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The Copulating Stars
I grabbed the back of her head
And fucked her mouth.
She sucked my cock
Until I came deep in her throat!
………………………….and then her soft eyes
Stared down into my heart
Beckoning towards me
Pulled by the magnetic impulse
Her arms blanket me in a comfort
Of plush velvet
and cottony warmth
Running the orgasmic elation through
All the pores in my body
Until our lips met
And parted to join our tongues
Commingle my heat with our salivacious unity
As we lay back together
Her head resting on my chest
Opening the skies
To see the spatial harmony
Of the cosmic dance
To reminisce
And watch the universe fuck
And fucked her mouth.
She sucked my cock
Until I came deep in her throat!
………………………….and then her soft eyes
Stared down into my heart
Beckoning towards me
Pulled by the magnetic impulse
Her arms blanket me in a comfort
Of plush velvet
and cottony warmth
Running the orgasmic elation through
All the pores in my body
Until our lips met
And parted to join our tongues
Commingle my heat with our salivacious unity
As we lay back together
Her head resting on my chest
Opening the skies
To see the spatial harmony
Of the cosmic dance
To reminisce
And watch the universe fuck
Published 8th Sep 2015
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8th Sep 2015 7:21pm
Sounds like you're projecting a bit DPW, but why the hell not? You've turned stargazing into voyeurism. Now I suppose you'll be coming up with your own version of the Big Bang Theory. Can't wait! Meanwhile, I enjoyed your cosmic erotic!
8th Sep 2015 9:08pm
Maybe a little. But this was about contrasting experiences. But yes, I did turn stargazing into voyeurism without realizing it. I like that idea. But I already have a Big Bang Theory. Its quite simple. God gets laid and blows his load into mother earth. Haha. I am glad you enjoyed this. I may just make something more of that.
9th Sep 2015 4:09am
Oh- beautiful bows to your title sweetie! Of copulation and in sharp contrast..
I sooo appreciate the hard contrasting "get her done" here: "I grabbed the back of her head /And fucked her mouth."
and then the mesh and softer beauty you cosmically weave into something deeper, More....
with this ~~> "...and then her soft eyes/ Stared down into my heart" ~*swooning dammit!
and here..
"Her head resting on my chest
Opening the skies
To see the spatial harmony
Of the cosmic dance
To reminisce
And watch the universe fuck"
~my fav softer lines [that u still sneak the F-word into/smirk] but the peace here is a great capture.
seems nothing can go wrong when unity involves the cosmos! agrees w/Crow on "voyeurism" of the stars..
lovely squeaks & drip to your brilliant sexy stellarium gazes,
~d
I sooo appreciate the hard contrasting "get her done" here: "I grabbed the back of her head /And fucked her mouth."
and then the mesh and softer beauty you cosmically weave into something deeper, More....
with this ~~> "...and then her soft eyes/ Stared down into my heart" ~*swooning dammit!
and here..
"Her head resting on my chest
Opening the skies
To see the spatial harmony
Of the cosmic dance
To reminisce
And watch the universe fuck"
~my fav softer lines [that u still sneak the F-word into/smirk] but the peace here is a great capture.
seems nothing can go wrong when unity involves the cosmos! agrees w/Crow on "voyeurism" of the stars..
lovely squeaks & drip to your brilliant sexy stellarium gazes,
~d
11th Sep 2015 2:09pm
I had a gut feeling you would like this one ;)
Happy you appreciate that stark contrast - the hard to the soft.
Hehe. I for some reason felt the need to sneak in the word Fuck. And you know, the reason being is to not misinterpret any airy-fairy psychedelic new age experience and realize that nature fucks (scientists call it creation, or reproduction). Plain and simple m'dear.
Thanks for dripping your pen on my pages.
Happy you appreciate that stark contrast - the hard to the soft.
Hehe. I for some reason felt the need to sneak in the word Fuck. And you know, the reason being is to not misinterpret any airy-fairy psychedelic new age experience and realize that nature fucks (scientists call it creation, or reproduction). Plain and simple m'dear.
Thanks for dripping your pen on my pages.
10th Sep 2015 00:24am
Only recently have I began to see eroticism in the heavens. You gracefully capture such thoughts and then some here. For some reason I hear, was it Roger Rabbit?, "I see stars..." here...lol. Great view you have, and even more beautiful shared. :) Enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
11th Sep 2015 2:14pm
Some say that there is eroticism in every moment. An orgasm to be had from simple mundane tasks. No, I am not talking one where we are in a state of uncontrollable bliss. Just one where the senses are being tickled into awareness.
Is that Roger Rabbit? I had not thought of it when I wrote it. But reading it, I could see where you got it. But I would hazard a guess, if my unconscious would pull anything out, it would be from 2001: A Space Odyssey when Bowman says, "My God! It's full of stars!"
Thank you for the read and comment. Much appreciated.
Is that Roger Rabbit? I had not thought of it when I wrote it. But reading it, I could see where you got it. But I would hazard a guess, if my unconscious would pull anything out, it would be from 2001: A Space Odyssey when Bowman says, "My God! It's full of stars!"
Thank you for the read and comment. Much appreciated.
