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Leaving alone
drizzles on a black shirt
tending an eerie grey evening
haunted by memories
laughter and fun
now desolated
he wants to run
from the sunshine
grief
a sound not echoed
just a few regrets
coalescing into pain
a dripping faucet
drumming like a thunderous
waterfall
it darkens his evening
as he thinks of her
an aura of magenta
around a dead rose
raindrops
falling on his head
distant thunder storms
break in the sky
and he cries
for all that pass away.
tending an eerie grey evening
haunted by memories
laughter and fun
now desolated
he wants to run
from the sunshine
grief
a sound not echoed
just a few regrets
coalescing into pain
a dripping faucet
drumming like a thunderous
waterfall
it darkens his evening
as he thinks of her
an aura of magenta
around a dead rose
raindrops
falling on his head
distant thunder storms
break in the sky
and he cries
for all that pass away.
Published 5th Sep 2015
| Edited 7th Sep 2015
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5th Sep 2015 5:12pm
This really sets a mood for melancholy, Grace.
" raindrops
falling on his head
distant thunder storms
break in the sky
and he cries
for all that pass away."
I'm in awe of these lines. Fine work!
" raindrops
falling on his head
distant thunder storms
break in the sky
and he cries
for all that pass away."
I'm in awe of these lines. Fine work!
6th Sep 2015 4:19am
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