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Red Wedding
Enigma Rose isn't much for manners
But always comes dressed to kill
She files her teeth for the sweetest smile
And her nails to leave a few scars
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Enigma kicks some serious ass
But has a taste for both cock and cunt
She'll take what she can get
And kill what she can't
A little something for Kali
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox
First a kiss for Enigma's knife
On bended knee with a ring
Then a request that she'll be his wife
His heart pierced when she begins to sing.
But always comes dressed to kill
She files her teeth for the sweetest smile
And her nails to leave a few scars
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Enigma kicks some serious ass
But has a taste for both cock and cunt
She'll take what she can get
And kill what she can't
A little something for Kali
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox
First a kiss for Enigma's knife
On bended knee with a ring
Then a request that she'll be his wife
His heart pierced when she begins to sing.
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Re. Red Wedding
5th Sep 2015 5:17pm
love your title here Sir Crow.. red screamed ER=emergency room to me at first, as was an acronym used
when dispatching those 911 calls.. So still picturing wounds from your darling E.R. of sharp teeth and claw.
"First a kiss for Enigma's knife
On bended knee with a ring
Then a request that she'll be his wife
His heart pierced when she begins to sing."
~siren song and red rose-laced cringing smacks my brain here. I can only get more & more fond of your
gal w/smooth-smooth flow like this. leaves one feeling the awe of such a well layered vixen..
enjoyed the hot taunt of sinister lure.. straight from my fav Crow! yeps & surely..
so.. did he/cud he.. um.. least get the ring back? ...*toe curlin giggles
have a great day m'dear ;)
~d
when dispatching those 911 calls.. So still picturing wounds from your darling E.R. of sharp teeth and claw.
"First a kiss for Enigma's knife
On bended knee with a ring
Then a request that she'll be his wife
His heart pierced when she begins to sing."
~siren song and red rose-laced cringing smacks my brain here. I can only get more & more fond of your
gal w/smooth-smooth flow like this. leaves one feeling the awe of such a well layered vixen..
enjoyed the hot taunt of sinister lure.. straight from my fav Crow! yeps & surely..
so.. did he/cud he.. um.. least get the ring back? ...*toe curlin giggles
have a great day m'dear ;)
~d
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
5th Sep 2015 6:02pm
Yes the "E.R." could be Emergency Room of Enigma Rose, or both. And her song? "Born Under A Bad Sign" of course. Thanks Darksighs!
Re. Red Wedding
5th Sep 2015 5:40pm
Enigma Rose isn't much for manners
But always comes dressed to kill
She files her teeth for the sweetest smile
And her nails to leave a few scars ""
Like D, thought ER but would work somehow in double meaning. Because of the decription of dessed to "kill" the images of your bite and claw marks lol great!
This decription, priceless. The character you created in her was Truely unique, and skillfully done.
"His heart pierced when she begins to sing."
Famous last lines, this was it.
Loved loved Crow. Every time i see something of yours, cant wait to sink MY teeth in you, so to speak lol
🌹Jen
But always comes dressed to kill
She files her teeth for the sweetest smile
And her nails to leave a few scars ""
Like D, thought ER but would work somehow in double meaning. Because of the decription of dessed to "kill" the images of your bite and claw marks lol great!
This decription, priceless. The character you created in her was Truely unique, and skillfully done.
"His heart pierced when she begins to sing."
Famous last lines, this was it.
Loved loved Crow. Every time i see something of yours, cant wait to sink MY teeth in you, so to speak lol
🌹Jen
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
5th Sep 2015 6:06pm
Thank you Jen! Enigma Rose is a character who appears in my work occasionally. Been a while, though. "Bleeding Vows" is another of her adventures. And "Enigma Travels"....
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5th Sep 2015 6:30pm
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 8:28pm
Thanks Taryn! Enigma's been missing in action for awhile. But she's made her return, and I can feel her burn. Yikes!
Re. Red Wedding
5th Sep 2015 8:39pm
Sir Crow love the ever blood lusting Enigma Rose
a wicked erotic excellent ;)
with love Crim
a wicked erotic excellent ;)
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 8:32pm
She does get a little bloodthirsty, doesn't she? It's usually for good reason. A driven vigilante can only take so much! Thanks Crim!
Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 00:38am
Enigma Rose isn't much for manners
But always comes dressed to kill
She files her teeth for the sweetest smile
And her nails to leave a few scars
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Ya see, this is why I love your mind.
