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The Summer Days Of Madness
the crazy clock
tics backwards
transported in time
to the days of insanity
melancholy thoughts the catalyst
a place of forgetting
sanctuary of the mind
where magic exists
demons casting in my favor
where I witnessed royal courtesans
dancing amongst the clouds
to hip hop songs like Suga, Suga by Baby Bash
Lucifer is hilarious
when in the mood
quite the trickster though
telling me secrets
not heard by most humans
whispered in demonic code through the radio
making me wear the sun as a halo
walking the summer streets
wearing a see through blouse no bra
the uniform picked out for me that day
by my fickle lover
who adored luring men to my bed chamber
seducers who I fled from
too paranoid thinking they were wraiths in disguise
seeking to suck out my soul
my mind reverts to the days of madness
when I was a Goddess
the days when I was anything but ordinary
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Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
Anonymous
21st Aug 2015 5:21pm
crim,
you are anything but ordinary! Reveling in your summer madness ;-)
tornado
you are anything but ordinary! Reveling in your summer madness ;-)
tornado
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21st Aug 2015 5:36pm
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 6:01pm
A tragedic, dark story heeped with the reality of a life few understand
or survive... such an amazing storyteller you are my friend
or survive... such an amazing storyteller you are my friend
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 6:15pm
Poe it may seem odd but I miss those days..
thank you my friend your visits are cherished :)
with love Crim
thank you my friend your visits are cherished :)
with love Crim
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 6:06pm
You're still a Goddess, Crim, wielding one powerful imagination. You're well rid of those soul-sucking seducers. Summertime, and the living is easy. Lucifer telling you to wear the sun as a halo and a see-through blouse sounds like good advice, for once. Love to see that!
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21st Aug 2015 6:17pm
thank you Sir Crow you made me giggle with your comment about my attire ;)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 7:16pm
meds ruin all the fun, don't they [?]
this is really poignant brenda, gave me chills
this is really poignant brenda, gave me chills
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 7:26pm
yeah damn meds ruin things "pouts"
thank you beautiful Katja for understanding this write..
love Brenda
thank you beautiful Katja for understanding this write..
love Brenda
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 8:18pm
My mind reverts to the days of madness
When i was a goddess
And i was anything but ordinary
Greatest fear, being ordinary sweet
Lovely lady of beauty in sex 💋
When i was a goddess
And i was anything but ordinary
Greatest fear, being ordinary sweet
Lovely lady of beauty in sex 💋
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 3:11pm
thank you lovely Jennifer for making me smile with your beautiful comment :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
Anonymous
21st Aug 2015 9:02pm
Brenda, truly loved this.. outstanding ink.. with love, and respect...
Dave
Dave
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22nd Aug 2015 3:12pm
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 10:14pm
I've been a stranger to commenting for a while. This is a profound and wonderful piece Crim. Great expression. :)
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 3:13pm
thank you Magdalena for visiting me and leaving such loving thoughts..
with love Crim :)
with love Crim :)
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 10:15pm
Oh yes, Dear Crim...this poem is so you...A Goddess from another time. Adored by men others feared. *telling me secrets not heard by humans...making me wear the sun as a halo ... and you do so well dear. Always a pleasure reading you, Shauna
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22nd Aug 2015 3:15pm
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
21st Aug 2015 10:37pm
"my mind reverts to the days of madness
when I was a Goddess;
the days when I was anything but ordinary,"
I'd say Honestly that Your mind doesn't
have to revert back to far Beautiful Brenda
to the days when You were a Goddess as
I do Vehemently still Imagine You as the
physical embodiment of a Goddess.
Your scribes are written with the skill and
crafty design of a woman within Whom flows
the Daemonic Influence of an Masterful
Oracle.
Everything You write demands Obeisance.
Excellence Penned on Your page for Us to Revel in... Pan; LyricofAngst/Dantalion
when I was a Goddess;
the days when I was anything but ordinary,"
I'd say Honestly that Your mind doesn't
have to revert back to far Beautiful Brenda
to the days when You were a Goddess as
I do Vehemently still Imagine You as the
physical embodiment of a Goddess.
Your scribes are written with the skill and
crafty design of a woman within Whom flows
the Daemonic Influence of an Masterful
Oracle.
Everything You write demands Obeisance.
Excellence Penned on Your page for Us to Revel in... Pan; LyricofAngst/Dantalion
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 3:17pm
dearest Pan a better compliment or comment I can't think of..
thank you with my whole heart for making my day..
with love Brenda
thank you with my whole heart for making my day..
with love Brenda
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 3:21pm
beautiful Taryn you and Pan have me blushing..
that you would see me in such a way touches my heart deeply..
thank you for the love you show me lovely one..
love Brenda :)
that you would see me in such a way touches my heart deeply..
thank you for the love you show me lovely one..
love Brenda :)
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 2:36am
now that is something to strive for: be anything, be anything but ordinary. watching you from the dark doorways, Crim, in that tempting blouse...
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 3:22pm
I will continue to strive John..
thank you for making me giggle :)
watching from the doorway ;)
with love Crim
thank you for making me giggle :)
watching from the doorway ;)
with love Crim
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 9:42am
"the crazy clock
tics backwards
transported in time"
~I sweetly beg mine Goddess for this one.. at your feet m'lady ;)
"making me wear the sun as a halo
walking the summer streets
wearing a see through blouse no bra"
~read in sultry Crim tones.. this puts me back at ur feet in different ways.. eg. Powerful pen gf!
Ordinary never.. this just shines and last lines read as a gorgeous epitaph. luvluvd.
~d
tics backwards
transported in time"
~I sweetly beg mine Goddess for this one.. at your feet m'lady ;)
"making me wear the sun as a halo
walking the summer streets
wearing a see through blouse no bra"
~read in sultry Crim tones.. this puts me back at ur feet in different ways.. eg. Powerful pen gf!
Ordinary never.. this just shines and last lines read as a gorgeous epitaph. luvluvd.
~d
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
22nd Aug 2015 3:25pm
lovely d~ I always look forward to your visits..
you always make me smile..
thank you for the gorgeous comments..
with love Crim :)
you always make me smile..
thank you for the gorgeous comments..
with love Crim :)
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2015 8:51pm
Sexy Crim......you will always be a Goddess......you're too awesome to be ordinary......luvin this piece......xo :)
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23rd Aug 2015 4:43pm
Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
23rd Aug 2015 2:24am
Let's get one thing fucking straight, little lass. Lovely and extraordinary, you are.
Ordinary, you are not!
Understood?
Good. I'm glad that's settled. :)
Step outside, feel the warm breeze as it carries what I'm sending you.
you know,
C.
Ordinary, you are not!
Understood?
Good. I'm glad that's settled. :)
Step outside, feel the warm breeze as it carries what I'm sending you.
you know,
C.
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Re: Re. The Summer Days Of Madness
23rd Aug 2015 4:41pm
thank you Chad feeling the warm breeze caressing my skin now :)
love your awesome comment..
with love Brenda
love your awesome comment..
with love Brenda