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The Graceful Bed
Catch the Cuervo as it pours
Just two fingers for lost face
Then listen to the local whores
As they sing "Amazing Grace"
No more whines of "Where did I go wrong?"
Or attempts to raise the dead
I'll just kick back and listen to that song
Until they drag me off to bed.
Just two fingers for lost face
Then listen to the local whores
As they sing "Amazing Grace"
No more whines of "Where did I go wrong?"
Or attempts to raise the dead
I'll just kick back and listen to that song
Until they drag me off to bed.
Published 6th Sep 2015
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6th Sep 2015 6:56pm
Hah...this has a lot of kick for being a shorty... One of those dynamite comes in small peackages things I guess.
"Just two fingers for lost face "
Great line that...so there drinkin to it eith you.
Whole last stanza a more than graceful ending... I enviously question why I never had the grace to stop whining...and trying to resurrect things better left alone. Mayhap I learned something reading this. Enjoyed.
Michael
"Just two fingers for lost face "
Great line that...so there drinkin to it eith you.
Whole last stanza a more than graceful ending... I enviously question why I never had the grace to stop whining...and trying to resurrect things better left alone. Mayhap I learned something reading this. Enjoyed.
Michael
6th Sep 2015 8:22pm
Thanks Michael. I try to minimize the whining. Sometimes a little fury gets the point across.
6th Sep 2015 7:36pm
6th Sep 2015 8:24pm
6th Sep 2015 8:05pm
I also agree that Just 2 fingers for lost face is an awesome line. Youd be fun to go out with oh my! :)
6th Sep 2015 8:20pm
I guess I have my moments. You could probably drink me under the table. Thanks Lady!
7th Sep 2015 1:17am
6th Sep 2015 9:56pm
I am enjoying your graceful[prideful] moods of 'kick back and relax'.. creates a great soul balm & tempts me to light my
"fuck it all" candle and just chill..
"Catch the Cuervo as it pours
Just two fingers for lost face"
~I get smiles whenever there is an ode of any kind to Cuervo, as I'd write prescriptions fer it- were I the doctor ;)
Label wud read..."Take for: remembering, forgetting, life fuck-alls and Just 'cuz's." lol.
Absolutely great capture in two fab lines!
"No more whines of "Where did I go wrong?"
Or attempts to raise the dead"
~your 'no more raising the dead then drag off to bed'.. sounds a solid sexy solution.
Enjoyed the very serious subject matters lying deeper within these lines, sir Crow of keen pen..
be well m'friend, shinin' smiles on ur day & cuervo tips your way..
~d
"fuck it all" candle and just chill..
"Catch the Cuervo as it pours
Just two fingers for lost face"
~I get smiles whenever there is an ode of any kind to Cuervo, as I'd write prescriptions fer it- were I the doctor ;)
Label wud read..."Take for: remembering, forgetting, life fuck-alls and Just 'cuz's." lol.
Absolutely great capture in two fab lines!
"No more whines of "Where did I go wrong?"
Or attempts to raise the dead"
~your 'no more raising the dead then drag off to bed'.. sounds a solid sexy solution.
Enjoyed the very serious subject matters lying deeper within these lines, sir Crow of keen pen..
be well m'friend, shinin' smiles on ur day & cuervo tips your way..
~d
7th Sep 2015 1:30am
a man of grace & good taste in tequila ^.^
really epic lines throughout... i'm also partial to "Just two fingers for lost face" damn brilliant
xoxox
really epic lines throughout... i'm also partial to "Just two fingers for lost face" damn brilliant
xoxox
7th Sep 2015 7:19am
7th Sep 2015 7:51am
7th Sep 2015 8:37am
Sounds like a Friday night at the bar but I would have too say.( Catch the Cuervo as it pours Just two fingers then two more for lost face )
Nicely written
Nicely written
7th Sep 2015 3:57pm
The graceful whore. Love her. They are 100% yours without question, until the time has expired. But no allusions to anything more. Excellent rhyming here in the double stanzas. Well done, Crow.
