that I should be weary of    
needing another bite of your venom to be sure" .... Mmm, love this sensuality slipping from your sexy tongue. Seeing the beauty is what makes your lines so intoxicating. Blind eyes could see you kneeling so lovely. - blue angel

thank you lovely Angel for such a sexy alluring comment :)

with love Crim

Great job on this ma'am love it

thank you kindly Sir :)

with love Crim

"can you not see me whole?"
~this is a beautiful honest hurt darlins.. the worthy will See.[You]    

"powerful and intoxicating      
is your strong brew    
masculine and overpowering"
~um, yes this does tempt the taunt ..damn perfectly put too.

I am still just awwed into lipbite from your sexy, sassy end. reminded me of the olden
scary tales, Grim & the like..where lovely vixen sees and knows dangers but curiosity
plus desire makes her need the 'bite to be sure'
 
.. you are a dream of totality Brenda..all-ways & can/shud let the blind do without your radiance
when you deserve gd kneeling toe kisses! said in curtsy ;)
loves you dearly,
~d

thank you lovely d~ for seeing the beauty in me..

he is intoxicating in verse ;)

thank you so much for the love you've shown me and this write :)

love you and cherish your thoughts..

love Brenda

Beautifully done Crimsin! Enjoyed it!! 💕Sissy

thank you most kindly Sissy :)

with love Crim

Brenda, this is so brilliantly beautiful.. and shows off your tender side, with such grace.. with love...



Dave

thank you Dave swimming in the calm waters today :)

with love Brenda

Sounds like your hooked Crim.  You might try weaning yourself off the venom, maybe just a drop or two each day.
Okay, I'll lay off the lame jokes.  This is a rich fantasy, but it's heartbreaking.

"the more vulnerable I become    
you adored the whore    
can you not see me whole?"

He needs to see your tender side.  The whore might be there for fun and thrills, but it's Lady Crim who really counts.  This brute doesn't deserve you!
     

thank you Sir Crow though he's only a brute in the way I like and I love his venom filled verse :)   with love Crim

Maybe he's a King Cobra.  Thanks Crim!

Sir Crow I forgot to thank you for the love you've shown me and insight..

love Crim

You don't need to thank me Crim.  It's a pleasure!  Love you too.

this is why i have cocktails without the tail... half the heartache, but you write it so well, beautiful one
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja you always make me giggle with your clever comments :)

love Brenda

Im a hardcore dark poem lover myself and then I read this one!  The softer tender side of this place makes itself known in beautiful ways. You nailed it here, dear. <3

I was writing hardcore dark writes with diamonddave75 and need to swim in the gentler waters for awhile..

thank you for embracing the tenderness of this write :)

with love Crim

I find this arousing but I am not entirely sure why :-)

beautiful writing baking my noodle (in a good way) :-)

i did not expect to see this side of Crim de La Crim, ah, a mighty lioness concealing a wounded kitten... "tender notes of amour    
lilt, on a tempest wind " what a beautiful beginning!

thank you Dean for the beautiful comments feeling vulnerable without my cocaine armor..

with love Crim

Very beautifully written

thank you kindly Sir :)

with love Crim

"with your denial    
of my presence    
I've become invisible"

How terribly sad...

I often base my self worth on the opinions and actions of others. Doing my best to stop that pointless shit. Hope you find your identity, regardless of anyone else.

thank you lovely Harlie for words of wisdom :)

with love Crim

'needing another bite of your venom to be sure'

I know that feeling of justifying to yourself why you keep going back. I really enjoyed reading this piece.

thank you for relating and welcome to du :)

with love Crim