You are such an great writer Crow I love the words and way in which you choose use the and express ur thoughts.
I loved this !!!
in the list!!
Mwazazzles!
Jackie xoxoxo
But always comes dressed to kill
She files her teeth for the sweetest smile
And her nails to leave a few scars
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Ya see, this is why I love your mind.
You are such an great writer Crow I love the words and way in which you choose use the and express ur thoughts.
I loved this !!!
in the list!!
Mwazazzles!
Jackie xoxoxo
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 8:34pm
Thanks Jackie! And thanks for the list entry! This was fun to write. Anything with Enigma usually is.
Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 00:41am
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
Kali: I rather adore this reference. ;-*
You skillfully elicit the darkly erotic here and your love affair with danger is tantalizingly apparent. ;-*
You are exceedingly adroit at drawing us into this arousal with you, causing us to desire this red annihilation with you, seek out our own blissfully pained self-immolation...
How divinely you write, luv! ;-*
Kali: I rather adore this reference. ;-*
You skillfully elicit the darkly erotic here and your love affair with danger is tantalizingly apparent. ;-*
You are exceedingly adroit at drawing us into this arousal with you, causing us to desire this red annihilation with you, seek out our own blissfully pained self-immolation...
How divinely you write, luv! ;-*
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 8:39pm
Thank you Savaja! I thought I'd throw in Kali, although I don't know much about her historically. There was the thugee sect in India, and reputed blood sacrifices here and there, unless I'm mistaken. I'm taking it easy on the self-immolation for fear of burning out. Thanks again!
Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 1:07am
You big tease! Left me craving more...Loved this. Made me wish for cooler days and even darker nights! :)
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 8:41pm
Ha! Didn't mean to leave you panting for more. You're a tough lady to satisfy, if seems. I'll definitely keep trying! Thank you Lady!
Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 7:00pm
well thank shiva this wasn't a repeat of g.r.r.m's red wedding; don't think i could read that again lol
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"she files her teeth"
^^^^^
i love that image, lord, it just screams danger (the best kind)
awesome write crowman
xoxox
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"she files her teeth"
^^^^^
i love that image, lord, it just screams danger (the best kind)
awesome write crowman
xoxox
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Re: Re. Red Wedding
6th Sep 2015 8:46pm
I haven't heard of that other red wedding. Is that another one of the same title?
Enigma practices her own lethal versions of fashion. Every move she makes, another chance she takes. Thanks Katja!
Enigma practices her own lethal versions of fashion. Every move she makes, another chance she takes. Thanks Katja!
Re. Red Wedding
7th Sep 2015 1:51am
Nicely written poem
First a kiss for Enigma's knife
On bended knee with a ring
Then a request that she'll be his wife
His heart pierced when she begins to sing.
Love this line
First a kiss for Enigma's knife
On bended knee with a ring
Then a request that she'll be his wife
His heart pierced when she begins to sing.
Love this line
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Re. Red Wedding
9th Sep 2015 3:26am
"Enigma kicks some serious ass
But has a taste for both cock and cunt
She'll take what she can get
And kill what she can't
A little something for Kali "
I like this little tribute to the Goddess of Destruction. Enigma puzzles us all as to what she wants. Devours everything in her wake, I imagine. How cunty of her. Which is probably why we love her.
But has a taste for both cock and cunt
She'll take what she can get
And kill what she can't
A little something for Kali "
I like this little tribute to the Goddess of Destruction. Enigma puzzles us all as to what she wants. Devours everything in her wake, I imagine. How cunty of her. Which is probably why we love her.
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Re. Red Wedding
12th Sep 2015 6:48pm
I am not sure if you know this or not
...but.. this is freaking hot, wow you are
an amazingly interesting man.
Where can I find more of her, have
fallen in love I think.. lol, no, no seriously
It's thriller, it's highly erotique..it's it's
classy & deadly sensual..very tasteful,
smoothly edgy as heck too
geesh.. ok ok you always capture me
-Howlings
...but.. this is freaking hot, wow you are
an amazingly interesting man.
Where can I find more of her, have
fallen in love I think.. lol, no, no seriously
It's thriller, it's highly erotique..it's it's
classy & deadly sensual..very tasteful,
smoothly edgy as heck too
geesh.. ok ok you always capture me
-Howlings
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