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Burn
Try as you might you'll never win
Stuck in this trap called life
You try to do all the right things
Who knows what that is anyway?
You try to be the people pleaser
No one really cares
You just want someone to help you
It's like you're not really there
There is no help for you
This is all you're going to get
We just sit to watch you burn!
We want to watch you burn!
We're going to see you burn!
You burn.
We all live to see you fall
We all pray that you burn
We thrive on your suffering
Everyone enjoys a failure
We all see what's coming
Everyone but you, that is
You just want someone to help you
To us you're not really there
There is no help for you
This is all you're going to get
We just sit to watch you fall!
We want to see you fall!
We're going to watch you fall!!!
Everytime you turn around you're wrong
You burn
You find yourself misjudging everyone
You fall
This is what we wanted to see
You burn
This is what we helped cause
You fall, You burn
We want to watch you burn!
We want to see you fall!
Watch you burn!
See you fall!
You fall
You fall, BURNT!!!
Just to let everyone know this is a metal song. Screaming and everything included and yes I have performed it before. I love it. I know it could be better but for my very first song I have ever written I think it's pretty good. Just felt like sharing.
Stuck in this trap called life
You try to do all the right things
Who knows what that is anyway?
You try to be the people pleaser
No one really cares
You just want someone to help you
It's like you're not really there
There is no help for you
This is all you're going to get
We just sit to watch you burn!
We want to watch you burn!
We're going to see you burn!
You burn.
We all live to see you fall
We all pray that you burn
We thrive on your suffering
Everyone enjoys a failure
We all see what's coming
Everyone but you, that is
You just want someone to help you
To us you're not really there
There is no help for you
This is all you're going to get
We just sit to watch you fall!
We want to see you fall!
We're going to watch you fall!!!
Everytime you turn around you're wrong
You burn
You find yourself misjudging everyone
You fall
This is what we wanted to see
You burn
This is what we helped cause
You fall, You burn
We want to watch you burn!
We want to see you fall!
Watch you burn!
See you fall!
You fall
You fall, BURNT!!!
Just to let everyone know this is a metal song. Screaming and everything included and yes I have performed it before. I love it. I know it could be better but for my very first song I have ever written I think it's pretty good. Just felt like sharing.
Published 10th Jun 2011
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10th Jun 2011 5:20am
I am thinking about re-writing this song. I'm not sure yet but as my very first song i wanted other people to read it an see what you think. The whole thing is not all screaming. Just mainly the parts with the exclamation points. Either way I had a lot of fun singing this for a band and they enjoyed it too. I don't look like I"m capable of the kind of thing I did with this song and all that. considering the volume and the screaming of the song and that I'm nto that big. But it was a lot of fun and I loved it. Just let me know what you think if you read this song. Thanks!
