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Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
His heart is an open experience
My christening words polish
Without a scheduled delivery:
A Sacred Contract of healing.
My presence heralds Winter fuel;
A duel-heritage disappearing
Between blankets of vanishing
Mountains until the cruelest month.
The North face of Love resides in
Accepting the body and blood of this;
The deep side of the South remains
A Sacred Contract between twins.
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Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
24th Aug 2015 9:56pm
Oh sweetheart, this is juuuust right for you. A bunch of perfect.
Between blankets of vanishing mountans until the cruelest month.
Blow me away.
🚬💋J
Between blankets of vanishing mountans until the cruelest month.
Blow me away.
🚬💋J
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
27th Aug 2015 2:51pm
Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
24th Aug 2015 10:36pm
a paradoxical pair, perhaps,
but intimately related...
but if you continue to write poetry
of such high quality
I may start hectoring you
for a book..:)
but intimately related...
but if you continue to write poetry
of such high quality
I may start hectoring you
for a book..:)
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
27th Aug 2015 2:51pm
Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
24th Aug 2015 11:53pm
*His heart is an open experience...a beautiful line as well as a beautiful and liberating thought. Your poem A. is so spiritual, so full of love and I also read a forgiveness. You are amazing.
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
27th Aug 2015 2:53pm
Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
25th Aug 2015 1:50am
"My christening words polish
Without a scheduled delivery:
A Sacred Contract of healing."
Much can be read into the these very true words... is enough to take them at face value here I think. :)
Last stanza is a killer... seeing the north side as the up and up one we present, and many applicable faces to the south side. Never been a big fan of religion so that's about as much as I can offer you here on this very well put together piece. Much enjoyed read.
Michael
Without a scheduled delivery:
A Sacred Contract of healing."
Much can be read into the these very true words... is enough to take them at face value here I think. :)
Last stanza is a killer... seeing the north side as the up and up one we present, and many applicable faces to the south side. Never been a big fan of religion so that's about as much as I can offer you here on this very well put together piece. Much enjoyed read.
Michael
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
27th Aug 2015 2:54pm
Thank you, Michael. I always enjoy reading your responses. That you were able to enjoy despite your stated lack of religious knowledge shows an open mind and heart willing to entertain and explore all possibilities that are poetry, from all depths of heart.
Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
29th Aug 2015 10:46pm
"My presence heralds Winter fuel;"... this speaks volumes when knowing the ups & downs
of winter vs summer fuel. this stanza spoke to me so largely.. you do so in these spiritual
healings each time. ty!
"The North face of Love resides in
Accepting the body and blood of this;
The dark side of the South remains
A Sacred Contract between twins."
~few takes here, one being the sensing of the south/body set being the physical joining vs
the north/mind being only spiritual.
Always an array of treasured healing possibles. enjoying them all, as well as your poetry form here, sweetie!
~d
of winter vs summer fuel. this stanza spoke to me so largely.. you do so in these spiritual
healings each time. ty!
"The North face of Love resides in
Accepting the body and blood of this;
The dark side of the South remains
A Sacred Contract between twins."
~few takes here, one being the sensing of the south/body set being the physical joining vs
the north/mind being only spiritual.
Always an array of treasured healing possibles. enjoying them all, as well as your poetry form here, sweetie!
~d
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
29th Aug 2015 11:50pm
Thank you, my darksighing sister. Full Moon blessings to you tonight. We will bask under the same light though miles apart.
Re. Sacred Contracts III: Holy Communion
5th Mar 2017 4:05am
I really enjoy these Sacred Contracts in particular amongst your beautiful works.
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